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Business Casual | Page 28 | Process
🕑 Added 2019-10-07 02:34:59 +0000 UTCThat first panel was one of the most challenging scenes to prepare, which shows how out of practice I am with perspective scenes. Also, it's just a lot of people to fit in one scene. I'm happy with how it turned out, but I'm also glad it's over with!
I had an idea for an alternate ending to the comic where it turns out a simple grope of one's buttcheek is grounds for sexual harassment at this workplace. Dropping a load in a woman's pussy is just practical, but groping?? Buddy, that's a step too far.
Comments
Ponpokora
Good balancing of characterization and pacing, both good rework choices! (I swear I'm not biased just cause of her glorious butt)
Meesh
I liked the original look for her in panel 2, but felt like it pushed her embarrassment a little too much. Coupled with her body language of covering up, it felt too harsh for her. And that was a transition into the next day in the first draft, but it felt a little too abrupt; the scene needed more easing out. I thought a butt grope a good compromise. :)
Ponpokora
Always interesting to see how you changed and developed pages from your sketches!! I see you were originally gonna go with Vanessa looking down embarrassed into an establishing shot of what I'm guessing was a sunset. But instead you went with her booty (and bless you for that) and a firm squeeze of Luis reassuring her that it's all casual fun there but still a business environment~ Dare I say...business casual? ....I apologize in advance
