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Update: Alex & Jill's College Journey - Chapter 10, 11, more?
🕑 Added 2023-09-19 23:08:54 +0000 UTCI've been sitting on this a little bit and didn't want to fill the inbox with noise. However, I think I have enough to tell that I won't be wasting time.
Since it might be spoilery - I'll separate out that bit before later.
So - as I was writing the story to fit the outline that I took the time to make ... the first 4 bullet points of my outline (of about 20) went and ballooned into ~1,500 words so far... and I haven't even reached the halfway point of what needs to get covered. I think we have some more chapters if I'm to keep things packed together!
What I intended to do was to take to heart the suggestion to pay attention and use vivid writing and add a short little Jill is blindfolded scene for fun. Well... that's the 1,500 word section so far.
I also realized that Jill so far has been a flat character in that we know very little about her, so I intend to at least sit in her head a bit and try to give a sense of who she is and what does she think about her cute little girlfriend who is still cute and little - just not so little in others.
Getting a little more spoilery beyond here, now!
Ultimately - I intend that Alex will grow as a character and there will be something going on with Alex + Jill + Sammy. I haven't entirely worked it out - but I'm thinking that she's got a saucy side that's coming about. After all, one way that Alex could accept her body is to relish in the sensations she's experiencing.
I think my plan is to get the blindfold scene and what surrounds it resolved and call that Chapter 10.
Then I think I'll make some more detached story content - being invested in characters means their story is better - but takes a bit more time to make sure I don't screw it up...
Then we have test results call back and some choices for Alex and Jill to make.
AND I'm going to try to put out some more fun images tonight. :) It's been a little sparse here a while.
