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Gamble King Chapter 29. Context
🕑 Added 2025-08-12 00:32:12 +0000 UTC[Little author note: Big thanks to R. Maxwell Steele and Gernot Bahle for the feedback on the last two chapters. I got so deep into the hard
[Little author note: Big thanks to R. Maxwell Steele and Gernot Bahle for the feedback on the last two chapters. I got so deep into the hard-magic details that I kind of forgot, it still needs to feel like magic. You both helped me realize I’d gone from wonder to “science lecture,” and I’ve tuned things so the magic is a wee less scientific and a lot more fun to read.
You guys don’t need to reread the last two chapters to follow what happens here. it still ends in basically the same place. The main difference is that I pulled in a plot element I had originally planned for Arc 4. It actually works as early foreshadowing here in Arc 2, and I think it fits even better this way.
Thanks again everyone! your feedback really is shaping the story for the better.]
***
Max took a breath, stepped out of the shadows, and approached the bench with what he hoped was casual confidence rather than the slightly manic energy of someone who'd just followed a cat through a castle in the middle of the night.
"Evening," he said, stopping a respectful distance away.
Aelara looked up from her book, and her expression shifted through several phases in quick succession. Surprise, then recognition, then something that settled into polite wariness.
"Betrothed." Her voice was perfectly neutral. "Good evening."
Ghost the cat opened one blue-green eye, assessed Max as no particular threat to either himself or his human, and resumed purring.
"Bit cold for reading, isn't it?" Max gestured vaguely at the snow-covered garden around them.
"I find the cold helps me concentrate." She closed the book but kept it in her lap, her fingers resting protectively on the cover. "The castle can be... busy during the day."
The day? Isn't it night?
"Right, of course." Max nodded as if this made perfect sense, which it didn't. "Mind if I sit? I promise I won't interrupt your reading."
Aelara studied him for a moment, then shifted slightly to make room on the bench. Not welcoming, exactly, but not refusing either.
Max settled onto the cold stone, careful to maintain proper distance. Ghost immediately began investigating his cloak with the kind of thorough inspection cats reserved for new and potentially interesting smells.
"What are you reading?" Max asked, genuinely curious.
Aelara's hands tightened slightly on the book. "Just... something to pass the time."
"Can I see?"
The speed with which she tucked the book into her cloak was almost impressive. "It's nothing that would interest you."
Max blinked, processing this reaction. The protective gesture, the slight flush in her cheeks visible even in the moonlight, the way she'd gone from composed to defensive in about two seconds.
Oh?
...Oh.
A slow grin spread across his face. "I didn't think you were that kind of person."
Aelara's expression didn't change, but there was a subtle sharpening to her gaze. "I'm not sure what you're referring to."
"I mean, I knew girls liked hot stuff, but here too..." Max let his voice trail off meaningfully.
"I can assure you," Aelara said with the kind of calm that suggested she was choosing her words very carefully, "that I have done nothing wrong. My reading material is perfectly appropriate."
"Of course, of course." Max held up his hands in mock surrender. "I'm not judging. Everyone needs hobbies."
"It's not a hobby, it's—" She caught herself, lips pressing together in a thin line.
"Educational?"
"Literature," she said firmly.
"Ah, literature. Very educational literature, I'm sure."
Ghost had apparently decided Max was acceptable and had begun attempting to climb into his lap. Max helped the cat settle, earning a rumbling purr for his efforts.
"You seem to have made a friend," Aelara observed, clearly grateful for the change of subject.
"He's excellent company. Very distinguished." Max scratched behind Ghost's ears. "Unlike his owner, who apparently reads scandalous novels in frozen gardens at midnight."
"They are not scandalous." The words came out with perhaps more heat than intended.
"Right, sorry. Perfectly respectable literature. The kind that makes people shove books into their cloaks when someone asks to see them."
Aelara was quiet for a moment, watching him pet her cat. When she spoke, her voice had returned to its previous coolness. "What are you doing here, Harek?"
Changing the subject, are we? Max thought, but decided to take her bait. He could always circle back to the scandalous literature later.
"Well," he said, settling more comfortably on the bench while Ghost claimed his lap entirely, "I couldn't sleep. Magic problem, actually. There's this young mage I know—works in the towers—bright fellow, quite handsome really, very talented—"
Aelara's eyebrow arched. "How modest of him."
"Oh, it's not me," Max said quickly. "I mean, it's not about me. This is about my friend. The mage. Who is definitely not me."
"Of course. This mysterious, handsome, talented mage who keeps you awake at night."
"Right. Well, he's been struggling with a particular spell. Something complex involving... binding elements together. But he can't quite remember the precise mechanism. The theory behind how things actually connect."
Ghost purred louder, apparently approving of Max's storytelling abilities. The sound must have attracted attention, because Bro emerged from the warm depths of Max's cloak and padded across his shoulder to investigate this new creature.
"And this is preventing your friend from sleeping because...?"
"Because he's the type who gets obsessed with problems. Can't let things go." Max watched as Bro descended delicately onto his lap, settling next to Ghost with what could only be described as curiosity. "You know how it is when you can almost remember something but it's just out of reach?"
Aelara was quiet for a moment, studying his face in the moonlight. Her gaze flicked briefly to the tiny white spider now sharing lap space with her cat. "Your friend sounds familiar."
"Does he?"
"Mmm. I believe I may have encountered someone very similar. Also frustratingly stubborn about admitting when he needs help."
Max grinned, absently stroking both animals. Bro's tiny body was surprisingly soft under his fingertip—not the hard carapace one would expect, but something almost fur-like. "Small world."
"Indeed." She adjusted her position slightly, the book rustling against her cloak. "What exactly can't your friend remember?"
"The mechanism. He knows what he wants to achieve, but the specific process..." Max gestured vaguely with his free hand, careful not to disturb his tiny passengers. "It's like knowing you need to get from one side of a river to the other, but forgetting whether you need a bridge, a boat, or if you're supposed to swim."
"Ah." Aelara nodded slowly. "I see. And I suppose asking someone who might know the answer is out of the question?"
"His pride won't allow it. Plus, he's not entirely sure anyone could answer this one question."
"Pride." She said it like it was a particularly stubborn stain. "How very... masculine."
"Hey, women can be proud too."
"Of course we can. We're simply better at disguising it as something else." She turned to face him more directly. "When I encounter that particular problem—the almost-remembering—I find it helps to approach it sideways."
"Sideways?"
"Don't try to remember the specific detail you've forgotten. Instead, remember everything around it. The context. What led to learning it in the first place, what came after, what it reminded you of." Her voice took on a teaching quality. "Memory isn't a filing cabinet where you can pull out one specific drawer. It's more like a web. Pull on one strand, and others begin to vibrate."
Max found himself genuinely interested. "That's... brilliant."
"Thank you." There was the slightest hint of warmth in her voice. "For instance, if your friend can't remember how elements bind together, perhaps he should remember when he first learned about elements at all. What they were studying, who was teaching, what other concepts were discussed in the same lesson."
"And if that doesn't work?"
"Then he builds the knowledge from scratch. Takes what he does remember and reasons forward. Sometimes understanding why something works is more valuable than simply memorizing how."
Max stared at her. The advice was genuinely helpful, but more than that, the way she'd delivered it—patient, thoughtful, without making him feel stupid for asking—was exactly what he'd needed to hear.
"Your friend is very lucky to know you," he said.
"I hope he thinks so." Aelara's smile was small but real. "Though he might consider actually asking for help occasionally, rather than wandering around castles at midnight hoping to stumble into solutions."
"I'll pass along the suggestion."
"Please do."
They sat in comfortable silence for a moment, Ghost's purring and the whisper of wind through the garden the only sounds. Max continued his gentle petting, fascinated by how Bro seemed perfectly content to share the space with the cat, both creatures accepting his attention as their due.
"So," Aelara said eventually, her tone shifting back to mild curiosity, "what are you really doing here, Harek?"
"Do you want the truth?" Max asked.
"Of course."
"Well, I followed your cat." Max gestured to Ghost, who had claimed the majority of his lap and showed no signs of moving. "It led me to you, so I thought it was destiny. I decided to come and make you laugh."
Aelara blinked. "Make me laugh?"
"Yes. You don't laugh a lot."
"I laugh when there is cause for laughter."
"Then I would create that cause, and you will laugh."
"And then what?"
Max opened his mouth, then closed it. He hadn't actually thought that far ahead.
"What happens when I laugh?" Aelara pressed, her voice taking on that calm, analytical tone. "Will that be it? Or is this part of something you are planning?"
"Not at all. I just want to..." Max fumbled for words, acutely aware that both Ghost and Bro were staring at him with what felt like judgment. "I don't know... 'woo' you?"
"Woo me." It wasn't a question.
"Yes."
Max had expected her to laugh at that, at least. Instead, she just looked at him.
No. She stared at him, with those sharp green eyes that seemed to catalogue every detail of his face. The silence stretched between them, broken only by Ghost's continued purring and the distant sound of wind through the castle walls.
He shifted uncomfortably under her stare. "Not working, huh?"
"Not one bit."
Aelara stood up, the movement so sudden that Ghost had to leap gracefully from Max's lap to avoid being displaced. She brushed snow from her cloak with careful, deliberate motions.
"This is confusing. I'm not quite sure what you're up to," she said. "If by some miracle you're feeling any remorse for anything that might have happened between us, then you needn't worry."
Max opened his mouth, but she continued before he could speak.
"I know your situation. I assure you, our betrothal is not at stake." She adjusted her cloak, tucking the book more securely against her side. "I will honor our fathers' wish to unite House Klark and House Vanheim. I will have your heirs, and die in silence, and you can live your life the way you want."
Whoa, this wasn't going the expected way.
"Fuck a thousand whores. Father a thousand bastards for all I care. As long as you have the intelligence and consideration not to be too public about it and dishonor me, just as we agreed upon the day we were betrothed."
That was cold.
"So if this new behavior is to ensure I'll stay in the arrangement, you need not go to these lengths."
"Aelara, I think there's been a misunderstand—"
"Ghost." She didn't look at Max as she called her cat. Ghost immediately trotted to her side, tail high. "Good night, Bro," she added, with a small nod toward the spider still resting on Max's thigh.
And just like that, she turned and walked away, her footsteps crunching softly through the snow until the garden swallowed her entirely.
Max sat in the suddenly empty garden, staring at the spot where Aelara had disappeared.
He sighed deeply, the sound echoing off the stone walls.
"Well, Bro," he said to the spider still resting on his thigh, "lesson learned. Be careful with women. They remember everything you've apparently done wrong, even when you can't remember doing it in the first place." He paused, considering. "Actually, especially then. It's like they keep detailed records of every stupid thing you've ever said, filed away for moments exactly like this. Even if it wasn't technically you."
Bro offered no commentary on this observation.
Max pushed himself up from the bench, his joints protesting the cold. "Come on. Let's go pretend to sleep in my luxurious accommodations."
The walk back to his chambers felt longer than usual, possibly because he was replaying the conversation and trying to figure out where exactly everything had gone sideways. By the time he reached his door, he'd concluded that the answer was probably "from the very beginning."
His temporary room was exactly as he'd left it--small, cramped, and sporting a bed that seemed designed by someone who had heard about comfort but never actually experienced it. Max dropped onto the straw-stuffed mattress and immediately regretted it.
The thing was lumpy in all the wrong places, with straw poking through the rough fabric at odd angles.
But exhaustion finally caught up with him. Despite the uncomfortable bed and his churning thoughts about Aelara's cold dismissal, sleep claimed him within minutes.
***
Max woke to pale gray light filtering through his small window. The castle was still quiet--that brief period between the servants starting their day and the nobility emerging from their chambers.
Perfect timing.
He dressed quickly, ensuring Bro was secure in his cloak, and made his way through the empty corridors toward the Mage Tower. The few servants he passed were too busy with their morning tasks to pay attention to one more person moving through the castle.
The tower library was deserted, just as he'd hoped. Max climbed the winding stairs to the upper level where he'd found Blackwater's grimoire the day before. The section sat silent in the early morning light.
There it was: "Theoretical Foundations of Elemental Manipulation" still sitting where Kellor had replaced it after his warning.
Max pulled the book from the shelf, scanning the nearby titles.
If Blackwater's main work was here, maybe his other books had survived as well.
It took him several minutes of searching, but he found them tucked away in the same section--four slim volumes, each bearing Oberyn Blackwater's name. Unlike the massive grimoire, these were modest books, perhaps a hundred pages each, bound in simple brown leather.
"Properties of Gaseous Fuels and Their Optimal Applications."
"Molecular Theory and Elemental Binding."
"Advanced Thermodynamic Principles in Magical Practice."
"Practical Applications of Atmospheric Chemistry."
Max gathered all four books along with the grimoire, tucking them inside his cloak. The weight was considerable, but manageable. More importantly, these looked like the kind of foundational texts that might actually teach him how magic worked.
The corridors remained mostly empty as he made his way to the stables. Flash nickered softly at his approach, clearly expecting another adventure.
"Valley again, boy," Max murmured, quickly saddling the big warhorse. "Time to do some real studying."
The rooster was drawing breath for its morning assault on human dignity when Flash's hooves thundered through the courtyard.
The bird had maybe half a second to register the approaching wall of muscle and bad temper before diving sideways into a pile of hay, squawking indignantly as a thousand pounds of warhorse missed crushing it by roughly the width of a feather.
Max didn't slow down. As Flash pounded toward the gates, he twisted in his saddle and held up his middle finger toward the hay pile.
The rooster's head popped up just in time to see the gesture. It stared for a moment, processing this unprecedented act of defiance, then released a crow so outraged it sounded like someone strangling a rusty trumpet.
"That's what I thought!" Max called back, already disappearing through the gates in direction of the Valley.
Two hours later, Max slid from Flash's saddle in a clearing deep in the valley woods. He'd ridden far from the valley farms, following old hunting trails to a spot where the trees formed a natural bowl. High ridges on all sides would provide privacy for his magical experiments.
He settled against a fallen log, pulling Blackwater's books from his cloak. Bro emerged to perch on his shoulder, tiny eyes fixed on the collection with what seemed like curiosity.
"Alright, Bro," Max said, selecting the first volume. "Let's see what real magical theory looks like."
The morning sun climbed higher as Max opened "Theoretical Foundations of Elemental Manipulation" and began to read in earnest.
What Max really needed was offensive magic.
Something that could stop threats during the Proving Year. As he read through Blackwater's systematic approach to fire magic, one thing became clear: a proper fireball was incredibly complex.
The Thoughtshape requirements were staggering. Contained combustion, directional force, thermal management, safety protocols, structural integrity under acceleration, precise targeting mechanisms–each element requiring perfect execution. Miss a single parameter and the spell would either fail catastrophically or turn the caster into barbecue.
Max found himself staring at a diagram showing the nested conditional statements required for safe fireball casting. The Thoughtshape looked like a programming flowchart designed by someone with severe anxiety about edge cases.
"This would take months to master," he muttered, running his finger down the list of required specifications. "Even if I could get it working, I'd need maybe thirty seconds to cast it properly. That's not ideal."
He needed something simpler. Something he could actually use.
He had thirteen days.
His eyes drifted to the books he brought with him, and one of them grabbed his attention: "Properties of Gaseous Fuels and Their Optimal Applications."
Gas...
His eyes widened.
Gas!
Gas just sat there, inert and harmless, until something ignited it. No aggressive expansion, no tendency to consume everything in sight, no complex thermal dynamics to manage.
The gas would behave predictably until Bro lit it, and that was where the real potential lay.
Max glanced at his little shoulder passenger.
After a series of tests in the past two weeks, he had discovered that Bro could breathe blue flame.
He'd simply asked the spider casually one day if he could produce a hotter fire, more out of curiosity than any real expectation. Bro had breathed out a focused blue flame, as if it was the most natural thing in the world.
An idea began to form.
What if he didn't try to create a fireball at all? What if he created something that could become a fireball when combined with Bro's flame?
Max set aside the main grimoire and picked up "Properties of Gaseous Fuels and Their Optimal Applications." If he was going to create combustible gas, he needed to understand exactly what he was making.
The book opened to a table of contents that looked like it had been written by someone from Earth.
Max flipped to the chapter on methane and found exactly what he'd been hoping for: detailed technical specifications written in language that actually made sense.
"Methane (CH4) represents the simplest stable hydrocarbon, consisting of one carbon atom bonded to four hydrogen atoms in tetrahedral configuration. Its molecular simplicity makes it ideal for beginning practitioners of gaseous fuel creation..."
The text continued with precise details about bond angles, electron sharing, and molecular geometry. But as Max read, something strange happened. The technical descriptions began triggering memories from his old world.
Not textbook knowledge, but something much more specific.
He closed his eyes, following Aelara's advice about memory. Don't try to remember the specific detail. Remember everything around it.
The apartment. That cramped studio with the radiator that clanked like morse code. He'd been eating pizza because he'd found a place that delivered fast and didn't judge his weird hours. The laptop balanced on his knees, still warm from running too many browser tabs.
"Cunk on the Universe," season two. He'd binged the entire season that weekend instead of doing laundry.
The memory crystallized as he let his mind drift around the edges. Cunk's deadpan delivery, explaining complex chemistry with that peculiar mix of complete confidence and mild confusion that somehow made everything clearer than any professor ever had.
"Methane is made of carbon and hydrogen, which are both elements," Cunk had said, while the screen showed those little ball-and-stick molecular models. "Carbon bonds to four things at once, which makes it very social."
Max opened his eyes, looking back at Blackwater's technical description. The author had written about "tetrahedral electron sharing" and "covalent bond formation," but Cunk's explanation suddenly made it click.
Carbon wanted to share electrons with four other atoms. Hydrogen had one electron that needed a partner. Put them together, and everyone got what they wanted. Like the most successful group project in chemistry.
Max read further, cross-referencing Blackwater's technical details with his emerging understanding. The author described molecular bond angles, electron orbital overlap, and energy states, but Max could fill in the gaps with Cunk's much simpler explanation of how atoms "made friends" by sharing electrons.
The combination was perfect.
Blackwater provided the precise framework for creating stable molecular structures, while Max's memories filled in the conceptual understanding that made it all make sense.
The more you understood a concept, the more likely the spell would stay in your control once cast.
As such, one could weaponize knowledge.
For what felt like the next two hours, Max worked through the theory systematically. He built mental models of methane molecules. The more he studied, the clearer the Thoughtshape became.
Creating methane wasn't actually that complicated. Much simpler than a fireball, anyway.
Instead of managing combustion, containment, and propulsion simultaneously, he just needed to create stable molecules and let them disperse naturally. The tricky part was making sure the molecular bonds held together long enough to be useful.
By midday, Max felt ready to attempt his first casting.
He stood up from his log, stretching muscles that had stiffened from hours of reading. Bro moved to his shoulder, sensing that something important was about to happen.
"Alright," Max said, looking at his tiny companion. "Time to see if theory translates to practice."
Max began building his Thoughtshape systematically.
Purpose: Create methane gas. Form: CH4 molecular structure through electron sharing. Source: Atmospheric carbon and hydrogen. Volume: Moderate quantity. Distribution: Upward stream, safe dispersal. Duration: Until consciously dismissed.
He compressed the framework into a simple incantation: "Methane formed, bonds stable, stream upward, awaiting flame."
Max reached for the Source.
The familiar tempest appeared instantly–that raging ocean of raw power under storm-wracked skies. But this time, he approached it with confidence born of understanding. The energy flowed toward his Thoughtshape like water finding a perfectly designed channel.
Carbon atoms materialized above his palm. Hydrogen atoms appeared around them. Max could visualize the electrons pairing, sharing orbital space, creating the molecular bonds that would hold everything together.
The methane began forming in perfect CH4 structures, streaming upward in an invisible column.
For maybe ten seconds, the spell held perfectly. Then Max's concentration wavered slightly as he marveled at his success, and the molecular bonds destabilized. The methane dispersed harmlessly into the air.
"Progress," he told Bro, who had been watching intently.
The second attempt lasted nearly a minute before his mental focus slipped. The third held for almost three minutes. Each iteration taught him something new about maintaining the delicate balance of molecular forces.
Max worked steadily through the afternoon, his understanding growing more sophisticated with each casting.
The Thoughtshape gradually simplified as his mastery improved. Instead of consciously managing every electron pair, he began to think in terms of larger patterns--molecular templates that the Source could fill automatically once properly defined.
By late afternoon, Max could create stable methane streams that lasted for twenty minutes or more. The spell had become almost automatic, requiring barely more concentration than his flame magic.
But he needed more than duration. He needed speed.
Combat magic had to be fast. Three seconds or less, that was his gold standard. Anything longer was useless when something with teeth was trying to kill you.
Max began practicing rapid casting, building and releasing the Thoughtshape as quickly as possible. The first few attempts were disasters–incomplete molecular structures that collapsed instantly. But gradually, he learned to compress the entire framework into a single, coherent mental action.
"Methane stream, stable bonds, controlled release," became his working incantation. Simple enough to remember, specific enough to be safe.
After another hour of practice, Max managed to cast the spell in under ten seconds. Then eight seconds.
...Five.
...Four.
And finally, after what felt like his hundredth attempt, he achieved the breakthrough he'd been working toward.
The Thoughtshape crystallized in his mind like a perfectly cut gem. One smooth mental motion, and methane began streaming from his palm in a controlled column that rose fifteen feet before dispersing safely into the air.
Total casting time: two seconds.
"YES!" Max shouted, pumping his fist while maintaining the spell. The methane stream continued flowing, perfectly stable and under complete control.
Bro jumped excitedly on his shoulder, tiny legs pattering with apparent approval.
Max held the spell for several more minutes, marveling at how natural it felt. The molecular bonds were rock-solid, the energy flow perfectly balanced. He could probably maintain this indefinitely without strain.
"Alright, Bro," he said, looking at the spider perched on his shoulder. "Ready to see what we can really do together?"
Max fed more power into the spell, thickening the methane stream until it formed a substantial column of invisible gas rising from his palm.
"You see where that gas is coming from?" he asked.
Bro's tiny eyes tracked to the source point just above Max's hand.
"Light it up right at the base. Your hottest fire."
No sooner said than done.
The spider's abdomen began to glow orange, then deeper red as the internal temperature built. The light intensified, shifting from red to brilliant blue-white as Bro prepared for maximum output.
Then the spider opened his mouth and unleashed a concentrated jet of blue flame directly above Max's palm.
The methane ignited instantly.
A towering column of flame erupted from his palm, climbing higher and higher as the entire gas stream ignited in sequence.
The dragon's breath climbed twenty feet into the air, roaring and crackling as the entire gas stream burned in sequence.
Orange and yellow flames rolled upward in a perfect cone, contained within the natural bowl of the clearing but still impressively massive.
The sound was a deep, satisfying WHOOOM that echoed off the ridge walls without carrying beyond them.
Max stood there, arm extended, watching his homemade dragon's breath climb toward the treetops before dispersing harmlessly in the open air above.
"New skill acquired," he said, unable to keep the massive grin off his face. "Hehe."
Bro jumped happily on his shoulder, apparently pleased with the results of their collaboration.
Cute little guy.
Comments
Gernot Bahle
Great chapter, thank you :) There is one small plot hole still that could be easily closed in a sentence or two: it appears magic needs to be initially created close to the caster, otherwise all Max‘s musings are a bit weird. Maybe your control over the source (meaning distance you can harness it) increases with practice, age or whatever else you like, because otherwise: why not simply create a huge inferno directly beneath a monster? As satisfying as throwing around balls of fire is, all the extra work for forming a projectile, making it move etc is not necessary if you can just set something on fire. In other words, „palm flame“, just elsewhere and 50 times bigger
Pseudo
TYFTC. Alright, time for some nerd corrections. The rest of this comment should be wholly disregarded, or skipped to the very end if you don’t care for semantic points. “For maybe ten seconds, the spell held perfectly. Then Max's concentration wavered slightly as he marveled at his success, and the molecular bonds destabilized. The methane dispersed harmlessly into the air.” Is the already formed methane destabilizing or the methane that is currently being bonded? Saying molecular bonds were destabilizing implies bonds from already bonded methane, while saying it dispersed into the air gives the impression that the methane that formed continued being bonded, but was no longer being directed upwards. If the atoms bonded at all, it would take MORE energy to break the bond. This is a exothermic reaction, as energy is released as the bonds form, going from a higher energy state to a lower energy state. The graph of the energy is like a hill, energy will build, then bonds form and release energy, settling at a lower point then where it started. It would almost be like a light switch, as soon as enough pressure is applied it will pass the threshold and stay there. There wouldn’t really be a time for the bonds to destabilize at a middle point between bonded and not bonded. Bonds typically form at a femtosecond (10^-15 seconds) time scale. As soon as the bonds form, the covalent force would bind them, not the thoughtshape, so distraction and ruined thoughtshape should not affect them. This should theoretically still apply if the source is acting as the energy in place of more mundane forces. Assuming the bonds are even actual covalent bonds… Anyway, enough of the nerd corrections. TL;DR/DC;DR: molecular bonds destabilizing should be replaced with “thoughtshape destabilizing”. Probably. I’m not a mage, so maybe it’s magic ******** and you said what you mean. Semantics at this point. And remember, if a reader ever questions your magic logic always respond with “A wizard didit.”
Anotherb Account
+1, agreed entirely. And a diverse and awesome set of animal friends across both
Rick
Ace, I don't know how you can continue writing two stories of such high quality at the same time, but if you write them, I'll read them!
Ace_the_owl
Always a pleasure! Thanks so much for reading this far, it's definitely been a huge booster for writing it :)
Anotherb Account
When you push off reading the new chapter and right as you finish it, ACE publishes another. Gamble delight!
