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Chapter 513: Hunter and...

🕑 Added 2024-12-27 00:45:01 +0000 UTC

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Chloe

There is some visiting the Dwarfs to do, maybe a bit of gear to collect, then yes, he needs to advance and poof. Also haven't heard about Jase in a long time. Maybe an interlude to catch up to him doing worse than Derek? There have been hints at a void emperor/king that hoarded void as an affinity, more of that backstory. Would be good. This planets Story Arc is basically done though. Round out Derek's skills to 20, and let's see what the message is. Love the ending, birds and bees talk offer. That's priceless. Tyftc

Roombot

We should be seeing the universal system arrive very soon, it was apparently only a few months away. I imagine lots of action then

Ian

I agree, less so for me not liking this series anymore, I look forward to every chapter and love reading them it’s just less interesting, and it’s not my series and I know I wouldn’t do as good a job but I think Derek needs to hustle his booty up and ascend to a new system and or travel back to his old system, we got snip its of jace in previous books and I was hyped for him to go back

John

While the chapter was funny I’ve rapidly lost interest in this series as every single meaningful plot line was wrapped up and we’ve spent basically two books doing world building in a world the main character is literally about to leave. Love the series and characters but it’s been a slog to read since the wars wrapped up.

Walter Kimberly

Silvi suggesting Stacy as the baby girls name was very touching. It really shows the depth of familial love, and understand, she has for Derek. I love the whole chapter CV great job

Vantanova

Hahaha that ending was great

Trevor Mergen

Thanks!

Chewbacchus

Another edit suggestion: 'That’s what 《I》 was hoping'

Dual.

Tftc!

Puggan Se

"every person in the room (know?) Derek"

Reika Sayuuri

Thank You for such a wholesome Chapter. ❤️

Sailesh Kumar Kumar

TFTC

Jeffrey Pearson

Bahahhahahaha

Samuel Strode

Yes Dereck it’s time for the birds and the bees talk

Iron Akela

Potatoes!

joel southard

Nice thank you for the chapter.

Michael.

Thanks for the chapter.

Lonnie

Ah to get the birds and the bees talk during the holiday season. Perfection

Raymond Mouton

Hah. Thanks for the chapter.

SunriseCV

Poor Derek

Jennifer Leigh

Thanks Rayna

Apollo Greed

Tyftc!

Roombot

Derek has no idea how babby is formed


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