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This is not a Core Teaser
🕑 Added 2025-09-19 08:51:08 +0000 UTCAll right, I'm back. The writing of the TWO chapter is proggressing...though more slowly than I want. At the time I'm writing those lines, I have only reached the 20,000 words threshold.
This is why I got so long before updating another not-teaser...though you get a 13,000 words-long one today. Hopefully things will get more love from the Gods of Writing, and Tzeentch will eventually stop ruining my inspiration somewhere in the next days. One can dream, after all.
Anyway, remember to refuse the gifts of Chaos, and most of all, never forget that under the right circumstances, yes, the Orks are here to defeat you, and they need only one good shot to ruin the day. The power of the WAAGH! is all they have, but sometimes, lack of subtlety will cary the day...
Enjoy!
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Nicola Chen
You pulled a Malekith. And a krork. In the same chapter. Ooohhh boy, this is gonna be legendary.
Thiemo Guenther
How convenient, for a significant fraction of the disaffected Eldar to concentrate themselves into one fleet. That way they can be dealt with more efficu
Antony444
Hmm...remember this is not the Yriel of the 41st millennium. He's younger, far less experienced. And most importantly of all, his chief enemies so far have not been often greenskins...least of all the big dangerous Warbosses. And of course, there's always the problem of Eldar arrogance raising its ugly head at the worst moment possible...
John W
I feel the armor should be based on Guts black armor from Berserk.
Nereus24
As always the stupidity of the Eldar knows no limit. It is as if Yriel never heard about how the Orks function. Like the bigger they are the more intelligent they become. And everyone knows that an intelligent Orks is a catastrophic entity of madness and destruction.
Templar9999
Brukk-Brukk is percieved as a Krork to the Crone Sword. A Remnant of Morai-Heg percieved her old ally and chose him. Even if his entire Waaag is destroyed, this matters so much more. And he developed this way explicitly in a mirror of Talyor. This could indicate a focal point for GorkaMorka's return. Absolute cinema. I hope he joins up with Leet and Borek to meet, and fight, the Swarmbringer. After a humorous, and absolutely destructive, fight. Taylor meeting her Ork (Krork) counterpart will be hilarious. And she is empress of the Aeldari. The Krork were made to be their allies against the C'Tan. You call it the Witch King armor. But I am envisioning the Lich King Armor from Warcraft. Hopefully without the bound soul of an Archdemon of undeath. But unlikely. The only thing special about the armor of the Witch King of Angmar was that it allowed him to interact with the material plain. The same is true for all of the Nazgul. Their soul anchors were the 9 rings, and through them The One Ring.
Peplum
Lol, Brukk-X-Brukk is immortal. He is the perfect representation of "What doesn't kill you makes you stronger"
