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Chapter 90. Well, This Is Awkward

🕑 Added 2025-05-01 05:13:45 +0000 UTC

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Storyflower

There is absolutely no reason for Adom to practice flying at a cliff edge. There is no Bernouilli effect involved so it is illogical that he should need a cliff. It isn't explained in the chapter either why he would need a cliff. The only reason I could think of is heightened tension for illogical readers. But not all of us are morons. Sloppy. Other progress is convincingly done though. Story is still engaging.

Ace_the_owl

Hah! Good point that. Gonna fix that somehow, thanks!

Ace_the_owl

Actually, flying was much harder for Adom in his previous life than it might seem. The main issue wasn't his mana capacity, but the nature of his illness: Lifedrain Syndrome. It was a mana-related condition I intentionally designed to behave like a magical form of cancer. The more he used mana, the more aggressively the syndrome attacked his mana core. So while he had a large mana pool, drawing from it hastened his physical and magical deterioration. This meant that high-output, sustained spells like flight were incredibly risky. So even though the idea of flying might seem appealing, the cost for Adom would have been steeply fatal. Edit: Just realized I deleted the explanation of his illness in the early chapters. My bad. Another thing to edit.

Declan Robinson

Is there going to be any commentary regarding his flying abilities in his previous life? I would have assumed as a person wheelchair bound that he would have been keen to investigate flight options and with his mana pool there isn’t a reason why he wouldn’t have been capable from a resource perspective. It is pretty heavily implied that he didn’t have flight previously though, like the beach death scene etc wouldn’t have made sense if he could previously fly.

Scion

Surprised his own intelligence Network didn't notice the mercs being hired

Guilty343

creeping up on chapter 100


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