Shine page 398
🕑 Added 2021-07-09 11:06:55 +0000 UTCSo. This is the start of a bit of a discussion between the three of them. Stars thought bubbles and dialogue at points during this scene may come across as a bit...problematic I guess is the phrasing, her questions and thoughts dont come from a place of malice but she is a pretty clueless. Luckily Kim is quite patient and is there to guide her and Star is a fast learner.
As I stated in the previous page, this whole scene is being hashed out with strong input from Kim herself.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/a30z1942a0vxvwa/pg398.png?dl=0
Comments
IM NOT CRYING....YOU'RE CRYING. I just got some dust in my eyes...yeah...
Jade Coyote
Awww so sweet and I love your story telling
samantha rebecca clarkson
Yes I know a few.
Luca 'Renee' Shoal
There are several of us! SEVERAL!
This is hitting home but in a good way :)
you are so good at weaving this story
Fyari
wahhh ;w; now i want the next page even more
With that little precious smile at the end, I could see it coming very soon.
We havent got quite to that bit yet the conversation has only really just started :)
I was expecting star to give her a big ole hug
Great work Star. Also, a trans woman Mommy? That is amazing. I've not seen like any representation of that before and it makes me feel incredibly included. Outstanding work on all fronts.
One can tell the cluelessness :'D I am intrigued how it will develop! Good work, Star