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Business Casual | Page 23 | Process
🕑 Added 2019-07-15 23:57:51 +0000 UTCFor the last couple of pages there have been small elements that I've gone back and forth on, and for this page it was Vanessa's eyebrows on the last panel. Both expressions I like, but ultimately decided on an incredulous look. But even now, I'm unsure... at least it's an easy thing to change!
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Meesh
Sometimes the draft is loose! I think that helps, as it's easy to become attached to a pose if you put more time into it... and heartbreaking if you have to scrap it for something else. And you hit the nail on the head regarding that small panel-- her whipping her face up to the left broke up the flow.
Ponpokora
Your initial draft looks a lot looser for this page (still came out awesome! ^^) Did you decide to change the tiny panel near the bottom to give the page a more natural flow? That comic tutorial you posted some time ago did mention keeping characters generally on the same side for consistency, I can kinda see if you thought a sudden shift to profile view then back would come across as abrupt
