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Chapter 7.38
🕑 Added 2023-04-12 21:37:49 +0000 UTCvery astute, Toivo.
The top panel actually changed quite a bit from the thumbnail. I had initially planned a panel that was more of a straight on shot, which was fine but kind of boring. I also used a similar shot a few pages back, when Aidan was picking up the notes on page 33. So I decided to change it up by doing a top down shot.
One piece of advice I learned early on was from Mad Rupert (who makes the webcomic Sakana), which was to try and vary up pages by including different types of panels, like full bodies/feet! So I decided I needed to add in some feet.
You can see the little advice tutorial here: https://sakana-comic.tumblr.com/post/163801445410/mynameismad-hello-in-case-you-havent-heard
and the specific page, in case the first tumblr link doesn't work for some reason: click here
Comments
D'Artagnan Wayland
Beautiful work on setting the mood
I feel like I'm in the balcony, secretly listening in! Toivo, Toivo, Toivo! :)
