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Alien Abduction Chapter 1 (1/3)
🕑 Added 2024-06-01 06:46:40 +0000 UTCSorry to keep you all waiting once again. Updating the first chapter of Alien Abduction with more setup for a better story before getting it translated into Japanese in preparation for Summer Comiket.
I'm not reworking the entire thing but updating it with more event and characters. Showing the event before and after the abduction, also changing dialogues to match the story direction. I want this to feel like a proper story.
In this part we get more chance to see what Hideki was like as a guy before his inevitable transformation into a girl. What do you think now that we learn a little more about him?
I'd love to hear your thoughts and feedback in the comment section. I always greatly appreciate your continued patience and support, thank you!
PS: With the scene taking place on a camping trip, I tried watching some Yuru Camp anime to get inspiration and now I want to try camping too!
Comments
Arisa
I was thinking of American Psycho Patrick Batement while drawing that scene.
Arisa
Yeah there is.
Arisane (Twicetale)
Haha I see it. I was kinda reminded of Yoshikage Kira a bit.
Corey Crossen
Aoki giving Patrick Bateman in the first few pages is so good
Todd Crim
This looks great and being able to see how theses characters were before everything gives us an understanding of what they are feeling and thinking at moments. It also allows for us to see how there characters grow and mature over the course of the story
道民 李
any page for the upcoming forced mind control by the alien machine? thats so arousing
M4C1
Just deleted my previous comment. It was messy and bothered me, but I was too tired to fix it. Anyway, I like the idea of fleshing out the story a bit more. When the images finish loading, I'll go through them and then call it a night. Thanks for the update and take care.
Omega1918
I think is interesting is that even before aoki’s transformation he still wants to prove himself as manly. I am looking forward to the after scenarios to contrast the set up.
Arisane (Twicetale)
That shouldn't be the case? If youre confused by the first page its meant to be like the opening of a horror movie where it shows the aliens taking someone earlier. We considered having a missing sign for the two young people taken at the bus station, but it just didnt work out that way. Page one takes place weeks before the rest of the comic.
Cryofly
I like the idea of fleshing out the story. I'm curious what you do with the new characters moving forward too.
Arisane (Twicetale)
Turned out good. I'm excited to see more knowing that's next.
MemoMii
I love this! A few day ago someone sucker punched me and I didn't fight back and called the cops, like Ishida did in the OG first chapter. Only, I didn't get abducted by aliens. RIP
toby
looking good but... can you put a little number on the page I think some are out of order thanks
Bluemoon_445
I already really like AA, but you updating the prequel story like this makes it even more exciting, can't waittttt 🫶
Arisa
Yes.
Lowe K. Lyesmith
Is a continuation for this series planned then? Fleshing out past issues seems like a preparation for further issues.
Arisa
Thanks! I want to keep getting better.
ルナシバ
Oh, I apologize! I’m sure you will be able to be accepted! Absolute Good luck to you! 😊
Arisa
Still waiting to see if I will actually get in.
Mustafa
damn cute stuff, ur style has evolved so much!
ルナシバ
Congratulations on Summer Comiket! Best of luck for everything! Wish you the best!
