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Dreams of Home Chapter 34

🕑 Added 2023-08-15 15:49:36 +0000 UTC

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Steele Armstrong

Good chapter!

Keeperofthevoid

I really think it might be better if Harry never tells James he is his son tbh. His mind already seems to be changing to associate James as his cousin. Honestly Harry being there has already changed James into a different person in some ways.

SilverMugs

I like that he is not just talking about everything and spilling his guts to people who cannot really comprehend what is coming, even his "father". You seem to go back and forth a bit on how he thinks of James, which makes sense, but considering he never knew him as a father, I think the brother role works well. Is it actually a rule in Quidditch that if the ball is in the air it is in play? That doesn't make sense at all considering it's an aerial sport.


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