Shine page 312
🕑 Added 2020-06-30 10:08:20 +0000 UTCThis is a really weird page for me to draw.
It just looks wrong LOL
I'm sure everything will be fine. Well... back to work we go. wonder how we're gonna deal with Marellis today. Star seems a bit more confident...maybe she has a plan?
Have a shine page
https://www.dropbox.com/s/8brppz1vrybn6pk/pg312.png?dl=0
Comments
It took me a few seconds to realize that was star. A shell of her former self. I hope she will be rewarded in the long run with her embarrassing situation and will not escalate further because of that sarge fellow
Youโre right, I just wish it wasnโt such a hard fought battle at times. Especially for people with nothing but good intentions who just want to try an better themselves
*hugs* Sometimes we put our hearts out there and they get trampled. Its true. that shouldnt stop you for putting your heart back out therer again. Life is full of risk and sometimes we have to be a little bit reckless with it to get the things we want. The first steps of my AB/DL journey were messy/chaotic/positively shambolic I did dangerous things and I was hurt and taken advantage of and ....I learnt a lot. the comic will tackle distressing subjects at points but life is like that. good things and bad but the good bits are always worth it
As much as l love this comic and I know the story will change, I really hate stuff like this. Brings up a lot of past feelings of โI told you so, I knew you were a freak, and this is what you get for trusting others with who you really areโ. Sorry for the vent comment but this one in particular struck a blow.
TheDaren
I'm still going to hold strong with my theory that this unfortunate turn of events is a Trojan benefit to Star. This reaction will be everyone's reaction. Yuri is already suspicious that she is in some kind of trouble, and anyone who knows her will see this change in hair as at least an odd sign. The piece about her brother makes this sting that much more, but think of it this way: its dye. Even if it matches it's not actually Star's natural hair color, just a facsimile she is forced to maintain.
Noooooo!!!!
yeah the blackmail part is supposed to be uncomfortable really, but dont worry its not gonna last a huge deal longer in the great scheme of things
Silvood
I love the story so far, even if I'm really uncomfortable with the blackmail part. REally makes me hate that kind of people, and that's not the kind of feeling I'm searching on a comics, but your work is still fantastics, keep going :D (Yeah, I'm sensitive on that kind of subject ^^)
Caleykat
I dont like ๐ก why would he do that
That's it. Marellis is dead. I am reporting black mail to the higher ups.
Doesn't look bad at all i think. But knowing she dyed her hair because of her brother is still a bit sad
FezzikFleabaggins
I think the mention of her brother and the realization of what she did is going to hit her really hard on the way to work. *hugs kitten* ๐ฅ
samantha rebecca clarkson
As you will need one. It would be good if manda found out about the Sargent and what he has made poor star do.
samantha rebecca clarkson
Ikkle one. What train coach have you got to hide in.
seriously I hope you have your fallout shelter built
Darkmod
You're so good at storytelling because this page put me so on edge with worry. I hope Marellis gets run over by a car or something cuz he is evil to do this to her.
Kuroro
This is one of the pages that tugs at my heartstrings the most. :( Ughhhhhhh, that look. :(
Fisk Marellis
Oh boy, people are going to flip when this page goes live.
You know Star is distressed when she does not correct you when you tell her her hair ever was "pink" instead of light purple. I hope she has a plan that goes smoothly to the desired outcome D:
She snuck in
I dont think it was actually revealed why she dyed it so you can be forgiven for not knowing LOL
NOOOOOOOO! ๐ฑ๐ญ๐ฑ
Who is THAT Lynx? A new character?
She is super cute with her natural hair though. ๐
I forgot why she dyed her hair. Cried. ๐ข
she's gone back to her natural colour. at least Marellis didnt pick black or deep red or something. I think that would have looked awful.
Emily Wells
Sorry I get emotionally invested in characters in stories I care about >~<
Emily Wells
No no no why is this happening!!! Why is he doing this to her, Iโm crying right now this is abuse of power. Please please tell some how things go back to normal and he is ostracized by the community. Please Star >~<
Jacques
I think it looks nice ๐
i know right. she looks like a frikkin grown up
Nerdy_Little
Damn.... It just looks so odd