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Misc Bin - November 1, 2019
🕑 Added 2019-11-03 07:30:33 +0000 UTCSsh, I didn't post this over 24 hours late.
Today's Misc Bin is a little bit different! Instead of a bunch of practice segments, there's an early draft of a screenplay! Specifically, the screenplay for the Harley video we've been building on stream.
It includes both the text screenplay, as well as the reference GIFs.
I'm about 95% solid that the progression / storyboard is locked down, and I am similarly confident that nothing before shot 43 is going to be changed. Shot 44 to the end is a lot less certain, and I am going to try and revise 57+. I like the idea of the extra credits reveal of Vicki Vale, but the current extra credits is way too long to get to that point.
Ideally, what I would like to do is replace the current shot 57 with what is currently shot 44, and having it transition cleanly into the current shot 58. Then, I would revise shot 64 to cut crisply into the credits, and then have 66 and 67 be the extra-credits sequence. Only 2 shots of extra credits, as opposed to 10.
The problem with this solution is that shot 44 currently serves as a bridge between Harley looking through the hole and Harley getting more cock. I am thinking I might replace it with a shot of a cock coming in and Harley launching straight into reference 09 with it. Not certain, though.
I think this is the first screenplay I've shared before it's (mostly) locked down. It will be interesting to see how it compares to the final screenplay, which I am hoping to share publicly on Twitter before next Saturday's stream.
I hope you all enjoy this little look behind the curtain when it comes to these longer projects. Until next time, everyone!
Comments
Eric Cage
This is awesome
