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Phazon Experiment B - Progress Report #1

🕑 Added 2019-04-05 09:30:02 +0000 UTC
Phazon Experiment B - Progress Report #1

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Chuck Moore

If you don’t mind me asking, are we going to see any of Samus’ magnificent mammaries or are we saving that for part 3?

Lord Aardvark

Way too much work for a one-shot. Sorry.

Fluff

Looks very promising. :) Im really looking forward to what shape Hiveship has in the future. ^^

nurvzy

If I could make one suggestion, perhaps you could tell the story of “wear and tear” on her outfit as well. As in, with each cut to a new position her outfit could have a causality to the brutal fucking along side the dialog ques. As in maybe first scene her outfit is rather prestine, next position perhaps her suit is ripped on her leg, then her torso, and by the end she has an entire boot off, suit ripped to visually indicate the rather rough unforgiving sex as depicted in the dialog. Just a thought, take it or leave it. :)

nurvzy

Love the screenplay and positions so far. This is shaping up to be a great release!

That doggy-style karate-chop tho 👌


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