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Chapter 911: A Matter of Mindset

🕑 Added 2024-06-21 23:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Frederick

Fascists and communists both often took over their respective countries in this manner.

ItWasIDIO!!

Well Jason the "Best" ideas of our world is showing its ugly head also I take back what I said bad enough ya gotta recruit Anna don't wanna recruit another person who won't take blame for the bad shit that Jason gets involved in

Kconraw

Thx for the chapter

Michael Hawkins

We're about to be here for the entire book. He just set it up that way

Jeff Taylor

Suggested Edit: “A city to the north of here. A lot older than Greenstone, with a population native to the area. *If I recall correctly*, most of Greenstone’s people are descended from the original Estercost immigrants, I think, only a few centuries ago. Boko is a city of academics, *if I recall correctly.*” “A city to the north of here. A lot older than Greenstone, with a population native to the area. Most of Greenstone’s people are descended from the original Estercost immigrants, I think, only a few centuries ago. Boko is a city of academics, as I recall.”

Richard Parker

So, I hate sounding pretentious enough to make suggestions to the author after such detailed and exquisite story-telling so far, but I truly hope that Greenstone isn't too quickly passed over. I large part of why I fell in love with this series took place in Greenstone. Jason and Happy Biscuit Friends have certainly outgrown Greenstone, but I'd like to see some interaction with the old contacts and friends and not just a brief brushover before rushing on back to Earth. There's something enjoyable, maybe even cathartic, for me to read how Jason's interactions with Greenstoners (heh heh) will come about from his current position of power when he was so dismissed or idolized before he last left Greenstone.

Tim

No, the comma would be here -> "ignores, and" since "and" is a coordinating conjuction used to link two complete thoughts that work together. In the complete phrase: "This movement takes the people our way of thinking ignores and melds them into a power built not on magical strength but ideological indoctrination."‐------------- You have two parts that could be separate sentences. The first -> "This movement takes the people our way of thinking ignores." The second -> "[It] melds them into a power built not on magical strength but ideological indoctrination." Both are sentences that hold complete thoughts, however, since the second sentence modifies the first by illustrating what happens to the people who have been taken, you can merge them with the conjunctive "and" to create a better flow as splitting them would sound unnatural in speaking.

Feu et Glace

Maybe they are followers of the God of Sandwiches and they are trying to engage in preaching some of his earliest sermons to the masses.

Hunter

A low magic zone like greenstone and others like it is the only place where these equalist movements have any chance to thrive. Unless the leader is someone of importance for the future the whole plot line seems forced to me.

Diviknight

Rufus pointed out how Earth’s political powers are struggling in a new reality where power is king. Perhaps we are about to see the same power shift struggles but in reverse. What happens when Greenstone has to deal with the complicated ideologies of Earth?

Vincent Schneider

This movement takes the people our way of thinking ignores and melds... -> This movement takes the people our way of thinking, ignores and melds... - no?

J W

I know people keep suggesting more earthlings. But what if this group of people are just practicing what the random "travelling " monster fighting, food stall owning "priest" had been ranting about after literally swooping in and saving everyone's life at some point?

Bru-

Well this is fun but I am hoping for a Zara and Cassandra interaction.

Jacob Ison

It happens to me too. I think Jason is a kind of outlet for Shirt, sometimes. Being the author Shirt can unilaterally decide which points of morality his story stands on and ,while that's okay, it does feel like Shirt's particular political leanings bleed over onto his world.

Alex Martin

Tim

If youre talking about Victoria Grantham, shes Vice Chancellor of Clives MRA.

Lesley Holmes

Da da daaa

Razeel Nightfall

Will we witness Colin mass feeding next week? Stay tuned to find out.

Crystal Donak

I agree honestly there hasn't been much banter...in a long time.

Spicyice101

Well technically he was deprived at the end lol.

Kevin Anderson

I don't believe it's likely that they kept the outworldeea prisoner for 20 years. They've all been integrated into society for a while I'm sure

ABTelford

Please, please finish this conversation properly in the next chapter instead of just doing another a “cut scene” to someone doing something else days later. That works ok when used judiciously, but I realized my discontent with these latest chapters is because it’s been happening, seemingly, every chapter since Jason repaired the astral throne. I am craving some time line continuity. I am still very much enjoying the writing, but, that said, I think it could be improved between now and when it’s published - both added to and parred down to fill in gaps and smooth away unnecessary repetition. And fix typos!! I love your story! Your dialogue/banter is always delightful, I love that your main character has changed and grown over the series in real, believable ways - not all good and not necessarily a smooth ride. Hope your life allows you to keep writing!

Isaac Scharff

I thought that too

Isaac Scharff

More like communist incels which is kinda weird

ThoMiCroN

It sounds like Pallimustus is being colonized by incels.

Iain Grubb

Or he could take them all back to Earth and feed them to the vampires, er let them run free.

Iain Grubb

Well, Lamprey was definately Deprived but his tastes were more towards the Depraved. Guess Danielle didn't snag all the Earthfolk out of the Magic Societies hands after all. Was Boko were they had Clive running in the hampster wheel? Might be time to get reaquainted with his flame, since his wife is up to no good.

N8rtotPlayz

TYFTC!

DeviantSalivations

Side quest time!!!

Logen Felxon

YES! Cease the means of production! LET THE rank TYRRANY END! I mean, the hegemon himself would probably have something to say about the way this is, regardless of the political training he's been forcefed lately. :)

Kalanaere

Nope important things wrap up on Palli first. 1. Retrieve earthlings 2. I'm certain he's going to somehow help Arella, my guess is a good word about her to the adventure society 3. I'm guessing a stop in Vitesse as Jason has Saud more than once he planned to join Burning Violet 4. I'm guessing final .stop to be Storm Kingdom where they will also likely depart from

Aaron Schwartz

“I’m not the one you tried to sell to Lucian Lamprey as a means to slake his DEPRIVED appetites.” I’m fairly certain you meant to say depraved. He was certainly not deprived. That was kind of the whole point.

Aaron Schwartz

Something tells me that whoever is behind this is going to be a lot less altruistic than Rimuru… it would be fun if they turned out to be best buds with some ostracized asshole relative of stash

Aaron Schwartz

He didn’t really need shade for something like this anymore. He can use his aura to sense anywhere in the city, and I’m willing to bet wherever his aura sense can concentrate, a shade body could be present in that spot of aural power to eavesdrop. The only reason he would need to make a concerted effort would be if his or senses can’t find the problem immediately or if he needs to leave shade with someone that is going to go outside of his aura range

Greg Szarko

Can we just skip to Jason and party arriving on earth?

René Blaser

Mhh. I would be honestly surprised if Shirt would go that way with the story, but you are actually on to something with that thought. We'll see how that goes. :-) Maybe not in place of but in addition to?...

Charles Morin

Girling is a blood slave of the vampire queen now.

Kelly

Wait, did you have an existing character in mind? Bc I feel a little stupid now that I cant come up with anyone from Earth like that.

Kelly

Side quests are life. 😂

Maudley

People keep getting excited over Jason going to slap down Elspeth. This chapter has me even more convinced he's going to do the opposite, maybe even recruit her in place of Danielle. She's already proven herself a more deft politician than him, she's realized how bad she messed up, she wants out of Greenstone, etc. Also, Jason learned quite a while ago not to be petty when it doesn't benefit him. Elspeth is also likely more qualified to deal with shadier sorts than Danielle herself.

Jay Doubleyou Kay

with hundreds of shades to be able to sniff them out in like half a day hahahaha

Jay Doubleyou Kay

If the person is from earth, lol Jason is going to have a zero tolerance policy. Those earthlings gone and messed up. It's someone from one of the major earth factions that were around his football field monument. After Jasons adopted family seriously helped them out and they betray that trust. Ohhhhhhhhh they gone and messed up bad

Maudley

It'd be wild if there was some lady claiming to be his wife

BloodStorm

I’m not sure if I’m a fan of this upcoming mini arc in Greenstone

Maudley

Lol yeah he keeps mixing them up

Josh Vanderpool

Ohhhhh juicy

Zachary Ross

Why am I thinking insane anti intellectual American literally trying to colinise a new world with a skewed version of democracy. Because that's what I was reading in this description.

TorHKU

Yeah wow Jason's political leanings and ranting really came out of nowhere, definitely hasn't been ragging on governments and power structures and propaganda for... 900+ chapters.

Adrian

A careful re-read makes me think that the suspicion around an earth-based puppet master is specific to the recent resurgence of the movement, not to its origins from before Jason's arrival, so its likely an escaped outsider. Nothing says they caught every one of them from the first Biscuit/messenger fight or that there wasn't more than one incident or landing location 😇

Benjamin Grant

I love when someone threatens to kill Jason from the wise words of Princess Liara “It probably wouldn’t work anyway.”

Ligeia

Not necessarily. Doubtless here is a more literary usage of the word.

Hunter

Ugh I sense another side quest incoming.

David Harkness

Feels like whole story is just becoming an effort to push Shirts political Agenda. Sad. Canceling patreon

GentlemanG33k

I think Jason lied to Dorgan there is no way Elsewhere doesn't have a Shade body in her shadow till they leave the area

Telewyn

Clive invented an internet, it was only a matter of time.

Themo Grulld

Glad to be part of this.

Themo Grulld

Kinda insane ,are we sure this won't turn into book 15 and 16 or trick 17 .The arcs coming after this will be a nice finale.

Seaspike

That because he hasn't gone back yet. It's been mentioned multiple times that he is going to offer the Earthers a ride home.

Timothy

As soon as I read this end passage, “But I think Vincent was right. He suggested that whoever is behind all this might come, not from our world, but from yours.” I thought duh duh dun.....

DirePants

Oh that’s an interesting development. They basically have a bunch of MAGAniacs or incels grabbing power. Hmmm maybe not incels or anything right wing. Knowing how Pallimustus works it’s probably something more akin to liberal ideology. People tired of getting the short end of the stick because so many abuse their power. It could very well be someone from Earth or possibly just someone/people who were influenced by Jason’s defiance in the face of authority and overwhelming power. It’s really amazing how Jason crossing dimensions has had such profound effects on both worlds. I worry about Earth becoming more like Pallimustus, we all know the potential is there. But what I didn’t think about was how Pallimustus could be on the cusp of an upwards trend to be more progressive. Granted, Gold and Diamond rankers are old as sin and old people aren’t exactly known for their propensity to accept change. Still, I’m looking forward to this side adventure.

Ryan Cook

The line "independent enough to make Estella’s job hard" should probably be Elspeth?

Frog

Farrah disposed of him, remember? Norith asked Jason to get him out of the 2nd special transformation zone alive, and accepted that probably meant Farrah would give him the same treatment he gave her. And then he was never seen again. So definitely not that one.

Aaron

"They’ve doubtless mythologised it..." Should doubtless be doubtlessly?

Andrew J. Walker

I almost wonder if it might not be that nuker gold rank from Earth.

#savegarytheleonid

thank you!

Frog

Trying to decide if it’s the orthodox messengers baiting him into a trap, or one of the network/cabal fools that Taika and Mr. Magitech mentioned getting brought over with them. Or quite possibly Boris orchestrating a whole ordeal to break Jason out of his sightseeing to fix the bridge and go back PRONTO ahead of the oncoming mysterious calamity

Mist Sparrow

Or is it manosphere content

Havics Child

They are supposed to be mostly dealt with and those still active are with the messengers

Havics Child

Nah, it's earth thinking, that's what they are thinking anyway

Eric M

I mean it could be that adminstrator that brielfy ran Gerling for the Americans at one point, it could just be someone famous for being persausive, or a complete unknown. I think most of the silver rankers escaped the forced relocation from Australia to Pallimustus, but maybe it could be that French Silver ranker that attacked him shortly after his arrival.

Havics Child

No it really doesn't, maybe as a higher up of the resurgence, but at least the original leaders were on this planet before Jason got magic. I can't really think of anyone mentioned in earth arc shirt gave us any info on that would or could be the issue. Maybe that assistant that thought Girling wanted to rape an elf? Any ideas on who it might be if it is someone who Jason knows?

Ken Sevier

Nice job

Hayden Leech

What ever happened to the church of purity/god of disguise situation? I don’t think we’ve heard a peep about it in ages.

deadly chibi

"Everybody loves to hear me talk" best line

Russell Ventimeglia

Could it be the new, probably smarter, Thadwick? I know the area is lower end on the mana spectrum, but I keep expecting a much more clever Thadwick encounter before the return to Earth. And he does have the special "messenger" killing sword. Hmmm.

JonO

Who's a famous incel that would likely support other "disenfranchised" men, take slaves and such and work the system to benefit the weak rather than the strong, only to make themselves into the very dynamic they're supposedly rising up against and lives semi currently who this new character might be based on? Lol Rhetorical, I'm not looking to set flames lol

Havics Child

He's no god or king, just a GAB (beyond gods), and absenty patriarch of a clan... but yeah, though I don't see him needing his powers if they aren't at least a solid silver, not that we even know the new effects of half his powers.

Alex Schellenberg

Is this confirmation that Pallimustus has Podcast Bros?

Agent P.

Well he never took the Earth people back.

Abigail Hale

That time I got reincarnated as a revolutionary socialist!

Jordan Brennan

Tyftc!

Alexander Dupree

lol I love it.

Jordan Rogers

I want to know who the leaders is, cause it almost has to be someone he knows leading it,

Brad Gammey

You have piqued my interest in this new thread to the overall tapestry. So many possibilities! TYFTC!

S_Ally

"he’d somehow befriended every person who was powerful and independent enough to make Estella’s job hard" --> Elspeth Arella

Kalanaere

Damn Earthlings causing problems in the multi-Verse and now God King Asano is gonna have to go plague slap them stupid

SmokeJam

Must be a French guy. Vive la revolution!

Joanna

I like the delve into deeper origins for the "Ustei raiders". It felt a little...awkward..back then

Scott McCarthy

They were not on this continent, and they way she is talking, this is ret-coning the Ustei (unless there was another set of raiders not mentioned) so they would have to be pre-Jason.

Daniel Wills

I thought that, too. But, Estella is their forward scout. If it IS supposed to be Estella he just needs to separate the paragraph in two and emphasize that Estella is scouting out the city.

Gb

Scones

Jared Waggoner

Red velvet biscuits

Owen Kaz

Nah, this started when, or by the sound of it, well before Jason first walked around naked in a hedge maze

Joshua McAteer

I think Estella’s name is used in place of Elspeth once

spec4f150

Clive's wife

Justin

So Jason not meeting with and identifying the new outworlders from earth has come to bite him in the ass? Great start to the team arriving in Greenstone! TYFTC!

Flojoe

So only half of the earth group Returns, the other half gets the honor of getting killed by the System Admin?

Nergie

Finally the red revolution cometh to Pallimustus! Seize the means of production! Give wedgies to all kulaks!

Monadologist

deprived appetites => depraved appetites

J Holmes

So many biscuits...

Svenhardt

First

Michael Madsen

I no longer have to poop

Michael Madsen

I gotta poop

Leon Cleland

9 books we’ve waited for this moment 🙏

Matthew Buchner

Cake

mhaj58

Sandwiches

Raphael

Biscuits


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