grimbous
patreon
Post Slave Girl Update
🕑 Added 2021-08-30 14:11:11 +0000 UTCWhew! What a story that was. I can only speak for myself of course but I enjoyed the hell out of it. 165,000+ words, 84 chapters, what a journey. Writing "The End" was such a moment of mixed emotions. I'm not sure I stuck the landing but endings are always tricky with serials.
A few thoughts as I close the book on this one:
- The releasing chapters free but keeping a 10 chapter lead for patrons seemed to work wonderfully! Thank you again to those who recommended it and thanks to y'all who have joined since then. One step forward to me learning how to do this Patreon thing. lol
- I definitely think the pacing was a bit wonky. Part of this was due to the story starting as a short and evolving into a long serial.
- Related to pacing, I suspect it was just too long. Personally I LOVE all the little moments and experiences even if they don't add up to much but readership definitely slowly dips chapter by chapter. Not sure.
- I really enjoyed the focus on gentle femdom. I would like to do more in the future.
- I'm not sure how well the "weirder" stuff went over. Aemelia's story and Quin's self fuck for example. Heck, I'm not sure if the hardcore sex scenes really fit with the more romance-like story. But it's kinda what I do.
- The polls along the way were a lot of fun. The magical portal bracelet and book on making spirits were all your doing. I will definitely be looking for more opportunities like that in the future.
- I think I left plenty of stuff there for a sequel but I don't think I'll be starting it right away. I want to give this story a little room to breathe.
And there it is. I enjoyed Quin and Rosa's adventure so damn much. I hope you did to. I am glad I could get it done before the end of the month for y'all.
Feel free to leave feedback of your own. I'll try to have my writer armor on and not take anything too personally, but...be gentle? 😊
I've been so focused on this I'm not really sure what I'll working on next. I think I'll want a few days before I even consider the next larger project. Any specific small stories or projects y'all would like to see in the meantime? I make zero promises, I can only write what I'm feeling, but I'm always interested to know what y'all are interested in.
Thank you all for reading Slave Girl and thank you for your support. I hope you have a wonderful September. ❤
Grim
Comments
Grimbous
Bull Gets the Boy is one I keep meaning to get back to as I would really like to see a finish on it. I'll see what I can do. I would like to explore the teratophilia stuff a bit more, I enjoyed it a lot more than I thought I would.
Khanalas
I would like you to finish Oh Brother or Bull Gets the Boy, if we take the stories you didn't officially drop. For new stuff, I would love to read you do some more teratophilia stuff. I think you did great at exploring this stuff (heck, the main reason I follow your works is because I like how you explore unusual fetishes or the ways you depict the usual ones), so beginning some non-incest short on the topic would be great.
manjak8
loved the story, will wait for part 2. The pacing was just right, it gave weight to it.
nope
Anything futadom will suit me fine.
Grimbous
Currently working on a little RotL thing right now, just for fun (and because I miss my babies). Obviously it won't be posted here. Free as always over at the usual place.
Belly97
I would love to see you write some more for your chyoa works, particularly: R*nt of the L*tter, The D*vlin F*mily, My Wasteland Angel and Charlie in that order. (Please let me know if you want me to change or remove my comment.)
