Shine page 355

Damaronwolf

Okie so I just missed the page. :P I'm a doofus.

Please let Manda get to them first before my fist reaches Marellis' face to make his snout no longer stick outwards.

Oh no oh no poor star she has to much on her mind already

Jalena (Little Legreedy)

Ah i love filling my stomach with fear and panic first thing in the morning

I... Err.... Um.... *Runs in circles not knowing what to feel or think* Awesome writing as always. I really can't predict what's coming and I love it.

-breath in deeply with finger tips touching- heck! -breath out-

Cloud Grandson

Oh God, what does Marellis have in store for our little lynx this time?

Jared Godwin

The way this is going sorta makes me wanna smite Morallis with a 2x4 or something. This Page has me twitching in anxiety, anticipation, and suspicion. Ultimately, good job on this page.

chris john

The new experiment by the scientist, feels like a setup for some of the short stories you do

Yay! That’s good! This page just gives me anxiety that stars been outed. Bob needs to have a chat with morallis.

I think actually looking at where i am in the story...It'll probably be decmeber when we get to a point where the blackmail arc is primarily resolved :D so not long to go now

Can we get to the part where morallis gets his burr kicked pretty please? I love the story but mphhhh! I know he’s up to no good. Can’t stand star being black mailed.

Maybe its all an elaborate nightmare...right? I mean if he goes public with her secret like this he loses control over her, right? I hope so, or Martin may actually kill him

Adri

BIG SHENANIGANS ARE AFOOT

Oh god I am not liking the sound of this. He’s gonna dress her in a custom onsie or something I’m guessing. This is gonna be torturous. Murder suspense. Looking forward.

samantha rebecca clarkson

I hope it something nice but he should not be getting anyone else involved. he is in trouble when others find out.

Night Mist

Okay, you're really got my mind whirling here. I'm very nervous about what is going to happen next. I keep thinking I know what's gonna happen next, then you make a sharp turn to a direction I didn't see coming. You really know how to keep readers interested. I LOVE IIIIIT!!!

I'm going to remain dilusional

Or maybe we’re the ones to be surprised? 😳

Devin Sarter

Omg, just reading this page filled me with anxiety!!!!! They seem to be old friends so my guess is this is some mind game he's playing on her, cause I don't think they would team up against Star for anything weird or malicious...I hope....

Raymond R Elder

I can't wait to see the Surprises!!!

Silvood

Everybody here are worried I think.

SekhitheFops

... I have concerns. MANY concerns.