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Serial - My Wasteland Angel Part 20

🕑 Added 2018-07-05 19:33:45 +0000 UTC

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Symbiotic Life

I just realized I wrote "due" instead of "do" in my previous comment, that's an embarrassing gaffe. Anyway I wouldn't say it was necessarily poorly executed, I just thought maybe Willow might register a bit more surprise I guess, maybe ask her about it a little (or at least think it if she didn't want to spoil the mood). By the way is Willow fertile, because while Gabby didn't have a child what if the husband was the one was infertile and not her, wouldn't that mean this is potentially rather unsafe sex. Regardless I do love this story, although I do wonder exactly where it's headed.

Grimbous

Yes, it was on purpose. Gabby's had the crushing weight of fear and loneliness suddenly lifted from her shoulders, allowing her to open up for the first time in a long time. Plus something seemed to happen on her walk to get water. It was meant to be somewhat sudden, perhaps not well executed however.

Symbiotic Life

It was a great chapter but didnt Gab sort of due a weird shift in terms of attitude, she went from nervous, high strung and conservative to playful and confident. I suppose she feels more comfortable with Willow but it still seemed like a rather large change.

St0fF

If that doesn't describe the scene in your head, then I'm all eyes for it!

Grimbous

Whooeee! I think I need a cold shower after that one. I'm not sure if the scene on the page does justice to the scene in my head...but I quite enjoyed writing this one! :)


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