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A Prince's Duty: Part 3

🕑 Added 2024-10-07 17:05:56 +0000 UTC

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Del

A potential few typos: "As you begin to pull of the stomach turning eyesore you’d been forced into your servant leaves to get the lamp." -> off "Despite the fear threatening to break you, you hold my ground." -> your ground "Ambrose snarls to which you just narrow my eyes." -> your eyes

Grimbous

Been awhile since I wrote 2nd Person POV and I find I am constantly slipping into 1st. Let me know if you catch those moments. Also, this CYOA idea is kinda fun!


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