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American Dream: Part 28 (End)

🕑 Added 2023-09-25 20:18:49 +0000 UTC

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Michael Dierks

I feel bad that I may have been the only one to like the way the story went. I hope it was not too distracting for your regular readers. Thanks again for seeing it through to the end. Good writing and style 😀, engaging story for me.

Grimbous

Thanks for stickin it out nope. 💙

nope

I wouldn't be too beat up about it. I have no real problem with this end outside of it being a bit brief considering the scope of the story. However as a penis size autist, my fedora has been ruffled. Alfred is 5, Cody was mentioned as being easily/over twice Alfred while still flaccid. Then Cody said "you should see me hard" confirming a significant increase from flaccid to hard. Cody isn't a futa, so his penis size is not sacred to me and I don't mind it being smaller or larger so much, but the standing implications are that he was 11 inches flaccid and 'something noticeably larger' when hard. So all these mentions in this chapter of maybe just ten or eleven inches hard make no sense. Regardless, hot few chapters. The payoff of the story where Cody finally put his massive penis in Alfred's wife's small vagina and she came a bunch were great. Even if it was unfortunately brief, I got what I came for.


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