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Chapter 165: House Peverell

🕑 Added 2021-05-08 22:29:28 +0000 UTC

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Darth Xion

Is there no other way aside from a giant light vs dark war? HP shall be the King of the ashes instead. Dunno, I feel if these so called dark families have such historic heritage from the past isn't it childish to simply exterminate them?

You should look into getting a beta reader. There’s a lot of misspellings, incorrect punctuations, and incorrect words used. An example would be using the word conceited early in the chapter. The word you should have used was conceded. Conceited means being vain or excessively proud of yourself. Conceded means admitting you have surrendered, yielded, or admitting you were wrong on a topic. Also, if you sentence is sounding like a question, then you need to end it with a question mark (?).

Jesus if that’s the concept for the peverell palace I’d love to see your other ones that’s magnifique

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Yes, Peverell will be back to its power soon thanks to Harry just like the Potter!

KristofferXxXxX

I wonder if Harry will restore the Peverell Palace. Would love to see the Ancient and Most Noble House of Peverell regain its power and finally be restored to its former glory and strength :3


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