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Gamble King chapter 08. A Bold Gamble .Part II
🕑 Added 2025-05-23 19:58:47 +0000 UTCMax needed more rerolls.
The Dragon Heart wasn't going anywhere, but his chances of successfully stealing it increased dramatically with more lives to spare. Gambling with just six felt risky, especially after burning through so many on his previous attempts.
Max spotted a group of men gathered around a small fire at the camp's edge. Unlike the other soldiers who were eating or drinking, these men were checking weapons and speaking in low, serious tones. Three of them wore dark leathers with muted metal studs—no shiny buckles or reflective surfaces. Scouts, maybe. Or sentries.
Perfect.
Max approached, trying to project confidence he didn't feel. The men fell silent as he neared, their conversation dying like a candle snuffed out.
"Lord Vanheim," one of them acknowledged with a curt nod. He was older than the others, with a salt-and-pepper beard and scars that twisted across his weathered face. "Unusual to see you about at this hour. Cards not to your liking tonight?"
The others chuckled, sharing a joke at Harek's expense.
"I'm looking for the night patrol," Max said, ignoring the jab. "The sentinels."
The scarred man studied him, suspicion evident in his narrowed eyes. "You're looking at them. I'm Torsten. This is Skeld and Varn." He gestured to the men beside him—one tall and thin with a prominent nose, the other short and stocky with arms like tree trunks.
"What business does Lord Harek have with the night watch?" asked Varn, the stocky one. "Run out of wine to spill on your fancy clothes?"
More snickers from the group.
Max sighed. "I want to join your patrol tonight."
Silence.
Then laughter. Not just chuckles this time, but full-throated guffaws that had Skeld slapping his knee and Torsten wiping his eyes.
"Join us?" Torsten finally managed. "For a patrol?"
"And why would you want to do that, Lord Vanheim?" asked Skeld. "Afraid your bed's too soft for your precious lordly backside?"
Max felt heat rise to his face but kept his voice steady. "I need the experience."
"Experience?" Varn snorted. "In what? Getting your throat cut by monsters? This isn't a pleasure ride through your father's hunting grounds."
"I know that," Max said. "I want to learn."
The three men exchanged glances. Torsten leaned forward, the firelight casting deep shadows across his scarred face.
"Word around camp is you've been running every day. Training with a bow. Now you want to join night patrols." His eyes narrowed. "What's your game, Harek?"
"No game," Max replied. "Just tired of being useless."
This response seemed to surprise them. Torsten studied him for a long moment.
"You want to learn how to be a sentinel?" he asked. "You? The same lordling who vomited on his own boots after drinking a full skin of Volmark's fermented honey at last year's feast?"
Jeez, Harek. What the hell?
"Different priorities now," Max said simply.
Skeld spat into the fire. "Eastwatch changed many men."
"Not all for the better," Varn added darkly.
"We leave while the cooking fires still burn," Torsten said abruptly, standing up. "Bring a bow, a blade, and water. No armor that jingles. No perfumed oils. And if you slow us down, we leave you where you fall."
Max blinked, surprised by the sudden acceptance. "Just like that?"
"Just like that," Torsten confirmed, his voice flat. "First rule of the sentinels: we judge a man by what he does, not what he's done. You want to walk the perimeter in the dark with us instead of warming your bed? So be it."
"Though why you'd choose that is beyond comprehension," Skeld muttered.
"But understand this," Torsten continued, fixing Max with a hard stare. "Out there, your family name means nothing. Your title means nothing. You follow orders, stay quiet, and do exactly as we say. Or you'll find yourself explaining to the Bone Mother why you were stupid enough to die in the dark."
"The Bone Mother?" Max asked.
The three men stared at him.
"The aspect of death," Varn said slowly, as if explaining to a child. "She who weighs the souls."
"Right," Max nodded quickly. "Of course."
This wasn't in the novel.
"While the flames still burn," Torsten repeated. "And leave that lordly tone behind too. No place for it where we're going."
Max hurried back to his tent, gathering the required supplies. A bow and quiver—easy enough, they'd been propped against his bedroll. A blade—he found a serviceable hunting knife in his pack. Water—he filled a skin from the common barrel.
By the time he returned, the three sentinels were already standing at the camp's edge, barely visible in the shadows. Torsten inspected Max's equipment with a critical eye, then nodded once.
"You'll walk between Skeld and me," he instructed. "Varn takes point. If we stop, you stop. If we crouch, you crouch. If we run, you better run faster than whatever's chasing us."
"And if something catches us," Skeld added with a grim smile, "try to die quietly so the rest of us might live."
"That's... practical," Max said.
"We're not out for a midnight stroll, Lord Vanheim," Varn said. "Lycanthropes have been spotted three times this week. And they're not the worst things in these woods."
"I don't expect you to protect me," Max assured them. "I can handle myself."
The three sentinels exchanged knowing looks.
"Is that so?" Torsten asked dryly. "And how many night patrols have you handled yourself through, exactly?"
"This will be my first," Max admitted.
"Then how about you shut your mouth and open your eyes?" Torsten suggested, not unkindly. "You might live long enough to see morning."
"Fair enough."
With a nod to his companions, Torsten led them past the sentry line and into the darkness beyond the camp's fires. Max was immediately struck by how silently they moved—these men made less noise walking through underbrush than he did walking across his apartment's carpeted floor.
More impressive still was how quickly they seemed to vanish from normal perception. One moment, Varn was clearly visible ahead of them; the next, he seemed to blend with the shadows, becoming just another dark shape in the night. Max found himself having to concentrate to track the scout's movements.
The night air was cool and smelled of pine and distant smoke. Animals rustled in the undergrowth, momentarily falling silent as they passed. Overhead, stars wheeled across the vast darkness, occasionally obscured by wispy clouds.
They reached the edge of a forest that bordered the eastern side of the camp's valley, where the trees stood like black sentinels against the night sky. Varn raised a hand, and they all stopped.
"From here, we move as one," Torsten whispered. "No talking unless necessary. Follow our path exactly."
Max nodded, trying to ignore the flutter of nervous excitement in his chest. This felt real—more real than sitting in a marketing meeting or riding the subway. He was in a fantasy world, hunting with trackers under a starlit sky. If he hadn't been so focused on staying alive, he might have actually enjoyed it.
Varn entered the forest first, melting into the shadows between trees with a grace that seemed impossible for a man his size. Skeld followed, then Max, with Torsten bringing up the rear.
The forest was alive with sound—the soft hooting of owls, the rustle of leaves in the occasional breeze, the creak of branches overhead. Max focused on placing his feet exactly where Skeld had stepped, avoiding twigs and dry leaves that might give away their presence.
After about twenty minutes of careful movement, Varn signaled for them to stop. He crouched, examining something on the ground that Max couldn't see in the darkness.
"Fresh tracks," Varn whispered, voice barely audible. "Large. Moving northeast."
Torsten eased forward to look, then nodded. "Lycanthrope?"
"No," Varn replied. "Something else. Something with... claws."
Max felt a chill run down his spine. "What kind of claws?" he asked quietly.
The three sentinels looked at him, their expressions hidden by shadow.
"The kind that rip men apart," Skeld replied flatly. "Keep your bow ready."
They moved deeper into the forest, following the tracks. Max's eyes had adjusted to the darkness, but he still struggled to see what the sentinels found so easily—disturbed earth, broken twigs, occasional tufts of fur caught on thorns.
"How far are we going?" Max whispered to Skeld.
"As far as the tracks lead," came the reply. "Scared already, lordling?"
"Just calculating," Max answered. "If this thing circles back toward camp, we should warn them."
Skeld gave him an appraising look. "Not as stupid as you look."
"Don't sound so disappointed."
"We don't leave the camp unwarned," Torsten said from behind them. "Runners will relay messages if we find something worth knowing."
They pressed on, moving deeper into the wilderness. The ground began to slope upward, the trees thinning slightly as they approached a rocky outcropping.
Varn stopped again, kneeling to examine something on the ground. This time, Max could see what had caught his attention—a dark stain glistened on a flat stone, barely visible in the starlight.
"Blood," Varn confirmed, touching it with his fingertip and rubbing it between thumb and forefinger. "Still tacky. Recent."
"Animal?" Torsten asked.
Varn shook his head. "Human."
Max felt his stomach twist. "How can you tell?"
"Smell," Varn replied, as if it were obvious. "Animals smell different."
"There," Skeld whispered, pointing to a gap between two large boulders. "A cave."
Max peered into the darkness. Sure enough, a black opening gaped in the rock face, like a mouth waiting to swallow unwary travelers.
Torsten signaled for them to spread out, keeping low to the ground. "Approach from three sides," he whispered. "Harek, stay with me."
Max nodded, notching an arrow as he followed Torsten in a wide arc to the right of the cave. Varn circled left while Skeld approached from the center.
As they drew closer, Max detected an odor—a musty, feral smell mixed with something metallic and rotten. It grew stronger as they neared the cave entrance.
Torsten stopped about twenty yards from the opening, crouching behind a fallen log. Max knelt beside him, bow half-drawn.
"What's the plan?" Max whispered.
"We've found its den," Torsten replied, eyes fixed on the cave entrance. "Now we wait."
"For what?"
"For it to return, or for dawn. Whichever comes first."
Max frowned. "So we're just going to sit here all night?"
"Welcome to being a sentinel," Torsten said dryly. "Lots of waiting. Occasionally interrupted by moments of sheer terror."
"And people volunteer for this?" Max muttered.
"Some men are born to cards and wine," Torsten replied with a shrug. "Others to watching the darkness so the rest can sleep sound."
They settled into silence, the night sounds of the forest continuing around them. Max tried to stay alert, but after an hour of nothing happening, he found his mind wandering. The Dragon Heart. Gregory's test. Sabo and the whole mess of being thrown into this world.
A soft whistle broke through his thoughts—three notes, barely audible. Varn signaling from his position.
Torsten tensed, raising his own bow. "Something's coming," he breathed.
Max strained his eyes, peering into the darkness. At first, he saw nothing. Then a shadow moved among shadows, detaching itself from the trees about fifty yards from the cave entrance.
It was large—the size of a bear, but moving with a fluid grace no bear possessed. In the dim starlight, Max could make out a sleek, muscular form padding silently through the underbrush.
"What is that?" he whispered.
"Mountain cat," Torsten replied, voice low. "Biggest I've seen in years."
Max watched, fascinated, as the enormous feline prowled toward the cave. It moved with confidence, massive paws placing each step with deliberate silence. As it passed through a patch of starlight, Max saw its coat—dark, possibly black or deep brown—and the ripple of muscle beneath.
And above its head, glowing faintly, was the number 4.
Max's heart leaped. Four rerolls. If they killed this beast, he'd have ten again.
Noice.
The mountain cat paused, lifting its head to scent the air. For a breathless moment, Max feared it had detected them. But then it continued toward the cave, disappearing into the dark entrance.
"Now we wait again," Torsten whispered. "It'll be more vulnerable coming out than going in."
"We're really going to kill it?" Max asked, surprised at the twinge of reluctance he felt.
Torsten gave him an odd look. "No, we tracked a man-eating predator through the night so we could name it and invite it to dinner." He gestured vaguely with his bow. "That's what sentinels do, Vanheim. We find things that want to kill us, and we kill them first. Did you think we were out here collecting wildflowers?"
Max grimaced. "Hmm. Okay, that's on me. I walked right into that one with the stupid question."
"On that we can agree," Torsten replied, turning his attention back to the cave entrance.
They waited, arrows nocked and muscles tense. Minutes stretched into a quarter hour. The forest had gone quiet, as if holding its breath in anticipation.
A sound emerged from the cave—the crunching of bones.
"It's feeding," Skeld whispered from his position, just loudly enough for them to hear.
"We move on my signal," Torsten instructed. "Aim for the eyes or throat. Anywhere else, and you'll just make it angry."
Max nodded, drawing his bow fully now. The mountain cat was dinner and four rerolls. A necessary sacrifice.
The waiting continued, tension building with each passing minute. Then, finally, movement at the cave entrance. The mountain cat emerged, its muzzle dark with what Max now realized must be blood.
Torsten released a sharp whistle—the signal.
Four arrows flew simultaneously, cutting through the night air. Max's struck the cat in the throat, while the others found their marks in its chest, eye, and shoulder.
The mountain cat roared, a sound so deep and powerful that Max felt it vibrate in his chest. It whirled, trying to locate its attackers, blood already pouring from its wounds.
"Again!" Torsten commanded, already nocking another arrow.
Max drew and fired in one fluid motion. His second arrow struck the beast directly in its good eye, drawing another earth-shaking roar.
The mountain cat charged blindly, but not toward any of them—its sense of direction compromised by the arrows in both eyes. It crashed into a boulder, staggering sideways before regaining its footing.
The sentinels fired again, their arrows finding vulnerable spots with unerring accuracy. The beast was moving slower now, bleeding heavily from multiple wounds.
It made one final, desperate lunge—toward the sound of a snapping twig—before collapsing to the ground, legs twitching. One last arrow from Max—directly into the base of the skull—ended its suffering.
The number 4 above its head flickered, faded, and disappeared.
For a moment, no one moved. Then Varn emerged from his position, moving forward to check the fallen beast. He prodded it with an arrow, then nodded to the others. "Dead."
"NUMBER OF REROLLS REMAINING: 10," flashed briefly before Max's eyes.
"That was..." Max struggled to find the right words.
"Efficient," Skeld supplied, coming to stand beside him. "We don't let animals suffer unnecessarily."
"Your shot was true," Varn said, examining the arrows in the cat's throat and eyes. "Didn't expect that from you, Vanheim."
"I heard you were good with a bow as a boy," Torsten added, kneeling beside the mountain cat. "Guess that was true."
Max blinked in surprise. "You heard about my archery?"
"Everyone knows the Vanheim boy could shoot," Skeld said with a shrug. "Before you discovered dice and women, that is."
"Your father used to boast about it," Torsten explained, already working to field-dress the carcass with efficient movements. "Said you could put an arrow through a ring at fifty paces when you were twelve."
"Wouldn't have believed it if I hadn't seen it myself," Varn admitted. "That was a perfect shot—hitting a moving target at night, in the throat."
To hear these hardened warriors acknowledge his skill, even if it was really Harek's skill, was strangely satisfying.
"We'll take the pelt and choice cuts," Torsten decided, his knife working quickly. "Leave the rest for the scavengers."
"Make yourself useful, Vanheim," Varn said, tossing him a coil of thin rope. "Help us secure the meat."
For the next half hour, Max assisted as best he could, following their instructions and learning more in thirty minutes about field dressing than he would have thought possible. By the time they finished, they had a bundle of prime cuts and a magnificent pelt that would fetch a good price in any market.
"Not bad for your first patrol," Torsten told Max as they prepared to head back to camp. "You didn't get yourself killed, didn't give away our position, and even contributed to the kill."
"Definitely exceeded expectations," Skeld agreed, hefting the meat bundle onto his shoulder.
"Though that's not saying much," Varn added with a smirk. "Expectations were that you'd trip over your own feet and alert every predator within five miles."
"Happy to disappoint."
They made their way back through the forest, moving more quickly now that stealth was less critical. Max found himself watching the sentinels closely, trying to mimic their movements, to learn how they placed their feet, how they distributed their weight to move so silently.
"You planning on making this a habit?" Torsten asked as they neared the camp.
"Might be," Max replied. "If you'll have me."
The three exchanged glances.
"You're welcome to join us again," Torsten said. "But understand—we can't be responsible if something happens to you out there. Lord's son or not."
"I don't expect you to be," Max assured him. "I take responsibility for my own neck."
"Fair enough," Skeld nodded. "Just don't slow us down."
As they moved through the forest, Max couldn't help but marvel at how the sentinels seemed to glide across the underbrush. Their footfalls made almost no sound—not even the snap of a twig or rustle of leaves. Meanwhile, every step he took sounded like someone jumping on a pile of autumn leaves.
"How do you do that?" Max asked, wincing as his boot crunched on another dry branch.
"Do what?" Torsten glanced back, brow furrowed.
"That..." Max gestured vaguely at their feet. "You're barely making any noise. And earlier, Varn practically disappeared into the shadows. I could barely track him with my eyes."
The three sentinels exchanged looks that Max couldn't quite decipher.
"You want to learn?" Skeld asked, sounding genuinely surprised.
"Yeah," Max nodded. "If you're willing to teach."
He braced himself for the mockery—some crack about his weight, or how a pampered lordling could never manage real sentinel work. That's what Harek would expect, given his reputation.
But to his surprise, Torsten simply nodded.
"Start with the boots," he said, tapping his own foot. "Look closely."
Max knelt down to examine Torsten's footwear. They weren't the standard-issue boots the regular soldiers wore. These were different—darker, with thicker soles that seemed oddly textured.
"The soles are layered," Torsten explained. "Deerskin on the outside—soft enough to feel what's beneath your feet. Then a middle layer of boiled wool soaked in pine resin. Finally, an inner layer of rabbit fur."
"Completely dampens sound," Varn added. "And keeps your toes warm in winter."
"We make them ourselves," Skeld said, a note of pride in his voice. "Secret of the sentinels. That, and knowing how to place your weight."
"Your weight?" Max asked.
Torsten nodded. "Stand up. Now watch."
The scarred sentinel took three steps forward, moving with that same ghostly silence despite the forest floor being littered with potential noisemakers.
"Outer edge first," he explained, demonstrating another step. "Then roll inward to the ball of your foot. Never put your full weight down at once. And always know what's under your foot before you commit."
"That's why you moved so slowly," Max realized.
"Exactly. Speed kills in the forest—and not just the prey."
"And the fading into shadows part?" Max pressed.
"That's the hides," Varn said, plucking at his leather jerkin. "Not just any leather. We treat it with a mixture of ash, crushed charcoal, and the sap of shadow pines. Makes it absorb light instead of reflecting it."
"Is there more to it?" he asked. "You seemed to notice things I couldn't see or hear."
"That's the Heightening," Torsten said, reaching into a pouch at his belt. He withdrew a small vial filled with amber liquid.
Max's interest piqued immediately. "A potion?"
"More of an elixir," Skeld corrected. "Distilled from certain mushrooms that grow on lightning-struck trees, mixed with wolf's blood and mountain herbs."
Max thought about how alchemy was barely mentioned in the Chronicles. Bjorn had always been the type to solve problems by hitting them harder rather than using clever concoctions. An absolutely stubborn skill grinder.
"What does it do?" Max asked, fascinated.
"Sharpens your senses," Torsten explained. "You hear more clearly, see further in darkness, smell what's normally too faint to detect."
"That's how you identified human blood earlier," Max realized, looking at Varn. "And how you tracked the cat through the forest."
Varn nodded. "Makes you more... aware. Of everything."
"Side effects?" Max asked, already anticipating the catch.
"Smart question," Torsten said approvingly. "It burns—like fire in your veins at first. Makes your heart race. And when it fades, you crash hard. Sleep like the dead for hours."
"Plus the dreams," Skeld added with a grimace.
"Dreams?"
"Vivid. Sometimes unpleasant. Price you pay for borrowing the senses of a predator."
Max considered this. Pain, exhaustion, bad dreams—all temporary. But the skills it offered could be invaluable, especially for someone planning to steal from under the nose of the kingdom's most alert knight.
"Could I try it?" he asked.
The three sentinels looked at each other, clearly surprised by the request.
"You?" Skeld said skeptically. "No offense, Vanheim, but your body isn't conditioned for it. The strain could stop your heart."
"Or at least make you vomit for hours," Varn added helpfully.
"I handled the patrol well enough," Max pointed out. "And the hunt."
"One night doesn't make you a sentinel," Torsten said. "The Heightening takes years to properly master."
"I'm not asking to master it," Max replied. "Just to try it. A small dose."
Torsten looked thoughtful. "Why?"
"Because I'm tired of being what I was," Max said flatly. "Useless. The butt of everyone's jokes." After spending some time with these men, Max had gotten a decent read on them. They were the kind that respected results and efforts. Playing the earnest noble seeking redemption might help his case, but the frustrating part was that he actually meant it.
It was Skeld who unexpectedly came to his defense. "He did hold his own tonight. Didn't complain once, even during the long wait. And his shots were perfect."
"He's still a noble," Varn countered. "If something happens to him, we'll be flogged."
"I won't tell anyone," Max promised. "Whatever happens is on me, not you."
Torsten studied him for a long moment, then reached into his pouch again and withdrew a different vial—smaller, with liquid that appeared almost clear rather than amber.
"This is a diluted version," he explained. "For training new sentinels. A quarter of the standard strength."
"Torsten," Varn protested. "You can't seriously—"
"My call," Torsten cut him off. "I've watched men for thirty years, Varn. I know when one is ready to test his limits."
He handed the vial to Max. "Two drops under your tongue. No more. And you stay with us until it wears off, understood?"
Max accepted the small container, surprised at how cool it felt against his palm. "Understood."
"We'll be back at camp soon," Skeld said. "Take it there, where we can keep an eye on you."
"And where we can explain to the Prince why the heir to House Vanheim is convulsing on the ground," Varn muttered.
"I can handle it," Max insisted, carefully tucking the vial into his belt pouch.
Torsten regarded him with an unreadable expression. "Maybe you can. That's what we're going to find out."
*****
Back at camp, Max sat near the sentinels' small fire, turning the vial between his fingers.
"One," Torsten instructed, watching him carefully. "Two. No more than that."
Max unstoppered the vial and tilted his head back. Two drops under the tongue, just as ordered.
Skeld immediately reached over and snatched the vial away. "Safety measure," he explained, pocketing it. "In case you get ideas about taking more."
The liquid tasted like bitter oranges left to rot in the sun then steeped in vinegar. Max winced, his tongue curling in protest.
"God, that's foul," he muttered.
"If it tasted good, everyone would want it," Varn said, eyeing him warily. "Feeling anything yet?"
Max shook his head. "Not really. Just the taste."
"Give it a moment," Torsten said calmly, feeding another stick to the fire. "It doesn't work instantly."
"How long does it—" Max stopped mid-sentence.
A sudden warmth bloomed in his chest, like he'd swallowed a mouthful of hot tea. Except the tea was spreading, trickling through his veins with increasing speed. Not unpleasant. Not yet.
"There it is," Skeld observed, noticing the change in Max's expression.
The warmth intensified, rushing outward from his core to his limbs. His heartbeat quickened, then quickened again, accelerating until he could hear the blood rushing in his ears.
"Is it supposed to—" Max's throat tightened suddenly. Drawing breath became a conscious effort. "My heart—"
"Don't fight it," Torsten instructed. "Let it happen."
The warmth transformed into heat, then into something closer to fire. Max's veins felt like they were carrying molten metal instead of blood. His skin prickled, hypersensitive to even the slightest brush of air.
"I can't breathe," he gasped, clutching at his chest.
"You can," Torsten said firmly. "You're just forgetting how. In through the nose. Out through the mouth."
"He's turning red," Varn hissed, glancing nervously around the camp. "If he dies, they'll say we poisoned him."
"He's not going to die," Torsten snapped. "Shut up."
The sensation reminded Max of jumping into icy water after a long sauna—that violent, shocking transition that made every nerve ending fire at once. His skin felt too tight. His eyes too dry. His teeth ached in their sockets.
"Holy shit," he managed, struggling to control his breathing. "This is the lesser version?"
"Focus on my voice," Torsten commanded, gripping Max's shoulder. "Look at me, Vanheim. Right at me."
Max tried, but his vision was swimming. The world around him pulsed in time with his racing heart.
"I see every pore in your face," Max blurted. It was true—Torsten's skin had become a landscape of minute detail, every scar and wrinkle rendered in almost painful clarity.
"Good. That's the Heightening starting to work. Now control it. Direct it."
"How?" Max's voice sounded wrong in his own ears—too loud, too textured.
"The same way you focus when you shoot," Torsten explained, his voice steady. "Find your center. Make everything else fall away."
Max closed his eyes, which only made the sensations worse. The sounds of the camp hit him like physical blows—conversations thirty yards away, the clang of cookware, horses shifting in their pickets, a man coughing in a distant tent. Smells assaulted him next—smoke, sweat, horse dung, cooking meat, leather oil, metal polish, all jumbled together.
He opened his eyes again, gasping.
"I can't—"
"You can," Torsten insisted. "Breathe. Slow and deep."
Max tried to focus, to find that same mental state he entered when drawing a bow. That preternatural clarity where everything except the target faded from awareness. Gradually, painfully, he pulled his scattered attention inward.
The chaos of sensation began to organize itself. Instead of drowning in a sea of stimuli, Max found he could selectively filter what he perceived.
"That's it," Torsten said, noticing the change. "You're getting it."
Max's breathing steadied. His heartbeat, while still rapid, no longer threatened to burst from his chest. The burning in his veins subsided to a tolerable warmth.
"I can hear... everything," Max said, his voice barely above a whisper. "That man complaining about his boots fifty yards away. The mice in the grain stores. The stream beyond the eastern perimeter."
"And smell?" Skeld asked.
Max inhaled carefully. "Pine resin in your boots. Blood from the mountain cat. Metal polish on Varn's knife. And..." he wrinkled his nose, "someone should really clean the latrine trenches."
Varn barked out a laugh, then quickly covered his mouth, glancing at Torsten. "Sorry. But he's right about the trenches."
Max tried to stand, eager to test his new awareness, but his legs betrayed him. The moment he was upright, the world tilted violently. His knees buckled, and he collapsed face-first into the dirt.
"Whoa there," Skeld said, hauling him back up. "First steps are always tricky."
"Like a newborn foal," Varn agreed, helping Max to a sitting position. "Congratulations on not dying, by the way."
"Don't sound so disappointed," Max muttered, brushing dirt from his face.
"Not disappointed," Varn corrected. "Surprised. Genuinely surprised. Most first-timers vomit or pass out."
"You're adapting faster than expected," Torsten observed, studying Max with newfound interest. "Even with the diluted version."
The world around Max had transformed. Colors were sharper, more vibrant. Sounds had texture and dimension. Scents told stories about their sources. It was like discovering a hidden reality that had always existed alongside the one he knew.
"It's... incredible," Max said, carefully testing his balance again. This time he managed to stand, though he swayed slightly. "Disorienting, but incredible."
"And dangerous," Torsten reminded him. "The Heightening gives you awareness, not invulnerability. Sometimes it's the opposite—you feel so capable that you take foolish risks."
"I'll be careful," Max promised, taking an experimental step. His coordination was slowly returning as he adjusted to the intensity of his senses.
"Always said you had something in you, beneath all that soft living," Skeld commented, clapping Max on the shoulder. "Just needed the right motivation."
"And what motivation is that?" Varn asked skeptically.
"The motivation not to be useless anymore," he said simply.
Torsten nodded, as if this was answer enough. "Come back tomorrow night. If you're still interested after the crash wears off."
"I will be," Max assured him, carefully testing each step as he moved around the fire. With each moment, his control improved. The sensory information organized itself into patterns he could interpret and use.
New skill acquired, he thought with satisfaction. And potentially a crucial one.
*****
The heightened awareness lasted for exactly three hours and forty-seven minutes.
Max knew this because he could track the movement of stars overhead with newfound precision, watching their slow arc across the night sky. When the effects finally began to fade, the crash hit him like a stone wall.
One moment, he could count the teeth marks on Skeld's wooden cup from ten paces away. The next, his senses dulled abruptly, leaving him disoriented and exhausted. His body felt leaden, his eyelids impossibly heavy.
"Time for sleep," Torsten had said, noticing Max's sudden drooping. "The dreams will come. Don't fight them."
Max had barely made it to his tent before collapsing onto his bedroll. Sleep came instantly, but it brought no rest.
Instead, dreams. Not normal dreams—vivid, twisted visions that felt more real than reality. He ran through endless forests, pursued by creatures with too many limbs. He swam in rivers of blood. He fell from impossible heights, feeling the air rush past him for what seemed like hours before impact.
In one particularly disturbing sequence, he found himself back in his apartment, bleeding out on the floor while Ronnie and Dwayne argued over his PlayStation. Except this time, they had yellow eyes and filed teeth.
He woke with a gasp, drenched in sweat, as the dawn horn sounded through camp. His head pounded like he'd spent the night drinking cheap tequila. His mouth tasted like something had crawled inside and died.
"Worst. Trip. Ever," he groaned, pressing the heels of his hands against his temples.
Outside, the camp bustled with morning activity. Tents were being struck, wagons loaded, horses harnessed. The convoy would be moving soon, continuing its journey toward Frosthold.
Max dragged himself upright, wincing as his joints protested. Every muscle ached as if he'd run a marathon. His stomach growled painfully—he'd apparently missed breakfast.
"Thought you might need this," a voice said from the tent entrance.
Max looked up to see Tomas, the bearded soldier who'd stood with him at Eastwatch. He held a wooden bowl of steaming stew and a hunk of dark bread.
"Didn't see you at the morning meal," Tomas explained, handing over the food. "Not like you to miss a chance to eat."
"Thanks," Max said, accepting the bowl gratefully. "Rough night."
Tomas raised an eyebrow. "The sentinels mentioned you joined their patrol. Never thought I'd see the day when Harek Vanheim voluntarily spent a night in the wilderness instead of a card game."
"People change," Max said between mouthfuls of stew. It was simple fare—some kind of game meat with root vegetables—but at that moment, it tasted better than any five-star restaurant meal he'd ever had.
"So they do," Tomas agreed, watching Max devour the food. "The Prince wants us moving within the hour. Just thought you should know."
Max nodded his thanks, already tearing into the bread. Tomas left with a bemused shake of his head.
By the time Max emerged from his tent, the camp had largely disappeared, transformed into an organized column ready to march. He spotted the sentinels helping to secure the mountain cat's meat and pelt on one of the supply wagons.
"He lives," Skeld called out as Max approached. "We had a bet on whether you'd be able to walk today."
"Who won?" Max asked, still feeling like his head was stuffed with wool.
"Torsten," Varn said, securing a rope with a practiced knot. "He seems to think you're made of sterner stuff than you look."
"How were the dreams?" Torsten asked, his scarred face impassive.
"Disturbing," Max admitted. "Vivid. Felt like they lasted days."
"That's normal," Torsten nodded. "The mind processes differently under the Heightening. Even after it fades, the effects linger."
"Like the worst hangover imaginable," Max muttered.
Skeld snorted. "Says the man who once drank an entire cask of Norheim's Winter Ale and still managed to lose fifty gold pieces at dice afterward."
"Did I really?" Max asked before he could stop himself.
The three sentinels stared at him.
"You don't remember?" Varn asked skeptically.
Max recovered quickly. "Just checking if you remember. I've done a lot of stupid things."
"True enough," Skeld chuckled. "Though last night wasn't one of them. You held the Heightening better than most first-timers."
"Speaking of which," Max said, changing the subject, "those boots you mentioned. How would I go about getting a pair?"
The sentinels exchanged glances.
"Serious about this, are you?" Torsten asked.
"I am."
Torsten studied him for a moment, then reached into the wagon and pulled out a bundle wrapped in oiled cloth. "Was planning to give you this anyway. Figured you earned it after not dying on us."
Max unwrapped the bundle to find a pair of boots exactly like the ones the sentinels wore—dark leather with the specialized soles Torsten had described.
"These are..." Max began, genuinely touched by the gesture.
"Not a gift," Torsten clarified quickly. "Payment for the mountain cat. Your arrow made the killing shot. The pelt belongs to you by rights, but we're taking it to sell in Frosthold. These make us even."
"Also," Skeld added, "they're sized for Varn's younger brother. Should fit your feet well enough."
"My feet aren't that small," Varn protested.
"Your whole family has dainty feet," Skeld countered. "Like little court dancers."
"I've kicked you in the gut with these 'dainty' feet before," Varn growled. "Happy to remind you how it felt."
Max interrupted before the bickering could escalate. "What about the armor? The special hide you mentioned?"
"Now that," Torsten said, "is harder to come by. The treatment process takes weeks. But..." He reached into the wagon again and pulled out a dark leather jerkin similar to his own. "I have a spare. It's seen better days, but the treatment still holds."
He handed it to Max, who immediately noticed how unusually heavy the leather felt, and how it seemed to drink in the light rather than reflect it.
"I can't take this," Max protested.
He could. He absolutely could, and was already mentally trying it on. But social norms apparently transcended worlds - you had to refuse a gift at least once before grabbing it.
"You're not," Torsten said. "You're borrowing it. Until we see if you're serious about learning our ways. If you are, you'll earn your own."
"And if I'm not?"
"Then you'll return it before we reach Frosthold," Torsten said matter-of-factly. "No harm done."
Max nodded, tucking the jerkin under his arm. "Thank you."
"Don't thank us yet," Varn warned. "Those boots take practice. You'll likely trip over your own feet for days before you learn the proper step."
"Speaking of which," Skeld said, pulling something from his belt pouch. "One more thing."
He handed Max a vial—identical to the one Torsten had given him the night before. The diluted Heightening.
"Are you sure?" Max asked, surprised by their generosity.
"You need to build tolerance," Torsten explained. "Starting with the training dose is safest. One drop every other night. No more. Your body needs time to adjust."
"Too much too quickly, and your heart stops," Varn added bluntly. "Like a candle snuffed out."
"We're not supposed to share these things with outsiders," Skeld admitted. "But you proved yourself capable last night. And honestly, watching Lord Harek Vanheim stumble around the forest half-blind is getting painful."
"Thanks. I think," Max said, carefully pocketing the vial.
The convoy's horn sounded, signaling the order to march. Soldiers and camp followers scrambled to their positions in the column.
"Will you be running today?" Torsten asked as they prepared to part ways.
Max looked toward the front of the column where Gregory would be riding.
"Not today," he decided. "Today, I'll be hunting."
Comments
Jesse Watts
Really enjoying this one. I will say, part of me kinda hopes for a re-roll back before the Bear, so he can try for a second attempt at taming it without it getting killed by a soldier. Picking up a mount with that much power this early might be somewhat narrative breaking, though. I do think that with these sort of 'edge of tomorrow' styled loop stories, some of the best parts are seeing someone get 'practiced' at living the same moments. If he's willing to take the risk (the gamble, if you will) and going back to the same earlier point multiple times, figuring out exactly what can be hunted and when, maximizing his rerolls, having a version where he 'maximises' his output for each consecutive day, leading up to the dragon heart, could be quite fun indeed. Though, with that said, saving that for a later time is also completely fair, as it's a lot of weight to expend in this introduction/training arc. Really taking the opportunity to prove everyone wrong and end this portion before his judgement day with Ser Gregory is quite appealing, though, to me. Looking forward to what you write on this one, whatever the format is, though! Thanks for the extra content.
Nattor
You’re reaching your stride with this one. Letting you know we’re here to watch 👍
Anotherb Account
Funnnnn. No suggestjons, loving it.
Ace_the_owl
This series is really growing on me. It'll pick up steam very soon lol. The general idea for book 1 of this is not quite finished, so you guys are more than welcome to suggest ideas if you wish to!
