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This is not chapter 12-4 - 13 September 2023
🕑 Added 2023-09-13 09:07:39 +0000 UTCOkay, as promised, the not-teasers are over. The writing of a story which shall-not-be-named is over too.
I am shifting to The odds were never in my favour tomorrow, I have several interesting ideas I want to test upon...
Anyway. The not-chapter has been sent to the betas, who have been told, in front of Commissars and Lords Inquisitor, to send it back before the end of October. We will see how well they will obey this holy command.
I have written 44,000 words or so for this not-chapter, which is slightly more than I wanted, but I think I'm approaching more reasonable lenghts. For Arc 13, I'm certainly going to aim for 30,000-35,000 words. It may fail, but it's an objective...
Oh, and by the way don't scream too loudly when you happen to read the last two scenes. I wouldn't want you your neighbourhood to believe you are mad...
And yes, the cliffhangers are evil. I assume that completely.
Enjoy!
Comments
Boris Michenski
Eternal peace? One nice big galaxy-vide graveard?
Hunter
Interesting the C’Tan wants to “end the war in heaven” wonder what that will imply.
Megaman Beastout
So what exactly are the different conspirators trying to do attacking Weaver militarily? I'm assuming they are trying to kill her but if they somehow succeed (like sacrificing entire sectors to summon legions of daemons + many exalted ones with extreme support from the chaos gods lol). What are they going to do when the Primarchs, entire legions of space marines >100,000, all the fleets of mars, and the entire swarm go to take revenge and go and burn down their sectors to their foundations? And their afterlife would likely be filled with torture either way.
