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A-F-S - NEW STORIES POSSIBILITIES
🕑 Added 2024-08-27 16:28:25 +0000 UTCNew (Illustrated) Offspring part is almost ready. ED is going to be posted on Thursday-Friday. Meanwhile I just wanted to share some of my story ideas I had for a long time. We may use it for another New story poll, or it can be Story Special like Pure Love World. New parts releasing every few months. I don't have titles - just premises.
Cruise Ship Story. This is a story about a cruise liner that sets off on a long journey across the sea. It's filled with families, mothers, sons, and fathers. But at some point, it turns out that the liner cannot return to shore, and the ship's captain reveals a secret. All the families were gathered here for the purpose of an experiment to create a new evolutionary species, a new step in human evolution. A unique drug was developed that women are supposed to take to give birth to a unique being.
However, there's one catch. This being can only be born through the fertilization of a woman’s womb by her own son.
There are many characters here—from the son who always dreamed of his mother and found himself in paradise, to the son who feels sick at the very thought. All of them go through a slow process of accepting their reality and the need to do what is asked of them. Those who refuse will be punished. This is a rough draft of the story, and additions are possible. Perhaps the mothers don’t know about the experiment, or perhaps the sons are unaware of it, and this'll my first story told from mothers' pov.
Superhero Story. I had big plans for this story, and I still want to turn it into a comic. In this world, similar to ours, live two great superheroes: Valkyrie and Mirage Phoenix. Valkyrie resembles Wonder Woman, and Phoenix is somewhat akin to Superman. The whole world is obsessed with these two and eagerly awaits the day they become a full-fledged superhero duo or even a team. Adam is also a huge fan of Valkyrie. He's 18 years old, and he's absolutely obsessed with her—his walls are covered with her posters, and so on. Naturally, he sometimes fantasizes about her in a sexual way. He lives with his father, a small, bald, kind man named Gerward, and a fit, strong, strict, and mother, a slender woman named Janet, who works for government. I think you can guess where this is going.
One day, Adam discovers he has superpowers and dreams of becoming the third superhero known as Thunderflare. He wants to meet Valkyrie, and it turns out that Valkyrie has been his mother all along. Adam is horrified and disgusted by that revelation. Valkyrie came to earth for a reason. She needs to reproduce and for that she needs Adam for some reason. He has to defeat Mirage Phoenix first before Valkyrie can tell him the whole truth.
I won't lie, it was partially inspired by Invincible. I really like this one story idea in particular because superhero genre can open doors to so many hot and cool posibilities. Something that haven't been explore anywhere before.
Alt Universes. The following story is kinda similar to PLW. Everything here is simple. The main character lives in a future world and discovers the ability to view alternative versions of himself through monitors. He lives with his mother and father. One day, among these realities, he sees one reality where he makes love to his own mother. And there are many such realities. Why do so many realities exist where he loves his mother? At first, he is disgusted by what he sees, but gradually, he begins to understand the alternative versions of himself, and at some point, even asks them for advice on how to win over his mother.
Last one. Time-stopping. Joe lives in a large family with five brothers and gains the ability to stop time. Is it a gift from the Gods? He doesn’t know. Joe can do whatever he wants, and at some point, he becomes interested in his mother.A sea of possibilities opens up before him. There are a million different ways to play with his mother, humiliate his father and brothers. Play with them, create different scenes.
Joe not only wants to have his mother. He wants to make his brothers fall in love with her, and then keep her away from them, watching them suffer. Joe can move objects around, rearrange people and things, do whatever he desires when time is stopped. It's fun.
As the plot progresses, it turns out that besides Joe, there’s someone else in the world who is immune to his powers. When time stops, this person continues to live. This person has been searching for Joe for a long time. He starts to suspect what Joe is up to and how he’s using his unique abilities. This creates a threat that he might reveal everything to Joe’s family. To Joe's mother.
I'd like to hear what you think about some of these ideas.
Comments
AFS
I like your perspective on both brothers. Of course, by 'humiliate,' I don't mean anything too harsh—not like what Nome deserved. It's mostly about messing around and making the brothers fall in love with their mother, which makes her mad at them for some reason. Still, I'll probably just kick the idea into the long grass.
Bobo Zett
Joe's response would have to be proportional to the abuse suffered. Even then , it does feel a bit like a fighting fire with fire. I actually do feel quite bad for Jack. Sure he was no angel and did eventually betray his mother but him and Dan were in many ways quite similar. The difference is that Jack didn't take his shot when he had the opportunity resulting in the complete breakdown of his relationship with his mother which is quite tragic. On the other hand you have Nome from the Serpent Dynasty story (my favorite btw). In his case, I didn't care much for him even though his birthright was indeed usurped. The difference in this story, is that Nome didn't really crave or desired his mother. He did have her at some point but that was mostly viewed in the context of his own sibling rivalry. He said that much to Darian in their final confrontation where he admitted in not seeing the Queen's appeal. At the end of the day, I feel bad when I see blatant display of favoritism from a parent.
AFS
But what if brothers are bullies themselves? Like Jack from BW. So this is his way of vengeance. Joe uses his power to make his mother fall in love with him and stop loving his father. It can be nice story. About cruise ship. I liked the idea of fertility crisis. I actually had this in mind. The world is polluted and too radioactive, so some men just can’t be fertile. These unique new beings are humans who can tolerate radioactivity and other harsh conditions.
Bobo Zett
By order of preference: Cruise Ship Story : This one is my favorite. The World Building is intriguing and full of possibilities. For example, it raises some interesting question as to what is happening in the outside world for the cruise ship to be in this situation: Is there a world ending apocalyptic event going on? Why is there a need to create a new type of species? Is there a fertility crisis going on and is this the only viable solution left for humanity? With that in the background, it will be interesting to see how the family dynamics will play out. Some families will be initially open to the idea, others not so much . What will be the new conflicts such dynamic will create, ranging from feelings of jealousy (in the event that there are several sons competing for their mother), inadequacy (for the fathers) and ultimately abandonment. Reading the story from the mother’s perspective will also be insightful . Having multiple perspective could also be an avenue to explore. Alt Universes. In this one I am more interested in seeing the butterfly effect caused by choices which initially seemed harmless but which ultimately had huge repercussions. The difficulty here, in my opinion, would be to have the alternate universe scenarios be engaging and not boring (via repetition). Superhero This is the one I am the least interested in although I did enjoy season 1 of Invincible (have yet to watch s2). I think that the taboo element loses some of its potency given that the protagonist doesn’t really have a mother - son relationship with Wonder Woman and she is by default open to the idea of doing the deed. I doubt it will take much convincing for our protagonist. Timestop: I personally wouldn’t read this one. Joe strikes me as a bully who is shamelessly manipulating those closest to him. He is not someone I would root for. I also feel bad for his brothers, as I do for most brothers, in these kinds of stories.
Akash AGARWAL
Superpower story looks good but I don't like his idea of being disgusted after knowing the truth,that a turn off, he may have initial crush on his mom too that would make his dream cum true
kjhkljhl
I like the alternate reality story. It would cool to see him mentoring himself to get his mother
Kalli
Superpowers for sons, defentely give more options for Sex scenes but i do like it more when the son is weak or rly has to fight and earn the love of the mother. Like when the son stops the time and starts having his way with the mom, while she cant do anything against it, is super lame in my opinion. I like the Cruise ship idea except that u would want to involve multiple Sons and Mothers because i feel like their will be no great character developement throughout the story, because we have to switch from Couple to Couple so much. Cruise ship liner story but only concentrating on one mother and son couple is a 10/10 for me^^
JPaxx
Superhero Story sounds nice
Linarian
Superhero Story for sure
AFS
Right. Superhero mother and son having eternal fun anywhere they want and how they want. Feel sorry for dad.
Devraj
Superhero story and cruise liner story seems to be interesting with many possibilities. Among these two I prefer the superhero story more because it can have many mother son love scenarios like making love in space,moon and other planets which makes it a lusty one. So my choice is superhero story.
