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Chapter 590: Two for Two

🕑 Added 2025-08-07 23:45:01 +0000 UTC

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Chloe

Tyftc

JJ

Ah. I see. Derek is going to throw them in the Time Chamber

Dan

It’s easy to tell that HR is having a blast writing this arc. I have one note on something that bumped me. The second line of paragraph 10 is confusing. It seems like the subject changed without letting readers know. (After that, Marrick turned and left. Just as he was about to say something back, he heard Marrick’s voice again. “You definitely weren’t hearing things this time.” ) It’s hard to tell to whom the “he” in the second sentence is referring. Grammatically it is Merrick, but “he heard Merrick’s voice again” so it has to be Derrick? But Derrick wasn’t referred by name after Merrick. Merrick is still the subject. I’m sure it’ll be cleaned up in the editorial process. But wanted to point it out. There are so few if these I’m sure it was a mistake.

Nate

Idiots of epic proportions...made me laugh, should call this chapter 'Epic Proportions'

Kendal Bozant

The completely cavalier attitude from both Jace and Derek is great

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!

joel southard

Thank you for the chapter

Jordan

It’s time.

Chris

2 chapter at a time again?? You treat us to well😘

Jaroslav Zapadlo

I knew staying up tonight was the best choice I could have made!


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