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Complete edit/Rhoun art update
🕑 Added 2023-04-22 20:30:13 +0000 UTCSorry its a day late!
https://mega.nz/folder/vjoGGLSY#q5sOyA1VYGCgW8zV7JBLmA
Really really busy here still, but I really want to get back to making things for y'all!
Here is the FULL edited story, from the beginning to the current end at the 2.2 update.
Its a bit shorter, but I think its better and I cut a lot of trim off.
Please let me know what you think!
I'm going to start working on 2.3 again very soon!
May our roads again cross!
-Cryptid
Comments
BarryanaGrande
I love Rhoun so much, he's just the sweetest boi π
Cryptid
Yes no you are correct, that is an old error from when Marruk was from somewhere else, Ill be sure to change that!
Tom
Do they call equators on any planet a belt? It threw me off because Rhoun talks about the belt on Iyeo.
Cryptid
The belt is a place on Uriun! Although I can understand if that causes confusion thanks for the note!
Tom
I didn't really have any complaints before, but the edited stuff is a huge improvement. The only issue I noticed was that Marruk says he's from the belt on day 2, but everyone says he's from Uriun later. Also, unzipped pants+no underwear Rhoun got me actin unwise
Kayko Wolf
The story is definitely going to be better! Your writing for this story is really one of a kind. Canβt wait to see what you have planned for is in the future. Also good to know are boy Rhoun doesnβt wear underwear. π€£
