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Chapter 514: Fish Poop?

🕑 Added 2025-01-01 00:45:00 +0000 UTC

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Jordan

You could call this Chapter “An/The Old Goblin’s Passion” or something similar

Chloe

My friend says well sh** but pronounces it whale sh** ... then goes on to say that's the worst kinda sh** as it's all over the bottom of the ocean. Tyftc

Lonnie

My hero. That old elf needs a rebirth or something

Max

Tftc and Happy New Year! Nice pov from marrick!

Drendude

It feels pretty natural to say out loud the way it is. "Silvi can (find and come get) me" feels the same as "Silvi can (see and hear) me"

Sailesh Kumar Kumar

TFTC

Dual.

Tftc

SunriseCV

Haha. I kinda like this

Stephen

You always need a bigger boat

Puggan Se

how about something in line with "A frind at sea"

Puggan Se

"Silvi can find and come get me almost instantly" feels odd, maybe add a "me" after "find", not sure, just feels a bit odd.

Trevor Mergen

Thanks!

Samuel Strode

A trip across the sea

Roombot

Silly old man. Needed more boats

Vayash

Gilligan, the skipper too, a millionaire and his wife, a movie star, the professor and marry Anne heeeeere on Gilligan's isle. 30 years and I still know that song lol.

SunriseCV

I used that one around 40 or so chapters ago. XD

SunriseCV

A three hour tour (A three hour tour)

Samuel Strode

It was supposed to be a three hour tour…

Samuel Strode

How about title keeping promises

SunriseCV

“Three hours? I’ve been on this damned rock for three days!”

joel southard

Nice thank you for the chapter. Happy new year.

Vayash

I was thinking, "Out for a three hour cruise?"

SunriseCV

Lol “Sup Marrick, where SS Minnow?”

Vayash

Happy New Year. Too bad he isn't stranded on an island, Derek could make a Gilligan joke.

Walter Kimberly

Happy New Year


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