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MAY DAY MAY DAY HAVE ANOTHER SHINE PAGE pg 295

🕑 Added 2020-05-01 17:53:34 +0000 UTC

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As terrible and revolting this situation may be, I'm gonna trust the previous part of the story and know things will get better. Especially once the rest of the party members learning that one of them would ever torture another like that

Ugh the sarge is such a sleezebag 🤬

well... she looks super cute being blushed and sucking her thumb c:

AndMore

This has crossed more then a line. Foreplay is one thing, but this... this is plain torture! If fate looks upon Star and takes her side, the repercussions coming back at him will be worse then anything he could possibly do to Star. I can hope at least.

Just because her dad is against her and she is against her dad...doesn't mean she isn't hard wired to try and make her parents proud of her. As sad as that is after all the things my parents have put me thru I'd still do anything for them.....even tho they don't deserve it

Wait. Star's dad was pretty much ready to wright her off after the shed incident. Why is Star still trying to her dad proud of her? also can't she report harassment or blackmail to a higher up? As far as I know all information would be kept confrontational, and she could then just transfer... right?

So many lines crossed with this.. I can't wait to see him get what's coming to him...

None ya

You know I was hoping before that sarge would be a nice guy eventually but well that fell through

Lol corporal crinkle

Stuck between a rock and a hard place.

TheDaren

Keeping a cool head is key. I don't think Star realizes just how good a hand she still has to play, she just needs to play it right.

Yeah its def supposed to get under your skin. So whilst i dont like making folk feel uncomfortable im glad its hitting the mark

*hugs* Im sorry. For what it's worth I'm living it right along side with you. It is horrible. I promise it will get better...just not quite yet. Sorry.

Still he got his cards down. I think it should proceed with a cool head to see where this goes.

I...I don't know how much of this I can take. This reminds me of a situation I was in and it was incredibly a powerless situation. I have so many emotions with these last two pages.

TheDaren

Man the baby talk and making her suck her thumb has me actually feeling physically nauseous, to only imagine what it is he has on that list. I guess it goes to show how invested in this story you've gotten me so as unpleasant as it feels I also love it.

Karma bites us all at some point right :) Dont wanna give the game away but things'll work out eventually

Devin Sarter

Poor Star!!! I really hope he gets what is coming to him!!!😡

Interesting way of dealing with marallis


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