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Chapter 141. New Job

🕑 Added 2025-08-08 04:44:39 +0000 UTC

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Nico

I had the same confusion: it would be good to explain how the Star Knights close the gap. I even remember 30 times from the gorilla ritual, and then axis on top of it. Wasn’t there even a skill that would let him grow the gorilla strength more? With all that said, it seemed over-powered to me at the time, so it could make sense to reduce the gorilla strength (at least at level one).

Usernames_are_annoying

Correct me if I’m wrong but didn’t Silverbacks might give a 10 times increase in strength. Did the fusion make his abilities weaker? I came here from RR so you might have written it differently on patreon.

Ace_the_owl

Now that you mention it... I kind of agree. Will be editing this. Thanks!

Raivshard

Gale had an artifact at the time that made him extraordinarily difficult to keep down, otherwise that fight would have been no contest, if I recall correctly.

K

Probably is a lot easier to strap to a back than a half ton of feathers!

BenjiVoid

> It's a natural skill for phoenixes, dragons, demons, and Umbra. Seems like useless exposition for the audience rather than Adom saying something useful. It shouldn't be part of the dialogue imo..

Doom

Doesn't this seem like a power regression? Or an incredible inconsistency? Gale was supposed to have been a ringer, and Adom got powerful enough to make the ringer look like a child. And now we find it out it's just ringers all the way up and Adom doesn't even compare to the 9th ranked star knight? Aruthur's second in command couldn't even put Gale down... This smells a lot like you're doing a retcon nerf to Adom because you made him too powerful too fast.

BlaueFeder

Isn't half a ton of Draconite the same as half a ton of feathers?

Gernot Bahle

I also seem to remember there being one hundred iron wolf star knights, but that was quite a while ago 😉 Also, thinking back to the very first confrontation around Gale, it seems that his fathers old friend should have had an easier time with his fight back then, if there are those vast power differences between star knights. Basically, Adom already is a force of nature. Now we learn the really powerful star knights are the same, some even more so. That basically implies even hordes of regular soldiers should be brushed aside like ants. Same for one or two star Star Knights. If you ever go back to editing the whole (maybe before publication), there could be a bit of harmonizing pass. For now, plot armor and suspension of disbelief will suffice 😉 Once again, it‘s a totally awesome story you‘re telling ❤️❤️❤️

Matt.Silver

Thank you for the Chapter. I think a few points need clarification. It sounds like you're saying that there are only 30 star knights in the Empire, but there has to be more than that. Aren't all the Iron Wolves star knights? I'm not sure about your ranking system either, the scale seems a bit off to me. I can't quite put my finger on exactly how it bothers me though...

Ace_the_owl

Jinxed myself when saying it would be an hour... But hey, it's here, right? Hope you guys enjoy! Next chapter this very Friday, which is today. Wait, hope this is not a jinx. It's not a jinx, right? Okay, maybe assume there won't be any chapter today. Just for good measure, lol.


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