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Chapter 74 - As Dawn Breaks

🕑 Added 2022-08-24 15:45:58 +0000 UTC
Chapter 74 - As Dawn Breaks

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TMarkos

Lmao, I had intended for her to withdraw her hand in the paragraph where she spoke next, but apparently I forgot to say it. I'll make a modification so she's not wielding chunky salsa.

Gardor

Towards the end, maybe have a little line about Sera letting go of Mike's hand. Otherwise, Mike squeezing his fists would crush her, and she wouldn't have another hand to gently touch him

TMarkos

I was really happy with how the Batzar image came out, haha - one of my earlier experiments with Midjourney. I hope I can put together some more scenery images in the future, they're actually more challenging than characters in many respects. Luc is benefiting from all the lessons about the Safid that they learned during their first transit through Safid territory - a single powerful challenger wielding Saleh's opposing soul is like catnip, he's never going to say no to that. It feeds into his narrative, and you can imagine how he felt as he got to slowly exert superiority over his matched opposite.

Blorcyn

Well that's a perspective and a half, and confirms what we all feared I suppose. Saleh, in his moment of personal triumph, has confirmed his strength of soul is greater than Stelar's new bearer, but I suspect that he has died by Luc's surprise. Smoke and Stellar united, like Spark and Stanza, promises a lot of horror. I hope Michael's not wrong in how Luc will approach things once his gory work is done. Also, the picture of the tree in the council room is superb.

TMarkos

Whoops, good spot - thank you!

Alexandria Clarke

>but it something in the tone of Unai’s voice warned him away. >but something in the tone of Unai’s voice warned him away. Feel free to delete once corrected


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