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Shine pg489
🕑 Added 2023-03-24 09:36:51 +0000 UTCClunky transition page.
I always know what the sections of shine need to be and have those parts fleshed out, but I never really know how to get from one chunk to the next chunk
As I was explaining in the patreon group yesterday (which is here if anyone who isnt there wants to be there)
https://t.me/+UrEEA3PduxtmZGU8
So yeah this is super clunky but it gets us there, so sorry for the brute force LOL so have this page of Shine
https://www.dropbox.com/s/2fqe2vxzlfu3zvy/pg489.png?dl=0
Comments
What about the surprise after getting 3 stars? https://www.furaffinity.net/view/50591211
I like it! It definitely provides some good context to the next segment and gives a bit of a ‘recap’, which is nice! :)
SpringGear
hehe very cool page
Jalena (Little Legreedy)
I dont think it seems to chunky. The flow works just fine :3
Manigeitora
I absolutely love Manda and Lure in the center panel!
Sicle_Family
To be fair if she told Elly she might be there swinging a rolling pin
Idk why I read the narration text in the voice from Stanley parable
DVoid Comics
To be fair, I kinda have that same problem too
