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Chapter 117. Xerkes V Lireth

🕑 Added 2025-06-23 07:56:19 +0000 UTC

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Tayfun

the chant was clever- arsenal fan in disguise

Ace_the_owl

I can't help but agree here. It's something I’ve really been guilty of throughout the story. As the writer, the names and connections are all fresh in my head, so I forget that for readers (especially with weeks between chapters), a quick reminder can go a long way. Planning to do a deep edit of Book 2 once it finishes—some scenes will get cut entirely, others will be reworked, and one of the things I definitely want to fix is stuff like this. It reads fine day to day, but when you go back and look at the whole thing as a full book, those kinds of bumps really show.

John Koor

Great chapter, but one complaint. I generally have this same complaint throughout the entirety of this particular story: 'Mia was not too far from them. Oh, Gus too. He could even see Naia, her brother, and Karion and his sisters in the crowd.' Side characters are so rarely mentioned in this story that when you drop their names on us without including reminders on who they are, it seems a bit pointless in mentioning them by name. We had this same issue with the guard who ended up being one of the followers of the cult that showed up at the merchant auction. There was a lot of confusion from readers there. Considering there are real world months between referencing side characters, better reminders of who they are in addition to naming them would be appreciated. I'm pretty sure I know who these particular people are, but that was only after a bit of dwelling on it. It disrupts the flow of the story to have to stop and puzzle it out.

Corwin

Poor Whitehall Adom should give him a slushie after this

Anotherb Account

Ahhhhhh excited for the duel, great game so far

Clown Quest

Tftc

Viktor

I'm using Gemini for dictation, for technical documents, and it works pretty well. You can try how it works with your voice/accent.

John Doe

Heart beating Action!!! SHOW EM WHAT YOU CAN DO!

Ace_the_owl

Hey folks—just a quick one. I’m seriously reconsidering the chapter schedule because dictation has been... rough. I’m really sorry for the inconsistent releases lately. I want to be faster—but when Dragon NaturallySpeaking writes “there” instead of “they’re” for the fifth time, it’s hard not to punch a hole in my laptop (I almost did today). I’ve been using Dragon NaturallySpeaking, but if anyone knows a dictation tool that actually listens properly—and I don’t mind paying—please send suggestions. I’d be really grateful. Thanks for your patience. I’m trying. – Yours truly


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