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Chapter 580:

🕑 Added 2025-07-10 23:45:01 +0000 UTC

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Havics Child

Good title, leave it. When I'm reading i normally set the title aside on purpose so I don't get spoilers. Plus, this is a fight we have wanted to see since book 1 for most of us and after the first chapter Jace is 1st in for most of the rest.

Patrick Burns-popieniuck

That is a great title I have been waiting for this fight for so long so awesome

Chloe

Tyftc

Lonnie

Title is great

Clifton Camelot

27 and ...

Albadia

YASSSSSS! That’s what we’ve been waiting for! And yah, title is fantastic. Even if I’d seen it AND got the reference, it would have only bumped up my surety that Derek wins from 90 -> 100

Vilastromoz

The titles really good, definitely keep it. "And one" could mean a lot of things, and most people already expected Derek to win the fight

Khal Lee

I agree. Title is fine as it is. I suppose some will get it... or a hint of it. But I still think the title is fine.

Craig Carey

I like it. Derek deserves the title...finally. I also am not sure most people will get it until after they read the chapter

Harold Bukoski

And One is good....If you're worried about spoilers....Maybe "Finally." As in he finally one one of the bouts...though it could be a play on words that Derrick Finally found Jace....cause it did seem to take a bit....but that's not what it was about...it was about the fact that he finally won a fight, which we don't find out until the end.

Walter Kimberly

I think the title works out great. It might be a spoiler if you have been bing reading the series but I didn’t catch it

Jaroslav Zapadlo

Woohoooo!!!!!

TwistedVanity

Agreed

TwistedVanity

I believe. Once Jake ascends he will be enemy number 1 with the existing Void Monarch/emperor and his army. I vaguely recall Davernesh/Dave talking about it. Derek will need help, and here's Jace. Seems a perfect set up. Leave the title as "and One" no one expects Derek too lose, and it's not too obvious at all except in hindsight.

Maria Klein

Forgot to add I’m really looking forward to the reactions of everyone in the time out room!

SmokeJam

Title makes sense. Tbh, Derek's win is 100% expected even without "and one" title. The invasion is still under way, Jace is a side quest in that regard, he is not far off ascending, losing against Jace here after all wouldn't make sense. Why leave a story string open like that and the mc unable to return when you can also turn it into an exciting ending of the old relationship, turning it into something new now. I'd say go for it, it's good and not much more spoilery than what 99% of the readers expect to happen anyways.

Puggan Se

I wouldn't get the spoiler title, but thinks that mainly becouse I read the score 28-1 as 28 to 1

John

This is a prime example of the problem with writing good stories…For some reason authors can’t write as fast as I can read. If the author would just start writing 1-2 books a day I wouldn’t have this problem. 😈 Unfortunately for some reason he probably has a life outside writing and doesn’t want to spend 24/7 doing so. Guess I’ll just have to settle for writing goodness a few times a week. Thanks again for the great chapters SunriseCV. Edit: though I would like to see more/longer scenes from the defeated champions/guardians. They are fairly entertaining.

SpectreHarlequin

This is like Saitama vs Boros, an epic fight, but in reality Saitama(Derek) was never in any real danger of losing.

Arnon Parenti

Is it Silvi's turn to fight hangry man? Can she feed him some dragon stew after? I really want Jace to fall in love with Silvi's cooking and make real attempts to woo her away from Derek. You Eat What You Kill is the perfect match to Jace's Battle Lust

Denalo Zecon

Jace has his weird movement skill, but Derek while in combat was already thinking of several other movement skills that would work for Jace. So Derek is a VIP in this world; Derek could talk to Jace and give him whatever skills are both available and that Jace says he could use. Plus equipment too. Plus Jace wanted to cook the part of Champion he defeated, well he did not want to cook that body part himself but was curious if it would be a good meal...and Silvi could create that meal Jace was curious about. RE Jace ascending; my guess is Jace had met one condition of ascending before this fight with Derek, but he ignores a lot of his System messages. Fighting Derek might have given Jace his second ascension condition, like it seemed to do for Jackis. Jace probably has a legendary class already, but if he ascends he would probably become a mythic class like Derek; better in every way for Jace.

Dan

Honestly, if at least one of the the attacking champions doesn’t go after Derek in the next chapter I’d be very surprised.

Bryan

Great title! Keep it! And awesome fight

Alex Lyons

Basically Jace is nearly invincible in close range melee, but has incredibly huge weaknesses, a huge crash afterwards, and he has to pick up steam, an assassin or sniper could easily kill him if he is unprepared from his described abilities.

Ian

Never mind, Sunrise said on another comment “Last time Derek thought about it, he said something along the lines of 'he was 27 and 0... or was it 28 and 0?' So, when Derek went with the smaller number, Jace corrected him.”

joel southard

Thank you for the chapters

Kendal Bozant

79 levels

Zack

Title is great. I wouldn't have put it together until the last lines anyways, and we kinda knew Derek was gonna win anyways because...well...he's Derek.

Undead PettinZoo

Nope. Perfect title. Keep it.

John

I’m just hoping Jace learns more about ascension at some point. He needs the stronger challenges of a higher system, and it would get boring fairly quickly after he beat most of the councillors asses and then had already crushed basically everything that could challenge him.

bill bassett

I don't think it was too much of a spoiler I just knew that Derek was going to win because this story is about him and we couldn't have Derek losing the fight and getting out of the war but great chapter I'm super happy that Jase and Derek finally met up can't wait to see them talk and catch up

granndfunk

The other possibility for chapter title could be "Do you give up?", but honestly you like your idea so much just go with it. It's not like we didn't expect him to win this fight anyways.

Reno

I can understand how Jace has been waiting for years to fight the best tank ever. Everything else probably dies too quickly. But Derek can take a beating.

Reno

Does the 28 mean that Jace is about to win after his defeat? Or does it mean that Derek miscounted?

SunriseCV

Last time Derek thought about it, he said something along the lines of ‘he was 27 and 0… or was it 28 and 0?’ So, when Derek went with the smaller number, Jace corrected him.

John

Great chapter. Looking forward to some good chats next week and then hopefully some fighting together. I really want to see Darvesh’s face while hearing Jace fighting with the gaurdians it would make my month. That and watching Jace crush Kelvin. Not sure what’ll really happen but that’s the most enjoyable I’ve been able to come up with in my mind. This weeks chapters have shown why Jace would be ranked around third, he is really strong if you let him pick up steam but if you don’t let him control the fight and prepare appropriate counters he would struggle. Either way, great chapters this week.

Addison Grimes

Good with title …. To cloud it a bit , you could say… “and then there was one “

BoonePharm

Been waiting so many books for this 😂. It was perfect. Title (which is awesome btw) may/may not be spoilery depending on how many details they have been keeping track of. But it's not like we didn't know how the fight was gonna end.

John

I think only champions and guardians can just “give up” he would have to make it back to the array.

Corwin Amber

If Jace 'gave up', would he be sent to room of defeated? or is that only available for the guardians/champions?

Denalo Zecon

The title could be a spoiler, but only for someone who had read recent chapters. "And One" is so vague that if someone only reads chapter titles; none of the actual chapters...then that title does not say what happens or what "And One" means. I am curious about the difference between Derek saying 27 and Jace saying 28, both would refer to how many times Jace defeated Derek but why would Jace say one more? I am sure that will be clarified next week, so it's fine.

Vincent Hill

Next week is so far away.... lol

Samuel Strode

I thought the title was going to be surge of war

Samuel Strode

It’s foreshadowing I like the title

nick

Definitely keep it, very fitting

SunriseCV

This was what I was hoping for. Maybe enough words passed by that Derek mentioning their w/l count wouldn’t connect til the end, then there would be an ‘ah ha’ moment at the end.

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!

SunriseCV

Yeah. I was worried more so about it letting people know that it was ending in the chapter instead of maybe going on another chapter or something. Idk why, but it’s like… one of my favorite chapter titles. Got a big smile when naming the chapter and such.

Salguod

Kinda spoilery but not entirely. Like baseplate said, we knew it was coming. Derek is OPAF

Jeremy

Do it, Derek deserves it!

Jordan

I like the title didn’t even pick up on the fact it was their W/L count until the end.

Cody Cahill

Title seems fitting, we all kinda have an idea of the outcome going into the chapter. I would’ve been more surprised if Jace had won. Derek has more raw stats and the void. He has what? 50 levels worth of stats before he came to the davenresh system and got to start over at level 1 with those stats and titles. Yeah he’s OP lol

Maria Klein

I like it. It is a bit of a spoiler but I for one just wanted to read about their fight I wasn’t even thinking about who won.

Apollo Greed

Definitely not too spoiler! We all knew he would win lol

Baseplate36

The title is kinda a spoiler but we all knew the outcome already

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapters.


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