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Chapter 89. School Break

🕑 Added 2025-04-30 07:49:55 +0000 UTC

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Ace_the_owl

Ah, I might need to reread and edit the fight there. Pretty sure I messed up something as you said.

Ace_the_owl

Yeah, first ring's at 3000 but they start to form at the 1000s already. I should probably specify that. Thanks for the feedback, gonna do that today!

Gernot Bahle

Just a question, wasn‘t it first ring at 3000, then 9000 etc? Or is „beginning to form“ meant to say it starts at the halfway point and is then done at 3k?

Will Iam

Thanks for the chapter. Small error on the combat, Adom has his oponent in his hand by the seventh attack. He then jumped to avoid a kick. In the middle he had to release him otherwise he could have used both the grab to de stabilize his oponent or the other way around to move adom while in the air. Why was the grab released? Once you reach a grab the fight is pretty much over unless the grab is forcefully or willingly released.

Bunny Waffles

You know, it is honestly refreshing to see someone with a proper sense of risk assessment and a healthy dose of common sense. Of course he is immediately followed up by some hot-headed youth, but hey, only so much common sense to go around I suppose.

Ace_the_owl

Thank you for reading! And for the typo heads up as well, it's really helpful as I am editing them :)

Samantha Lane

Thank you

Broseph

Welcome back! TFTC

Ace_the_owl

Woo. Sorry for the little break in updates. After some intense overtime at work, I've just gotten approved for leave, which means I can now be a bit more professional about the schedule. There will be another chapter for sure tonight, no joking this time. I just need to take a nap and edit the chapters properly. I'll also be updating The Gamble King's chapters this weekend as well, and will upload it once a week after that. Since I've got some time for myself now, I can finally give both stories the attention they deserve.


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