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COMIC: Space Camp: Complete Revised Day 2 Chapter
🕑 Added 2023-08-17 07:31:00 +0000 UTCAlright, alright! I'm done enough with this revised chapter of Space Camp to post it as one long read! But first...
- The original rough draft of Day 2 (16 pages)
- The expanded and inked pages: 1-5, 6-10, 11-15, 16-18, 19-22
And now...
The touched-up and re-ordered pages!
Current plan is to send these off to my agent for her feedback while Matt takes a pass at giving them a slightly-more-professional color treatment.
One step closer to getting it sent out as part of a pitch to publishers!
I'll work on making a post about pointing out the page re-shuffling that I did and why, as well as why I expanded the pages that I did.
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UPDATE: December 23, 2023:
I am now working on the third (and final?) draft of this chapter. It is scheduled to have 29 pages.
Comments
Pavel Curtis
Really really looking forward to hearing about the reordering and expansion decisions!!
Erika Moen
πΈπ <---Kermit wavy arms in emoji
Zena Darling
Yaaaaayyy! *insert Kermit the Frog wavy arms gif*
