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091 The Story So Far

🕑 Added 2025-03-15 17:48:04 +0000 UTC

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Zitim

really enjoyed this chapter!the change of perspective was a little jarring at first, but as i continued reading i really ended up enjoying it!

laura garcia

Keep reading 📚. I thought is fun to catch up with everyone and their perspective. I love the 🐠 🐠 character

Anthony Flores

Ah, that’s a shame—you’re missing out on some good stuff! But of course, you’re not obligated to read if it’s not your thing. This chapter leaned more into third-person POV, and the Narrator/Voice works as a higher-level presence in the story, so it flows without needing breaks like asterisks or hyphens. Either way, I really appreciate you giving it a shot, and thanks for sticking around!

Nokashii

Honestly, for me that change in perspective at the beginning was completely out of character for this story, to the point where it made me skip the entire chapter

Anthony Flores

Author's Note: Whew! This was a particularly chunky chapter—7,300 words long! I debated cutting it in half (or even quartering it), but in the end, I decided to keep it all together. It just felt right to present everything in one go rather than breaking up the momentum. This chapter was almost like an interlude, but at the same time, it was packed with feelings, revelations, and tying up a lot of loose threads. I really enjoyed writing this one because it allowed for some deeper dives into character growth without anyone in the main cast being left behind. I hope you all enjoyed this chapter as much as I did! Let me know what you think—your thoughts, theories, or just general reactions. I’d love to hear them! 😊


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