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Interlude: PRT

🕑 Added 2025-10-11 05:42:18 +0000 UTC

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DC2008

I just love how you write Piggot and Armsmaster in this scene. You can tell both of them are sitting there, kicking themselves for not figuring out the multitasking earlier, and thinking about how incredibly useful it is. Also really like how you’ve used Contessa in this fic, just showing up periodically to give things a little nudge. The right amount of force, in the right place, at the right time, to maximum effect. The bit at the end is great too, about the meeting only being fifteen minutes and all the people being busy—it addresses why RCB and friends have not figured out more (limited bandwidth), while also emphasizing just how useful Taylor’s multitasking is (as she would not be so limited). It’s a delightful bit of story crafting, very information dense while still being easy to read, and I love it.

Oren

Delightful irony that she’s the one doing the same dual powerful identity move as Taylor, but doesn’t see it.

Zac Overman

Not disagreeing that this is a lot of high level people for a rogue, but given that said rogue opened the door to knocking down several white supremacist crime networks across the nation and is possibly able to design evacuation plans for supernatural disasters, it's not unjustified.

B

> Rebecca signed off the call. Fifteen minutes, and you’d normally wonder what was a big deal about fifteen minutes… > But nobody in that room really had fifteen minutes to casually waste. I was going to comment on that, cause that's some high level people for a particularly smart rogue in nowhere USA. Still not ENTIRELY sure this was justified, considering how things go to shit on a regular basis on Bet, but close enough.

Andrew W

I *really* enjoy how next to no-one in this fic holds the Idiot Ball. Extremely well-reasoned given the information available to them and absolutely nobody is underestimating what she can do. Also, that Becky is *thisclose* to figuring out the truth, but still stuck thinking of them as 2 different people because of the initial profiling of OW as an older man, despite JUST NOW discussing that the initial assumptions around Investigator were wrong… delicious


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