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Announcement 26 September 2021

🕑 Added 2021-09-26 11:25:43 +0000 UTC

Comments

Mordred

While I loved the rest of the chapter and the reveal I do have to agree the fight at the end was really kind of underwhelming especially compared to the Naga fight.

As those above me pointed out, the last fight Taylor has was a bit disappointing. I hope it may be rewritten because there wasn't really much impact to it when I read it. It was a bit weird to see that there weren't paragraphs to describe what was happening in exact detail.

Lee Shilo

Two swords... can she dual-wield? I'm getting dark-elf vibes here.... ;0

Aaron Kay

Love it, but would have liked more detail for that last fight. Still awesome though.

Mordart

I have to admit I Was disappointed by the last parts fo this chapter. The quality just wasn't there in the last two fights Taylor participated in. The first, eh, I could forgive that to an extent. The last fight though is simply absurd. It's one of the most important fights in the story so far; it reads like the back of a tourist postcard. Details, man, details! If this story is devolving into that type of quality, compared to the Naga fight, you have a serious problem upcomiing with the rest of the tale.

Red Bard

This was just amazing... just everything, i can't wait for the next one.

Antony444

Thanks a lot!

Antony444

Now, now...(evil grin), I hope it's not pessimism in the ranks of the God-Emperor's servants...

Antony444

Ah, the ideas...

Antony444

You're welcome.

Ted min

So many surprises, wounderfull story.

Gabriel Meadow

Thank you for your hard work Antony. At a certain point though, we're going to run out of circumlocutions and ways to allude to this story.

Stormstar1995

Thank you for hard work and god speed to the betas, I am going to reply to this email with potential ideas as I haven’t had time to reply to the 31000 post.