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Chapter 114. Departure

🕑 Added 2025-06-18 23:22:31 +0000 UTC

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Brandon K Kamaka

I think you need to add a little explanation of what a homunculus is in this world to the exposition. I ended slightly confused because a homunculus is usually like a meat golem. They don't have lives "before" they become homunculus. So the revelation was a bit undercut because instead of focusing on it my mind was pretty engaged trying to piece together what felt like contradictory pieces of information.

Ace_the_owl

Oh yeah, there was an event that made her hate mages, which prompted her to want to become one, and kill them (She was a genral of her nation's army, and one of the most known mage hunter, but not quite a leader of all mage hunters, as they were not really an organisation, but rather zealots that believed in mages being abominations). Ironically enough, her homonculus powers made her a mage, as her pre-homonculus self was a normal human. I'll definitely explain more about her in the coming chapters!

Eldar Zecore

To clarify: the Homunculus was an enhanced soldier who hated Mages and was the general who lead the Mage Hunters? Or she was the head Mage Hunter (I.e. strongest soldier)?

K

Either possibility bother me." Bothers

Anotherb Account

Nice, not where I thought any of that was going, love it, excited for travels

AirSak2000

So a homunculus is not fully artificial and is an enhanced human?

Azzurous

Sorry if you’ve mentioned this elsewhere, I usually skip author’s notes/comments to stay immersed. But I’m curious, what made you switch to dictation?

Ace_the_owl

Hey everyone—just a quick apology for the slower updates. I’m still settling into new accommodations and wrangling a not-always-cooperative dictation setup, so my drafting pace slipped this week. Good news: I’ll have a clear block of time this weekend, and I’m determined to catch up. Expect fresh chapters and replies very soon—promise.


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