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[TB AU] TWILIGHT -- Chapter 27

🕑 Added 2024-03-22 17:19:03 +0000 UTC

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spO.Oxi

This was such an insane chapter, I was either breathing so hard or not breathing at all. Gosh Soot’s death brought me to tears and how Graystripe acted, acting like that is truly his brother just killed me, I just wanted to hug the poor dude. Interesting that Crowflight intervened, but if anyone was going to it had to be him, I wonder where this leaves the two star crossed loves, I think this may truly end things between them which sucks because they’re so cute. To see Leopard and Russet finally come in was a huge relief but imagine waking up from death and finding those two old ladies glaring down at ya 😂

Paradiigoxi

You know...I can't recall the last time a battle in the books made my heart pound so fast and legitimately (god, this sounds so dramatic!) almost drive me to tears. I've read a lot of your battle scenes and they are all epic as hell, but this one...god. It takes the cake! I'm devastated that Sootfur died that way...it wasn't fair. I mean, I know that is what happens in canon, but still. I'm glad that at least it was acknowledged, and that Graystripe was there to defend his sibling's body (with Silverstream! thank you so much for not letting her just be forgotten or another rando ThC cat with no lines) if need be. WiC was, indeed, ruthless here, as I expected them to be. But damn...it sucks to see it, too. I think the only thing I wish we could have seen was the arrival of RiC and ShC dealing more blows to WiC, who just retreated after pulling so many horrible stunts. I mean, attacking a medicine cat?! Jesus Christ...I really hope that is brought back up somehow later, because that should be punishable, no matter what WiC thinks ThC supposedly did. I get they believe that is what happened to Barkface, but it doesn't excuse it, so I hope it's addressed, and Leopardstar and Russetstar are told, and WiC are rightfully shamed for it. It'd be even better if it's brought up during a Gathering and StarClan scares the absolute shit out of WindClan with clouds and thunder (omg or a fallen tree again?! like what happened in canon...or a lightning strike right over his head) to show their anger and disapproval when/if Mudstar tries to defend it 😂 It says a lot here, to me, that just like how when this happened in canon during PO3 with Onestar as leader, that WiC would go into a Clan's camp to DELIBERATELY drive them out...and just like in canon with Firestar, Tinystar brought WiC home after what Brokenstar did. WiC, and especially Mudstar who was a full warrior, knows what that means. They know that Brokenstar committed crimes, too, on technically a worse scale than Brokenstar, and were willing to do the same to ThC, who has vulnerable members who could have been hurt. Gahhh. I'm as mad about that now as I was in canon LMAO okay, I'mma stop my rambling now and try to go chill from all the excitement of reading such an amazing chapter. I cannot wait for next week's talk between the three leaders! (...wait actually one more thought: fingers crossed that Tinystar is able to pay Mudstar back in kind for taking a life, and be the one to take Mudstar's first life. I think that would be a real blow to his ego ;p)


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