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Chapter 714 - The Gray Sun
🕑 Added 2025-10-15 08:39:49 +0000 UTCPOV Ruler of Greed
Thane leaves as quickly as she usually does after one of her speeches. It is always the same, with the only difference being the event she announced.
Knowing Humility, I can guess what to expect, and I try to estimate who will perform best and is most likely to win. Out of curiosity, I go over possible scenarios and recall dozens of events Humility worked on during the millennia. The decision isn’t simple. Even with all that information, I have a hard time estimating the winner.
There are too many talented people, and among them are the ones I see as weapons I could use against Pride once they develop. Yet his name keeps returning to my mind, even with all these people in the mix.
Nathaniel seems to feel my eyes on him. He turns to me and tilts his head in question.
I just shake my head, and with a shrug, he turns away.
The black crown over his head follows behind him. It feels so weak, so inconsequential compared to what I saw Kindness do. His body is weak too, constantly creaking, about to break the moment he stops holding it together. It is scarred, twisted. Powerful traits and broken constructs from his early floors have burned themselves into his being. All his mistakes and successes are there for me to see if I wish.
I came up with dozens of ways to fix it, and dozens more to make him stronger. Events, Beyond quests, secrets on the floors I could hint at, things his sharp mind could notice and learn from, making himself stronger. It is something I have done many times, turning people like him into the most powerful versions of themselves again and again.
But what for? Many of them lost their drive the moment they even heard a fragment of what Pride is capable of, or saw the battlefields he fought on so long ago.
Still, I keep searching for someone who can do what I couldn’t. What even my master couldn’t.
I think Nathaniel will break. I strongly believe he won’t succeed. Maybe his body will betray him before his mind. Maybe his effort won’t be enough. Maybe the opponents in his way will prove sharper and more cunning.
But I don’t want him to die.
In one of my weak moments a year ago, I connected to the system and recalled what remained from the instance of the second floor he and his group went through. The records of my imitation were still there, the fragments of it. That realization of a false world, feelings of the end approaching, and something else.
I took it all in and made it mine because of my greed, and I allowed myself to relive what my imitation felt. A mistake, but one I made on purpose and by my own choice.
So here I am, giving him only the bare minimum of help, knowing that the other Rulers do more to guide and support their attendees. Even other Handlers do that. But not me. Sometimes I even make things harder for him.
I don’t want to stain him with my hopes and my failures.
The party is slowly coming to an end, but as always, many use it as an opportunity, just as countless others have at parties before. Nathaniel probably doesn’t even realize it’s ending, and I doubt he bothered to gather any information before coming here to know that.
The Handlers take a step back, and the attendees with sharp senses start to notice. The conversations grow louder and the confrontations sharper.
With his good senses, he gradually notices it too. Many other attendees I’ve handled would look to me for guidance, but he doesn’t even give me a glance. He just says something about grabbing a drink and walks into the middle of the crowd, mumbling that maybe this party won’t be a failure after all.
Kindness presses against me, and I feel the warmth of her Vessel.
"Ruby," she whispers, "I know you're stubborn, but sometimes you should listen to my advice. What's the most important rule I taught you when you were just a cute little Ruler?"
“To not mess with the system.”
She laughs, and that laugh is different when it’s just the two of us here. “But you keep refusing to listen, just like your master did when I told her not to challenge Pride.”
“At that moment, she wouldn’t listen to anyone in the entire universe. You know that.”
“I do. And I also know about your little project on Eladore, along with the tutorial records you tampered with.”
“I’m not trying to hide it from you. You know that.”
Her hug tightens, and she squeezes me. “I do. He’s a silly little thing, isn’t he?” she says, changing the subject and gesturing toward Nathaniel.
He stands there surrounded by a group of velnars, including the one he threw over the balcony. Hela is there too, saying something condescending to him.
“He is… not enough,” I say.
“Who’s saying that, Ruby or Greed?” Kindness whispers into my ear.
The black crown over Nathaniel’s head begins to spin and grows slightly in size. As the colors around him drain away and the world turns black and white, the crown’s blackness feels deeper, hungrier, more consuming. His Ley Lines unravel into the area, setting up his teleportation marks, completely invisible to any attendee nearby, even Hela.
Like an engine kicking the heart of a long-dead Champion back to life, the seals showing traces of Master Lissandra’s handiwork unwind and flood him with thermal energy, which he channels and converts into mana.
Even now, I’m sure he doesn’t fully realize the scale of what he did, or what it means when combined with all the abilities he has. Or maybe he does and is simply waiting for the right moment to truly unleash it.
Nathaniel already has access to more mana than any other attendee currently in the tutorial or Beyond. Not Kaari, not Hela, not that man from his tutorial, not even Quintan, who’s also mana-oriented, can compare. He has that much mana, as just a third-year attendee.
I can even feel the mark the system placed on him, claiming him as a possible Absolute candidate, refusing to let anyone else declare him. If he succeeds, his strengths will be amplified and his weaknesses will deepen.
“I am the one saying it,” I answer Kindness, and wave my hand.
The left arm of a Handler trying to secretly help those facing Nathaniel explodes. She screams in shock more than pain, spinning to find who did it. When she fails to trace it back to me, she turns pale and teleports away.
Then, like a vortex, his crown begins pulling in the surrounding mana, making every attendee notice it and feel that tug, an attempt to take their mana, to claim it, to make it his own.
Nathaniel stands in the middle of that storm, his hair whipping around his head, golden rings in his eyes glowing with unnatural light, sharper in a world drained of color. For a moment, the golden hue of his trait feels like sunlight fighting to pierce through a planet eclipsing it.
His expression doesn’t change. That confidence in his eyes looks like arrogance as he stares down Hela, who’s trying to activate her spatial skill but failing. He tracks her perfectly, processes every move faster than she can act, breaking each attempt apart and stripping away the combat style she’s most comfortable with.
He looks almost disappointed, as if he expected her to be more of a challenge. It shows on his face, and Hela’s expression twists with anger. But before Hela can react, a figure appears beside her, pulled there by sheer force through the backlash, tearing her body apart.
Nathaniel’s sister, Victoria, stands next to Hela. Blood from the torn skin on her forehead drips into her eyes as she attacks the velnar without hesitation. Her body breaks further, and from one of the pieces, a duplicate grows.
Everyone moves at once. Other groups join the fight. I hear Brich laughing in the distance as white lightning flashes near him. Kaari fires her arrows at multiple targets. Hela swings her arm and activates her rings. And that dumbass keeps losing himself in the flow, gathering even more mana, which concentrates around his crown that continues to feed, hungering for it.
The other Handlers watch with interest, interfering only when someone might get too badly hurt, or to raise barriers to stop the damage from spreading.
Turning to Kindness again, I ask, “Can you wake up Charity?”
Still hugging me, she squeezes tighter. “He is always grumpy when I do that. You know he will wake up from his slumber soon anyway.”
"He’s probably the least grumpy being there is."
"Ha! That’s what you and the others think. It’s hard to see, but over time I’ve learned to notice it. He gets really grumpy when he’s just woken up or when he’s hungry."
“Fine, I’ll believe you. Will you do it? You know I would not ask it usually and would just wait a decade or three for him to wake up, but seeing how quickly things change, I would rather have him fully awake sooner than later.”
“Okay, Ruby, I will do it. But only because I also want to see him after so long.”
“Thank you. I’ll give you the coordinates of a planet like the ones he likes, where he can stay for now. If he wants to, of course.”
I return the hug to Kindness, and as she lets go, I give one last look toward the mess before moving away.
With the awakening of the Ruler of Charity and the return of the Ruler of Pride from seclusion, the second and first strongest Rulers will both be active, and there’s much to do.
***
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"Wake up, sleepyhead," Kindness whispers softly on a distant planet.
That planet is covered entirely in ancient trees, older than some of the Rulers, set in a snowy world so cold that most Champions would die there.
Here, surrounded by trees, something sleeps undisturbed. Smaller animals move around, either unaware of the presence buried under the snow or used to it, as it has not moved in a long time.
Though she isn’t there, Kindness keeps whispering, her voice carrying across the vast distance, slowly waking the sleeping being.
The snow slides off as it opens its mouth in a long yawn, tongue stretching out. It rolls to the side, shaking loose the remaining snow and revealing thick gray fur. Then its eyes open, orange, glowing, and filled with deep, unyielding flame.
The Ruler of Charity sniffs, twisting his ears and listening to the voice before fully standing up and shaking off all the snow covering his body. His presence expands with such speed that it causes a smaller earthquake, the snow from the trees blown away over huge parts of the planet before the wave keeps moving farther, changing and searching for something.
For a spark, a speck of ember it could use.
He searches through the solar system but finds all the planets dead, devoid of flame. Yet the star is still there, weak and dying, but still akin to a spark of fire.
The Ruler of Charity takes a step and disappears, pulled toward that spark and appearing on the surface of the sun, an incomprehensible distance away. The flames wash over his gray fur, not leaving any damage but warming up a very old body after a long winter slumber.
Finding another star, the Ruler of Charity appears upon its blazing surface in a distant solar system, continuing toward the coordinates he was given. The star roars beneath him, a storm of yellow fire taller than worlds, but its fury bends around him, powerless before his calm stride.
Next, he finds a speck of fire on a planet in the system, moving toward the spark thrown into the air by an active volcano before reaching out again and appearing on another star.
Dozens of times, he moves like that in quick succession, traveling a distance many civilizations will never reach, before he arrives at his target, appearing by a small fireplace made for him where a blonde woman in a white dress sits waiting.
With a happy laugh, she stands and hugs his huge body, burying her hands in his warm gray fur, and he rubs his head gently against her.
After their greeting, he lies down with her, snuggling closer and resting against him as she starts talking about all that happened while he slept, and he patiently listens to her voice.
The Ruler of Charity. The Cinderbear. The Gray Sun. The Bear That Survived Time. One of the very few beings older than the Ruler of Kindness.
***
Comments
Warren Mack
Amazing
Hms
Charity of course has to be the murderous bear. It’s too bad since the curse of Bambi would take on more depth if he was the second strongest. Wonder how many picked up on that winter slumber Easter egg thrown out by Greed to hint at who charity was.
Sushitrash
Charity huh, fitting actually
Psyren1596
No way
Audrey WJ
I should have known it was cinderbear the moment he was asleep on a cold world ........
Meg G
I thought it was gonna be a deer
Fdrugc
I thought it would be a corgi.
Homie G
Cinderbear's curse will strike again!
Ronnel
Awesome POVs!!!
Nemesis
I kinda want a picture of this moment. Sounds awesome, and something that may become part of the stories left behind by those who see him fight in the future. "Nathaniel stands in the middle of that storm, his hair whipping around his head, golden rings in his eyes glowing with unnatural light, sharper in a world drained of color. For a moment, the golden hue of his trait feels like sunlight fighting to pierce through a planet eclipsing it."
Kirin
Thank you for the chappie!
Death56
Charity is interesting for cinder bear
Nemesis
I believe he is one of the most powerful attendees in the current Beyond
Nemesis
I suspect that before when Nat told Greed that she had changed, and wasn't like the Ruby he knew on the 2nd floor, that he was wrong. She may be more experienced, more powerful, and have done a lot of things, but deep inside she is still the same scared girl who wants someone to rely on, to take care of her. Maybe moreso now that she has lost the rock in her life that was her master.
Lance Beam
TFTC
Sadyix
"I think Nathaniel will break. I strongly believe he won’t succeed. Maybe his body will betray him before his mind. Maybe his effort won’t be enough." She must be talking about another Nathaniel, the guy I know is too crazy for that to be a possibility.
Arme nd
Who tf is Quintan?! We gon see him in 3rd tournament?
jax rammus
I mean... thats her prime planet, she could do thst herself if she wanted. There's nothing nat can do that she cannot, and if he tried the rulers would stop her.
jax rammus
Ah the return of the king asshole
xerebz
Kindness was only said to be one of the oldest beings and never said to be older than all the other Rulers
Nate El
Nathaniel still has the Coordinates for Eladore. Maybe Greed/Ruby’s project is creating a bridge from the beyond floor where the Lisandra the absolute is to Eladore?
Youkai-sama
Fuckin CinderBear! 😮
William Johnson
I got you! As a bonus, Ruby's there too! https://i.giphy.com/26uflv5FX1IGuAlUs.webp
William Johnson
Aww he's just a big teddy bear that maybe eats stars! Cute! Thanks for the chapter!
Sir Supports Alot
There's a few, but it's common knowledge no one can be champion during the tutorial, yet he's got two years left and is already close to that level skill level wise, he's already got more mana than anyone else in the tutorial, he's slaying it so much the system itself claimed him
Andrew
Thank you!
bads aafsg
TFTC But now you owe us picture of Ruler of Charity :P
daniel singleton
She wants a weapon and a friend???
mibrainisdead
Oh fuck, I did not expect that...
Ralph
For a second I convinced myself that the Ruler of Charity would be Grumpy the time travelling cat... 😅 I'm an idiot
Yozora
Oh fuck, cinderbear is goddamn ruler, i mean... fuck this guy
YKEON
I'd assumed he was sloth and that it was a matter of "I really can't be bothered having a massive brawl so if one of you could just walk into my mouth that'd be great."
Bryan Yeip
He thinks his version of Ruby is dead but said she relived those memories, plus she seems less like she's just honing him to be a weapon with some of that stuff context. Seems like Greed got too greedy and is catching feels.
Nemesis
"Even now, I’m sure he doesn’t fully realize the scale of what he did, or what it means when combined with all the abilities he has." It means Nat is a Timelord! ...no, I think part of what she is referring to is that with the conversion he effectively has 2 mana hearts?
13L00D13ANE
I forget who, but i remember someone suggested the idea that Rubys eye trait lets her see the value in things. Because of it, she was able to see the world didnt have any 'value' and so thats why she knew it was fake
zoarian
"Even now, I’m sure he doesn’t fully realize the scale of what he did, or what it means when combined with all the abilities he has. Or maybe he does and is simply waiting for the right moment to truly unleash it." Ruby, trust me, Nat knows full well how broken the infinite mana glitch is lol. It's also crazy he already has more mana than everyone else... He is truly an examplar of a single stat enjoyer.
Ivan Jelenić
Yes!
Ivan Jelenić
Nice. I like it.
Isaac Lung
Fuck that furry asshole
granndfunk
Because he hibernates!
13L00D13ANE
Well, i was definitely wrong about THAT. I was convinced ruby was pulling a double bluff with the deer, but it turns out the ruler *was* cinderbear! Even more shocking, he ISNT wrath?! What an unexpected(for me) twist. Well done Cerim Edit: i guess in retrospect, only eating *one* person out of the group at a time is *quite* charitable lol
BlackRazaras
Thanks for the chapter
Konrad Pagacz
What's up with kindness supposedly being the oldest being yet cinderbear being the oldest ruler? Mhm? So who's left? Wraith is up for grabs. I don't even remember the other floors. There was this one floor with a post apocalyptic world vibe - it was where that champion with broken mana heart was. That's also where the big snake monster was, right? Any ideas for the ruler of this floor? Might be even the person with the broken mana heart. Or the big monster. The next floor was astral prison right? Where there were powerful champion held prison. Who tf knows whose floor it is. And the next one was the battlefield where mimics were fighting against mana crystal race. Possibly the big mimic becoming the ruler there. And there's also floor 9 which is big primordial forest.
Stoney
tyftc
tishane Imperial MageKiller
Ty for i was just sayin im gonna have to make my own lol
Blooper
Ruby should totally gift the fragment of the first sun (or star?) to Cinderbear and say it's a gift from his #1 fan.
Oaktree
Cierm spends years engraving hate on cinder bear. I.e nats and others “fuck cinder bear” comments. Or the different cinder bear posts at the end of chapters on royal road. Me sees last few paragraphs questions how im supposed to hate the fluffy teddy bear.
Natalie
It kind of reminds me of that Kevin bridges bit about being mugged
PizzaTime123
Greed was tutored by the OG Lissandra, and she still is scared of him
PizzaTime123
Pride must be an unoly abomination
Rocotrap
So Floor 1 : ruler of charity cinderbear Floor 2 : ruler of greed Ruby Floor 3 : ruler of kindness Floor 4 : ruler of diligence ant king Floor 5 : Floor 6 : Floor 7 : Floor 8 : ruler of envy Floor 9 : Floor 10: Floor 11: Floor 12: Floor 13: I'm not remembering if any of the others are already spoken for
zoarian
I like that despite being extremely powerful the Rulers exhibit all the typical foibles of humanity
Rocotrap
He said something about her being one of the oldest rulers, maybe cinderbear is older but became a ruler later?
Edmund Dillon
I was wondering who was the ruler gonna be for the 1st floor, my money was on the invisible goblin haha. Tftc!!!!
Florian
I still bet that he didnt accept the quest
Liam Zay
Wonder how Cinderbear has lived so long. Kindness has Immortality and I know powerful beings live longer, but I thought there were limits. Also Nat is not going to like meeting him lol
Nerø
Uhhh. We've only got 1 more day left tho
Kingtut527
I knew the 1st floor ruler had to be the bear it was the most significant monster there.
Nerø
Sooo, any guesses what Nat might be planning here? I'll go first. What he is doing probably is tied to his quest on becoming an Absolute Candidate. Like taking over everyone else's mana or something...
asdsa fasfas
Didn't Ruby said like 5 chapters ago that Kindness is oldest ruler that still alive? So, either bear some undead abomination or Cerim just forgor :P
Lizy Flore
Had a funny idea. What if the Ruler of Pride is a demon ? That’d be so on point 😂
Borbino the great
I think one of my favorite things about this story is that even as Nat grows stronger he doesn’t feel like an unbeatable monster he’s a man one misstep away from shattering into a million pieces but he keeps going and surprising everyone pride is gonna get his ass kicked
mitchell kaiser
Ugggggghhhh the intrigue it just keeps getting better and better!
Gwiddion
Good theory
Erebus
Bear
frankie doerr
Now that I think about it cinder bear wasn’t that bad protection for food is very charitable
frankie doerr
Thank god there’s two more days
I Is Patron
Praise be the the Ruler of Charity, for he shall be the first Ruler tier snack our Corgy Overlord will feast upon. His selfless sacrifice will be but a step on the noble Biscuit's journey
Thedevilsdemon
No not the cinderbear XD
Erebus
Thanks for the chapter 😊
Nemesis
Also, that secret on Eladore. Do you think maybe Ruby has restarted civilization on her home planet? And perhaps a certain minion lives on that planet?
Rene Duvall
This book is great
Rene Duvall
Charity???
Aoth the Arcane
:o
Claro reyes
Tftc!
Nemesis
2nd floor Ruby really did know that she was in a fake reality!
vEnviouz
TFTC!!!
