After the Great Outdoor Fight: Salmonwood
🕑 Added 2024-02-10 18:00:20 +0000 UTCWe see Ray and Beef growing distant in the wake of the victory which redefined their lives.
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tintar
I was born in a laundromat.
Brandon Rahhal
...what's that now?
Alex Moscovitch
Those are my doggs right there.
Miles
Man, this made me smile. Thanks, Chris
Toilet Cobra
We come a long way, baby
Chris Onstad
Hemingway style story in one line đȘđ»
âCool Mayonnaiseâ Hank Spurlock
Post lift, tears falling lightly on the stationary bike.
Chris Onstad
Quite welcome, mâdude. I hope you read this fifteen-page story on the treadmill though and not between two hammer curl sets
âCool Mayonnaiseâ Hank Spurlock
Got me cryingâ in the gym, my dude. As a kid raised by a gas station, it is appreciated.
Chris Onstad
Thank you Mr Wms!
Matt Mitchell
Right on, thanks!
Chris Onstad
I started this â the part up until the room lunch â in late 2019, for the Oni anthology. The rest, and a considerable rewrite, happened last Thursday and Friday.
Matt Mitchell
Chris - did you write this ârecentlyâ, or âback thenâ? The answer doesnât affect my enjoyment, just curious in the creative sense.
Jenn
He didnât know whether to feel insulted or respected, which is a common strabismus of children who are raised by gas stations Situations that increase the surface area for heroics My code is a dog's code compared to this
Jay Williams
Well, I started out - not not liking it, but sort of confused at the beginning tone and wondering where it was going - and damned if it wasnât just right. Ray may need a little help getting there, but he does take care of his boy- and vice versa. âOh crouching Jesus in the shadows a man was never this much of another man's dogg,â as someone once said. Finest kind, Onstad. Finest kind. Thanks.
Brendan J
talk about a buried lede!!
Chris Onstad
Youâre quite welcome James. Perhaps I shall chronicle their upcoming visit to Six Flags - Platinum After Hours
Gavin Byrnes
Brother you can quote me as saying anything great about Achewood that you want, whether or not I said it, because I probably thought it. But yes, you have my formal permission.
James Cash
This is perfect. Thanks Onstad
Chris Onstad
Thank you so much for your kind words Nate.
Chris Onstad
Weâre talking Icky Bolero here, not some hoot-toot like Kanye West
Distant Egg Song
It's kinda fascinating to think that Ray somehow wasn't already rubbing shoulders with that level of jet-setter.
b.zap
Pommes oder Brot?
Omurice
I began by hating Ray for his association with the ultra wealthy, Iâve spent time with some in a service capacity and my contempt knows no bounds, and ended humbled, friendship like this canât be derailed by mere money.
Chris
We should all be so lucky as to have a Delfino grace our lives
Nate
Absolutely incredible writing. Your comics show us the characters and let us learn their standard comings and goings, but it feels like an introductory work when compared with your short fiction prose.
Julie (HiDeeHoGal)
I knew they would hug but I did not know any of the rest.
Chris Onstad
Thank you Gavin! That is so kind of you. Can I quote you or just use the quote in promo stuff for the Patreon?
Gavin Byrnes
this is so beautiful. i have no idea how i would even *begin* to explain to somebody how beautiful it is. but i guess everyone here already knows. might cry.
Chris Onstad
I have done this! Looking for an agent. Thanks for the kind words Sam.
Chris Onstad
Spoilers, man! Spoilers! These people shouldnât know about Ray and Beef winning the big fishing contest together yet
Sam Hayfield
Please write a novel. Please. Doesn't have to be Achewood, just need 300-500 pages of fiction written to this quality. Please.
Matt Mitchell
âReverse misleadâ w the description, nice
Vincent Verweij
Wow. That's a repaired broken friendship