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Serial - Suddenly Daddy Part 19

🕑 Added 2018-04-29 16:47:58 +0000 UTC

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St0fF

Nah, I think it's very well done the way it is. This is how the story unfolds, and the middle aged pre-hetero man is not the reader. In fact you may have a look at a different perspective: Jeremy offered to play the girl, but Ted silently refused. By that he was a really good step-dad at that moment, because this was much more considerate of Jeremy's feelings. Making Jeremy strong, making clear to him "You're my boy!" Well, at that moment Ted wasn't clear about what to do anyhow, but by not giving in to the girl-play "the ball was tossed" to overcome Ted's insecurity on how to handle the situation, allowing Jeremy to either really get dressed, or continue his seduction and later toss the ball back by submitting. @Grim: I'm mesmerized by your ability to wrap so much heart, soul, love, and of course smut, into such few words. Maybe I'm over-interpreting, but that wouldn't change anything, anyhow :)

Grimbous

I thought about it Symbiotic, but decided to go this way instead. I'm likely going to have another cross dressing Jesse episode in Runt soon and Helen generally goes crazy with the "girl" talk stuff. I don't like doing two things so similar at once so I kept Jeremy a him since this story is plainly labeled as bisexual. Thank you for sticking with it, I hope I don't creep you out too much going forward.

Symbiotic Life

Admittedly not really my thing but glad to see you get something out anyway. I sort of wish he had called him "Jeri" and used female pronouns if only for my own comfort level. There is also the idea that it might be easier for a previously only hetero middle aged man to come to terms with his desires if he acted like Jeremy was a female. I get that's not where you really wanted to go with it though, oh well.


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