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This isn't a teaser - 17 November 2023
🕑 Added 2023-11-17 10:13:43 +0000 UTCOkay, here are the first 4,000+ words of the not-teaser.
The map of the Calyx Hell Stars you might find useful for the first POV was updated a minute ago.
Writing is progressing well, though I think I have still over a week (at least!) of efforts. And yes, this chapter will likely be a small one by TWO standards.
As always, I haven't really betaed this draft, and it is likely I will alter/add things before the final update is sent to the beta and their Commissars. Just saying.
Enjoy!
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primus
It’s interesting to see how open they’re being about conflict with the Administratum with a random civilian.
Ha dug
An easy way to get around the munitorum could be to have ‘special guard auxiliary preparatory classes’ basically say that these ‘special classes’ are for guard/pdf aspirants but really just have it open to anybody and the their mother. Maybe have one intro to las gun class or coach everything military terminology so math examples are based around artillery calculations or armored forces speed, etc. munitorum seething as the guard tap dances around them screaming “these classrooms are a military necessity and you can do nothing about it since military training centers fall under MY supervision la la lala suck my bolt gun paper nerds!”
