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33 - Terra

🕑 Added 2025-10-01 15:43:00 +0000 UTC

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UnderwhelmingBird

I mentioned her being treated like the commander of a skirmisher regiment, but I suppose she *is* sorta like a professional duelist/small-scale skirmisher, yep? That's the vibe I got from the intro, anyhow. It's a good thing she was able to ask questions from the Baron abt her fam, since it's the kind of info that'd be tough to get otherwise. Nice that she's already thinking fondly of her adoptive family. I wonder what mama bear's gonna think about her Brand New Daughter(tm)

Emmanuel Salvador Papa

Actually when Luna was stuck in the forest in the earlier chapters, I wrote it there that Luna uses her magic to clean herself, and that of course included cleaning her teeth. She didn’t have a brush with her when she woke up in that world, so when I wrote that she uses magic to clean herself, I intended it for an overall cleaning. It might be my fault for not explaining it in that chapter, if I did explain it in that chapter, I might probably need at least a thousand words, and it would lean to a heavy narrative, and I thought my readers, you guys would feel like I was dragging the story early on if I wrote that part, but if you want I could still write about Luna’s routine when it comes to cleaning herself using magic. But you have to wait after Tierra for that. I could also try to insert it as Luna is in Tierra causing a ruckus as always, that’s if I could find a spot to insert it without ruining the pacing of the story. Thank you for pointing out your concern. Thank you for reading!

Nutelya

Does Luna even brush her teeth with the amount of candy she eats ?


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