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Chapter 105. The Boy, The Witch And The Egg .Part II

🕑 Added 2025-05-24 12:54:43 +0000 UTC

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Storyflower

Please be more consistent. The memory loss and then suddenly that is gone, the urgency to leave the realm. The friends that were clearly only there to serve as a liability...

Gojisoar

So peak

Andrew Powers

not the sandman lift, why the urgency? the game gave safe passage.

Vladimir Merritt

Gonna mark my reservations and space in this chapter as the implications of "human resilience" whatever that supposed to mean in this world... and yes sandman inferences did knock me right out of the immersion as what death herself said what she would do when the universe ended... if you know you know

BlaueFeder

I always hate how maincharacters just stand in front of an exit, watching doom approach, showing 0 survival instincts. 8/10 times they get captured or killed because of their inability to JUST MOVE.

Isaiah

Can we some sketches ofc our beloved characters I have an idea but I wanna see the canon sketch pls 🙏🏾

Dakota Sherry

Very well written chapter!

Gernot Bahle

Definitely chills. And awesome ❤️

Scion

I think he should have asked for more from the witch. Something far more

Joshua LaBarge

I feel like Adom could have asked for more in the agreement, considering the weight of that which the witch was asking for. Wonderful chapter though!

Justin Mott

Any reason you went with divinator? Feel like they are usually called diviners

Pseudo

I just realized I was right. Last chap I said it might end with a circle. ;-;

Pseudo

So the children’s crusade was powered by deep magic? That’s my guess anyway.

Gwalmeich

This chapter gave me chills. Nice one.

Buzzkill081

This is an amazing interpretation of the game created by Neil Gaiman. I know the impact will be lessened if it's over done but I would like it to be done in the series again, maybe in later books.

RRRegi

Your chapter updates made my weekend, thank you! Loved that showdown.

Ace_the_owl

First of all—obvious shout out to The Sandman. Yes, that Sandman. If you’ve read it, you probably felt the echo. And yes, I’m a little pissed that Neil Gaiman, absolute genius that he is, got to do this kind of metaphysical showdown first. Because now I can’t pretend I invented it. He did. With style. Ages ago. So thanks, Neil. Truly. But also: damn you. That said—this arc was an absolute blast to write. It took me about three weeks to wrestle it into shape, and I’m honestly quite curious to see how it lands with readers. It’s… a lot, I know. The Axis. Deep Magic. The “white energy.” Expressive eggs. War of Tongues. One might reasonably ask: what the hell is Ace even doing? I promise you: no tea overdose was involved. I’m okay. Mostly. You can definitely trust me to unravel all of this organically, even if it’s feeling like a cosmic lore avalanche right now. This arc lays down groundwork for later books in the series, and it was important to plant those seeds now—before the story picks up even more momentum. So if you’re still with me: thank you. I hope this chapter gave you chills, or made you pause, or maybe just left you with a weird smile and a burning question. I had a hell of a time writing it. Hope you did reading it. More soon!


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