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Chapter 76: Fay Dunbar (R-18)

🕑 Added 2020-11-28 02:53:24 +0000 UTC

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Thanks for the chapter on a good story

more to come!

yeah, I wanted to do that, but I ran out of words, plus most likely Hagrid finished it up, he is after all really good with beasts.

KristofferXxXxX

Another great moment with one of Harry’s future wives, damm that was very hot. But I would also love to see Hagrid’s reaction after those six hours had passed by :3

cathia

Well, good chapter, but it would be better, if you gave Hagrid's reaction after those 6 hours. Was he disappointed, or maybe he said that he have already collected the missing ones? It would be a good way to show, if Hagrid really wanted those two to collect the dodos or, if he saw what they did and decided to give them opportunity to enjoy themselves. Sure, I can guess, which one was it, but it would be better to still show his reaction.

cathia

Don't worry about it, it's understandable with all those -50% and -75% sales

sorry I was only able to get one chapter out, had to take advantage of the black Friday sales. It's really the only time of the year I shop.


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