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Giorno Giovanna34

Pg. 14: Is Bofuri any good? Also what did Joe Biden do that the Man in Black feels the need to troll him?

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg. 10-14: So is arrogant weaklings getting killed or humbled in your universe going to be happening on a daily basis? Because I'm sure as hell not complaining.

Giorno Giovanna34

So what did he do with Aizen's remaining minions and the Sternritters?

Nah. He just has him in his collection cause the guy owes him a debt for the power the Man in Black gave him to make him stronger than the other shinigami.

Giorno Giovanna34

So what does the Man in Black think of Aizen? Afterall its not like the rogue Soul Reaper is a threat to him.

GamerLegend09

I mean wouldn’t a mere whisper feel like nails on the Chalkboard of your brain and Worse???

GamerLegend09

😅 how would that work if she can’t talk?

Yep.

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg. 6: Genderbent Cthulhu is gonna join Gohan's harem once the Lovecraft Arc is over isn't she?

Yep!

Stemadaca

Gaunter O'Dimm?

I knew someone would get me. Yes, that's exactly what I was going for. The Lych was such a great bad guy- WAY too serious for the innocense of Adventure Time, but perfect for a multi-faceted, reality defying villain like The Man in Black.

Giorno Giovanna34

But if nothing matters to him, then why does he even bother?

Jymnastics001

“Before there was time… before there was anything… there was nothing. And before there was nothing… there were us.” Ironically enough, I sort of imagined the Man in Black’s voice as Ron Perlman’s. At least when he gets menacing. I like to think that due to his shapeshifting abilities, he can alter his voice however he wants, and chooses which voice to use when he’s either being casual or menacing. Also, Adventure Time reference for the win!!!

Nope. He treats everything like a play thing... lives, soils, anything...

Giorno Giovanna34

Does he even give a shit about her?

I'm glad to hear this. Having fun is the most important. Just stick to your own rules. That's the key.

Yes. But she doesn't know his real name, otherwise he'd have to eat her too and make her part of his collection. Or she already is. He's such an omnipotent presence that any reality is not off limits to him.

Giorno Giovanna34

So when he's bored, he often turns into a super powerful midget that trolls Superman? Does his red headed wife whose name I'm not even going to try and pronounce know that he's not really a cocky midget?

The whole cloak full of skulls/souls reveal is alluding to the fact that the Man in Black has and CAN assume ANY identity he sees fit, whether out of necessity, out of a deeper, insidious plot, or because he's bored and just wants to. He's an influencer and an agent of chaos, and becoming a movie star who seemingly never ages kind of fits his M.O, lol.

Giorno Giovanna34

Why did the Man in Black decide to become a movie star? I mean besides the obvious reasons like because he can or he was bored.

Aqua-Sun

I just want to say, I am really enjoying this comic, the more pages I see, the more I see you are really having fun writing it. Like the page that shows all the souls he has, my god! It shows you don't need to be super original to make a fun and exciting comic and I mean it's not like the original dbz series was as all that original itself. It's honestly inspiring, I myself try to be as original as possible with my stuff but struggle a bit but honestly, I feel like that maybe the problem, I'm trying too hard to be too original. I'm just going to have fun and write whatever I want and not try too hard to grasp the audience. Sorry that I made this a bit about me a bit at the end there. ^^;

I should've been specific. They tried putting Scorch in one, but he broke out. They're going to find a much stronger one. I'm gonna adjust thay dialogue. They also run the risk of the prisoners escaping if they tried. Each one is strong enough to escape Black Holes. He'll, even Garlic Jr escaped his.... twice.

Julian Fratzscher

Pg 49 Interesting thought there, why weren't black holes used for them?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 50 Pt. 2* 😰 Jesus Write ✍🏻 you sure know how to send a chill down my spine

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 50* 🎶His smile fair as Spring, as towards him he draws you🎶 😳!!? I heard that Lyric before…….by the Crossroads…….😨 the “Man of Glass”

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 47* 🥺 Damnit….to think of what sad and painful things these women went through. 🥲 but that’s what’s gonna make these 2 good Friends for sure from the shared experiences

Lol. The guy is a fourth wall breaking weirdo and maniac. Having a collection of stolen identities helps with that.

GamerLegend09

😏 I guess it would make sense for him to have a Cheshire cat skull then

It's a pretty awesome skillset, which is why I love this villain. He doesn't just become the characters or people he collects. Conceptually, based on H.P Lovecraft's original lore, Nyar IS these people. This implies that these people across every reality and multiverse is an avatar of Nyar that he has assumed for shits and giggles.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 46* So the Souls take the form of Skulls…in which case can convert into the form of a mask…wherein transforms Nyarlathotep into said Soul……”Neet”

It just occurred to me I forgot to include Nicholas Cage's name in Nyar's collection of many souls, and I had every intention of adding it. Dang. Missed opportunity for another TFS reference.

Young Josh

Rick. Sanchez. Because he probably cheated in poker night.

GamerLegend09

*Pg.44* 😅 I mean not like we all see that this was already going to happen anyway but I was just Hoping it’d be by more 😰 NATURAL AND EXPECTED MEANS THAT YOU CAN SEE FROM MILES AWAY!!! NOT!!! UNEXPECTED!!!!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 43* 😃 CAPTAIN UUB!!?!? 😁 OK I know this’ll look and sound completely condescending (😋 and you’d be right) 😆 but I AM SO PROUD OF THAT PRECIOUS LITTLE MAJIN!!! *Bottom left Panel* 😀umm….. 😀😀 did she? 😀😀😀Seriously? 😀😀😀😀 Raise the First 😱😱😱😱😱RED FLAG OF THIS ARC!!!?!?!?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 41 Pt. 2* 😉 BTDubs I love seeing you insert Australian slang through Krillin right there

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 41* 😌 Attaboy Krillin keep to the bro code *see’s the ship on Bottom Panel* 🧐 huh…you know if I didn’t know any better I’d say that ship looks exactly like Giru from GT

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 40* *Top Right Panel* ……🤦🏻😂 shit that’s good *Top Left* 😊 look at em being Bros, must be Krillin’s Cheat day *Middle top right* 🤨 wait…so did she NOT rock his 4 foot world yet?…..orrrr is he just being a gentleman and not sharing those details with anyone? *Middle Left* “Your suck a lucky guy”……🤭… please leave that in there… it’ll be like he’s Covertly bashing him without him noticing *bottom right panel* 😐……😣 Aw man now I’m feeling conflicted! 😖 Damnit Write don’t you dare start making me feel regret for voting Yes *bottom left top* 🙁 oh Yamcha *bottom left bottom* *Sniff* 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 WELP!!! THERE GO THE TEAR-DUCTS!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Jeremy Zachary

There is Yamcha, there is, she just in jail right now.

Young Josh

YES YAMCHA, AND SHE'S BLUE.

In a way, yes and yes. The fact there are two Android 18s provides a lot of advantages for 18 she never originally had.

AJ

I'm a bix mixed with the fact 18 may betray the gang at some point and wonder how 21 is controlling her

So we got Super Android 17 in GT series, any chance next hot 18 sketch will be Super 18?(full bodied, the little sketch was such a tease). After "reading" the 18's Gratitude dj, was wondering if there were 2 18s to avoid bringing back the "Krillin own count" but with 21 coming into the picture, it makes sense.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 39* *see’s the note* 😑 somehow I knew you were going to do that

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 38* 😯 ooo they got tattoos, smart thinking 🤤 and hot

Nathan Gallegos

I’m waiting for this Videl and This Gohan to Smash and F***!

Only one. Android 21 made an exact duplicate of her in every way, right down to her DNA strands and memories, which they share. This is so that she can have them fuse later into Super Android 18, just like how she has two copies of Android 17 to fuse into Super Android 17. It's my way of introducing the Super Androids to canon.

GamerLegend09

😛AND!!! 😝 This is how Gohan gets 18 (bea) as a wife!

GamerLegend09

😋 why not? 17 had a clone back in the GT Saga

AJ

What the hell 18 has clones!?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 37* **Top Right Panel** 😍 holy crap it must be REALLY HOT out here…😛 DAYUM!!! **Top Left Panels** ☺️ aww well isn’t that sweet o- !!?… 😯 oh …. 😗 oooohhhhhhhh, 😏😏😏Hehheah Boy **Bottom right Panels** 😲 ohh!? multiple spectators…..wait- “hear thoughts”? “Shut out”??? wuhhh????? **Bottom Left** …………..😳Huh?! 😧WAITAMINUTE WHAAAAAAAT?!!!! BU- HOLD ON THA- AND IF THERES TWO THAT ME- AND THE OTHER MUST B- 😳THIS EARLY!!!? (😏 I’m not really complaining though)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 36 Pt. 2* 😗 ohh? *Bottom left Panel* we have a Spectator in our midst

Vegeta, the Ultimate Super Saiyan 3

*Pg. 35* Round 1: FIGHT!! *Pg. 38* I wonder what the story is behind 17 and 18 having duplicates...

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 34* 😁 ohohohh this should be good, maybe there’ll be a little refresher course on ……………😈 Dodging ☺️ Also I recognize that quote! 😉from the founding father of the United States Benjamin Franklin

Sure. But there is a difference between creating a diverse range of equipment to use and creating just a ki blade. Piccolo's magic does have a great deal of utility potential.

Julian Fratzscher

Not like Gohan couldn't just use his Ki to enhance/lengthen the blade if really necessary.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 31* 😁 Ayyup they’re a perfect Match for each other, 😉 I hope he tells them about HIS “Training Days” from back when he was a kid 🙂🙂🙂🙂🤭

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 30* 😙 pfft Compared to Piccolo this Golden Boy’s going easy on the girl

Vegeta, the Ultimate Super Saiyan 3

*Pg. 32* Welp... this is gonna take a while. Good luck, Videl! 😅

My ability is tame compared to everything DBZ has introduced. You know what's even more insane? Being able to delete anything you dislike down to the atomic level, from planets, to stars, to people, to insects, just by pointing your finger at them and shouting Hakai- without even needing an Infinity Gauntlet. Or turning anything into a carrot just by touching them. Or being able to regenerate from dust particles like Majin Buu can. Or being able to turn anything you want into candy like Majin Buu can. Pretty much everything Majin Buu can.

Julian Fratzscher

I was less about introduction, and more about that ability being completely insane. Then again, only Zangya (for now) will use it. And they are going to fight beings that can't really be defeated, so ... I forgot what I wanted to say.

Zangya learns to fire it so it can hit targets at longer range to temporarily paralyse and stun their abilities. I established this power, like, two chapters ago, so it is hardly BS. More like a way to balance the power scale in the universe.

Julian Fratzscher

So that Kago technique is BS-cancelling BS barrier.

GamerLegend09

🤭

GamerLegend09

😊 maybe there’re some special exceptions out there 🤓😏😎 (To Patrick)

GamerLegend09

😮 ohhh noww I get it, 😋 sorry write it takes me 2 or 3 reads to get a wrap on some Tutorials (😅 it takes me hours for video games before I get past them) (To Write)

Patrick

Calling it now: Zangya faces a God of Destruction in the future.

Patrick

It's a shame that only herans can learn it. It might end up being useful in the future.

GamerLegend09

☺️🙏🏻 Wonderful, Simply Wonderful Write ✍️

Yes, I have alluded to the fact that other faces may be showing up earlier than expected. Makes the DBZ world feel more lived in and organic, rather than them just popping out of nowhere as the Z-fighters get stronger.

I appreciate the in-depth explanation for how Zangya’s magic works. Curious though, this is the first time that ‘gods’ besides Kami and King Kai have been mentioned around Gohan, isn’t it? Does this mean we’re gonna get an early introduction to Beerus and Dragon Ball’s greater divine pantheon?

To put it simply, just like Zangya said- "It's a magical barrier that stops cheating bullshit." You know, annoying stuff like poison, toxins, hypnosis, Hakai that deletes you the instant it touches you, that sorta stuff. That's all it really does. The result is as it's illustrated, with Beerus getting frustrated and angry that nothing is happening since the attack defuses the instant it touches the barrier surrounding a Hera.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 29* 😅 i’m not gonna lie even now it’s still a little hard for me to kinda get the concept of magic and it’s fundamentals in the GAU (😌 don’t worry I just need to read it enough times and then I’ll get it eventually) but a couple of other unique takeaways I get from this page are, Zangya’s Teacher game (😃 innnn Magic) and the 😆 CHIBI VERSIONS OF EACH CHARACTER DISPLAYED IN THE BOTTOM LEFT PANEL ARE SO ADORABLE!!!! (😒Except for Bojack…..that dick)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 28* 😂 More Of That Behavior Emitting Itself!!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 27* 🥰 Their reactions to Gohan reverting to his Base level’s so cute 🥰🥰🥰 like a little puppy’s peaked interest in a new toy 😏😏😏😏😏😏

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 26* 😙 no yeah that’s a more natural reaction right there

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 25* 😂 omg I hope he’s not suddenly emitting the Giant Green Asshole Behavior like “Super Kami Guru” through Nail

That's the thing. Science can't explain magic, which is why Android 21 wants to get a hold of Majin Buu and why Bojack can cancel out Raditz's body hardening ability. It simply defies explanation.

GamerLegend09

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

"That is easily my most metro attack."

Are we bringing scientifical explanations back for DBZ techniques? Definitely don't explain how the law of conservation of matter and energy works with a technique that conjures matter out of nothing!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 24* “CLOTHES BEAM!!” 😄

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 23* 😚 I’d like to imagine she gets her concentration and focus from her mother 🤭 Z looks like she’s having fun with this too

lol. It's just Piccolo being a bit cheeky as well. He may have changed, but he's got his own sense of humor now. Hehehe.

Geez, barely any warning for Videl. Even after all the character development he’s had, Piccolo still enjoys being *sliiiiightly* sadistic sometimes, huh? Guess you can take the Piccolo out of the Evil King, but you can’t fully take the Evil King out of the Piccolo

Dean Zamp

This is honestly so good. I could read Videl becoming a Z-Fighter forever. Whole chapters of plots in between arcs gives GA so much depth. These slice of life sections give me a real warm fuzzy feeling in my tum-tum. ☺️

Julian Fratzscher

Clever, it not only trains the shifting of Ki for precise AND quick flight, but also allows to gather experience in this new all directions environment.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 22 Pt. 2* 😅 Just to point this out my brain tends to work VERY deviously (😗depending on the day they’re either very tame or highly extreme…..😋 there is no grey area)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 22* 😁 she is so Spirited!, 😏 my brains automatically picturing how he’ll make things harder for her

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 21* 😯 such diverse methods of training! 😃 I can’t wait to see more!!!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 20* Well would ya look at that, her mom game’s on point here…😅 or I guess I this case older Sister game

GamerLegend09

🥲 same here

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 19* 😁 she caught on just like that 🫰🏻, now she’s flying around like a graceful little birdy

GamerLegend09

😉 I see where your looking

GamerLegend09

😆 THATS AMAZING!!! 😁 your incredible Write, 😉 kinda funny too I just rewatched that episode after seeing page 14

Yep. I'm so happy for her.

I simply took some ideas given to us by the 'Videl Takes Flight' episode and expanded on it here. Goten showed how a novice hovers and wobbles at first upon lifting off, getting used to it and giving the impression of trying to maintain that balance throughout the entire process (before immediately getting it down a couple minutes later), while Videl gave us the grass root fundamentals to how to manifest energy and then project it beneath them to levitate in a directly vertically. There were a few drafts I went through trying to figure out how the other mechanics of DBZ flight worked, and based on how the Z-fighters move while flying, as well as how Goten did it, I figured they simply keep pushing their ki below their centre of gravity, allowing it to push them along as well as perform different manoeuvres, like rolling, pitching, elevating, or banking to sharply change directions.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 18 Pt. 2* 🥰 also I just can’t stop admiring Zangya’s big an poofy hair (🤤so hot)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 18* 🥰 seeing this devout Martial Artist Grow as a GA Warrior warms my heart (😉 see what I did there)

Julian Fratzscher

Finally Zangya can be a big sis again.

De'Andrae White

Zangya😤👌

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 17 Pt. 2* 🙂 but I’m curious, where/how did you come up with Videl’s description of her first time flying?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 17* 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊mmmmmmmmm I just can’t get enough of this!!!

GamerLegend09

🧐over a hundred thousand… 🤔131 😕Mentally 23- 😵‍💫 oh no I’ve gone swirly eyed

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 16* 🥰🥰🥰 Awwww look at em having nicknames for each other

My best estimate. She is still incredibly youthful, so physically and mentally she looks to be in her early twenties. So young adult, just cresting over 21 mentally, but being approximately 131, which is young by Hera standards.

Dean Zamp

Oh... You replied. Patreon on mobile sucks. So was Zangya 131 when sealed?

Dean Zamp

I've asked this as well Clint. This is Write like 2 years ago. "Hello Zamp, If I had to estimate Zangya's age, she's mid or early twenties- being an alien and a quasi-magical being, she's able to live a long, youthful life for hundreds, if not thousands of years without adjustment or effect on her person." In Chapter 4 it says over 100,000 years ago, meaning she was alive then. But we have little detail about her imprisonment besides how it was conducted by the Kai's & where they were located whilst sealed. I'd be curious how much repressed sexuality she has endured if she was awake the entire time. 😂

Good question. Obviously when imprisoned, they were in stasis pretty much and mostly sleeping. The Hera also age extremely slowly- being pretty much the space-elves of DBZ if I'm being honest. Chronologically, she would be over a hundred thousand years old. Biologically/physically, she is 131. Mentally, she would be 23.

Something I’m curious about in regards to Zangya. How old is she? Both physically and mentally I suppose. Obviously the Hera are already an extremely long-lived species by default, but take into account the Bojack’s crew imprisonment. I’m sure there was some kind of stasis in effect that kept them from aging physically, but that aside, we’re they conscious of themselves during all that time? Is there a disparity between Zangya’s physical age and mental age, or was it like cryo-sleep and for her no time passed at all between being imprisoned and being freed? I ask more out of curiosity than anything, the question didn’t occur to me during the arc where the topic was relevant lol

Dean Zamp

Zangya about to rizz Videl into an absolute state 💦

GamerLegend09

😂 I wonder if we’ll get a reversal scenario from the “Take Flight, Videl” episode 😂😂

It's also been a month since the end of the tournament, so she probably has had a bit more time training with Gohan too. :)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 15* 🤔 Huh, looks like she’s a lot better at flying younger than when she’s older, 😊 then again it’s probably because they met at an earlier age😏😏 this time around

Hah. I knew people would like it. The guy may be a bad guy, but he's a weirdo and comedian.

Aqua-Sun

Bruh his list made me laugh way to hard XD

De'Andrae White

Himhan

During this arc, of course.

It's because it's more convenient. In case he gets attacked, he won't have to expend precious time, energy, and the element of surprise transforming. It served him well when Zangya jumped him, and it will when the next enemy comes.

Benjamin Shklyar

I believe I have asked this before but is gohan in super saiyan? And if so why?. He has already mastered it and if he wishes to go beyond to 3 then he needs more time in ssj2

GamerLegend09

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Dean Zamp

I am the hype!!! 😄

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 13* 🤩 AAAHHH SO EXCITED!!! 😆 Videl in Namekian Gi Picolo’s Style! Floating!! WITH ZANGYA WATCHING!!!! (😏 and Piccolo looking mad/Jealous?)

Giorno Giovanna34

So when do we get to see Fasha throw hands with her cursed Time God powers?

Stemadaca

Poker with Rick Sanchez, and Haunt Joe Biden?! What kinda cockamamie list is this?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 13* 😂 Never would’ve figured Nyar to be an anime fanatic…. 😏 although seeing as they’re acquainted with Rick Sanchez I guess nothing should surprise me now (🫤 I say that but I probably still will be)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 12* Time for the 😙 Second Coooourse🎶

GamerLegend09

😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏

Possibly. The guy is omnipotent.

Kopawhite

That guy is like chaotic evil for fun, but still for evil. And I got the strange feeling that this Cthulu wants Gohan for other things

De'Andrae White

"Haunt Joe Biden"🤣🤣🤣

yes!! thank you that was it! drove me nearly crazy

Julian Fratzscher

On the note of meta jokes with that list, can Nyar hear the narrator?

AAAND.... you would be right. :)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 11 Pt. 2* also, did anybody get the feeling that the inside of Cthulhu’s mouth looks like the inside of the Kraken’s mouth from Pirates of the Caribbean two dead man’s chest?

Giorno Giovanna34

Pg. 10-12 It's always therueptic to see an arrogant bastard get knocked off their high horse.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 11* 😈 now that’s service with a smile 😊

UltraSpinkie

That whole eating sequence is giving me Monster King Orichi from One Punch Man vibes.

Julian Fratzscher

Oh hey, Adventure Time reference.

Omni

She should've made him suffer more but you can't beat morning hunger lol Also Cthulhu doujinshi in the works?

You're not far off the mark. Every Eldridge monstrosity assumes forms that we can recognize, because simply gazing upon their true forms would be incomprehensible to us. In order to savour us bit by bit, they have assumed forms that slowly draw out the intense emotions and reactions that they delight and feast upon in slow, delectable doses.

Funny how the primordial pre-existence entities still distinctly resemble the human form. Especially since a main point of the Lovecraft mythos is that such eldritch beings completely transcend human comprehension. Is it some sort of trick of perception? Any mortal consciousness that perceives them (including extradimensional spectators like us readers) automatically views them as something familiar in order to protect itself? Or have they deliberately chosen such forms for themselves, for reasons unknown to us? Lol look at me, vainly trying to break down the rationale behind big-tiddy Cthulhu babe xD

Charisonic

Question. If an elder god eats someone, are they then sent to their respective afterlife, or is it a situation in which they eat EVERYTHING. Essentially wiping their essence from the omniverse?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 10* Finally getting a taste of what it feels like to be thrown off your high horse…..😈 and into the mouth of your own Demise

You would think so... but no.

Julian Fratzscher

An immortal would make for an endless meal...

He got these from the DBS timeline, so basically he created another timeline where he removed the paradox. lol. He just casually plucked them from the main story to feed them to puppy Cthulu.

Shadow Monarch

Okay just making sure but from which timeline would he be from since there has been a lot more created since the original (original dbs, dragon ball heroes, xenoverse,etc…) there is fanmade once too

You mean Cthulu's breakfast? Yes.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 9* 🤦🏻‍♂️ ughh… God complexes are amazing aren’t they?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 8* 😅 looks like it’s time for that Breakfast

Shadow Monarch

Is that black?

As far as I know, there isn't really any alternate stories I have done of this. I've done previews of future arcs in the past, but for the most part have just been following the outline of my fanfiction since Chapter 1. The only chapters I have of this story I left links to in this post's description. Check it out.

Drew Fields

I am under the impression there is a webstorie about these events going forward from the creator I just don’t know what order to read them from and where to read it, so if sombody could help me out that would be cool

Aqua-Sun

You brought Cthulhu into this! your writing skills are impeccable!

Yeah. Alternate timelines.

GamerLegend09

😅 looks like Kiyo’s got a bit of competition

There are multiple of these rats hiding in the multiverse.

GamerLegend09

😨 like….from an alternate timeline?

Giorno Giovanna34

Page 7: I saw that look she's going to be in Gohan's harem

Giorno Giovanna34

Page 5: Great that's another waifu to add to the list

Julian Fratzscher

There are most likely more than just one version of that pair.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 6* 😳 HOLD ON WHAT TH-!! BUT DIDN’T KIYO WI-!! HOW THE HELL ARE THEY ST-!! 🤯 HUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHH!!!?

Julian Fratzscher

Which version?

Vegeta, the Ultimate Super Saiyan 3

🤣🤣🤣

Hahaha. You sure did.

Pretty much. Though H.P Lovecraft's intentions were to make his beings completely unknown to humans and beyond their full comprehension, I feel there is nothing wrong with borrowing his concepts and simplifying them for others to understand.

Hahaha. And... you would be half-right. These Gods are very finniky.

UltraSpinkie

I have a feeling “meal” and “feast” in this situation don’t necessarily mean their exact terms. Or are innuendos for something else.

Young Josh

Might be over simplifying but they're like this because they're hungry. That's honestly clever, bit like skyrim with the conundrum with how the dragons see mortals.

GamerLegend09

😉 this’s gonna be good

I know I may be patting myself on the back a little here, but I really enjoy this concept I came up with for The Man in Black group's motivations. Since Lovecraft's creations act beyond human conception and understanding, every one of the beings alligned to this group each act in their own interests, with their choices and actions being neither good or bad. Their choices simply defy our full understanding. However, while most DBZ villains before and after these guys simply wish to become the most powerful or rule the universe in some way, The Man in Black's true goal isn't to rule the universe, since his race exist everywhere regardless of their position of power. They simply wish to feed and that instinctual drive pretty much fuels their every action. That's THIS villain group's primary motivation, if there is any one to see.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 6* 😆 I SO FRICKEN CALLED IT!!!!!

GamerLegend09

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

lol

Charisonic

*sigh* alright youtube, time to watch "I fucked cthulhu good" for the 4th time today

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 5* Bigger question is are they going to be hungry for the boy? 😏 or thirsty?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 4* 😳………..👃🏻🩸 🤦🏻‍♂️ Goddamnit Write

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 3* 😰 Sushi anyone?

Chris Cannon

When I saw the tentacles, I instantly thought Cthulhu, then later when I saw the next page…I wasn’t wrong, but I was way off on how I pictured it and wrongfully assumed her gender, SHAME. Gotta say, one of your best spins yet, reminds me of your take on Abeloth from Star Wars and I’m low key getting a Fate Stay Night vibe. Can’t wait to see how creative you’ll be whenever you make doujins featuring her, I’m imagining it already.