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Chapter 511: Time Flies

🕑 Added 2024-12-20 00:45:01 +0000 UTC

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Dan

@Sunrise I know you haven’t done the editing process yet, but you don’t need to say the word “time” 3 times in the first 4 sentences. The phrase “During that time” is in the second and 4th sentence. I know the idea is to have the readers feel a temporal speed up without forcing it, and it mostly works. I would just delete the first “During that time”. Love the series. I’m a professional editor, I can’t help myself.

DarkMagician_55

Am i misunderstanding something, or did Derek take monsters from the dungeons? I just read back through all of the books and Dave told him not to do it again.

Chloe

Yay Babies! Tyftc

Trevor Mergen

Thanks!

Colten Carr

So brandi is ironwoman

Steven Ramey

Well regardless what you choose to do, be safe. Saw some really cool new masks that double as like visors and shit so maybe going incognito isn't such a bad idea lol

SunriseCV

Yeah. It’s definitely a melting pot for germs and viruses.

Steven Ramey

Yeah that's rough, kinda typical when you get people from all over mixing in one place. Especially when those people are not used to traveling.

Jeffrey Pearson

Tyftc great chapter!

Sailesh Kumar Kumar

Tftc

SunriseCV

Though, it also seems to be pretty draining on them, and they come home sick at the end of the cons each year… so… there’s that

SunriseCV

Yeah, all the other authors go minus like… Zogarth (unless he goes in disguise). And they seem to have a lot of fun. I’ve been invited the last couple of years but never went, but I’m thinking it will be fun to meet all the authors I talk with all the time in person. May have to go secretly then tell them all that the met me, and see if they can work out which person I was. Muahahaha

Steven Ramey

If I wasn't mostly homebound I would love to do stuff like that haha!

SunriseCV

Thanks! I was just checking the other day, and I haven’t missed a week in almost 4 1/2 years, which is crazy to me(mostly that I’ve been writing this for that long.) I’m thinking this year I may take a week or two break though. If I do, it will probably be for LitRPGCon or DragonCon since I haven’t went yet. But, we’ll see. I also may just not. Haha

joel southard

Nice thank you for the chapter

Steven Ramey

I just want to say thanks for continuing to write during the holidays when you don't have to. Your chapters and the chapters of other authors that I follow on patreon are frequently my motivators when I'm feeling at my worst. So having these to look forward to is always a boon, so thank you for that.

Samuel Strode

Glad the book is doing well I enjoy reading them


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