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Alien Abduction Chapter 1 (3/3)
🕑 Added 2024-07-13 09:14:07 +0000 UTCThank you for your patience! Here's part 3/3. A new scene was added to the aftermath of the original 1st chapter of Alien Abduction to show how the characters got home after being released by the Aliens.
Do the characters feel a bit more developed yet?
I would love to hear your thoughts please let me know in the comments or on the Discord server. I always greatly appreciate your continued patience and support, thank you!
Comments
Val Salia
Honestly, sex scenes are nice, but I've always felt that the exploration of one's new self and identity, feelings, etc after a transformation are by far the best parts of a TG/TF story! This 1/3rd of the story was definitely my fave.
Zanbato
If those Aliens can really change anything around me, then ill gladly let them turn me into a girl. ππ
Arisa
Yes, I usually do that on Dropbox. On here I just put all the pages of each part together in the same post.
Mon Coeur
Your art is just so incredible, and I have really fallen for the characters so I am loving giving them more depth. I do have a question. Will the comic all be bundled into one file once it is fully completed?
Todd Crim
This is a great addition to the collection I canβt wait for the continuation
Omega1918
I love the balance you have between sections that explore TSF specific themes, and sex scenes that are super hot. What I like most about Hitomi is the swing between trying to retain her identity as a man and then everything in her new life reinforcing that she is super feminine. As far as criticism I have almost none. Your characters run the spectrum of transformation styles and levels of mental changes so there is always something different each time you start a new story. Keep doing what youβre doing itβs always great stuff.
Rat matt
Goof job love the new ch
Bluemoon_445
Oh I see, hope you two stay healthy, always looking forward to all the stories β€οΈ
Jesse Nell
Which one will be colored next?
kendo44
Great work! The additional backstory really helps give depth to the motivations and mental changes. Makes you much more invested in the characters.
Arisane (Twicetale)
I don't know. We still have so many things that need to be colored.
Bluemoon_445
Wow, niceee, that sounds amazing π₯° I can't wait to see the new version π₯ And does it mean that from now until the end of the year there will be more development around AA? π«Ά
Yue See1e
more! more!! more!!!
Arisane (Twicetale)
We'll be doing a big remake of part 2 as well and probably a much more minor update to 3 and then can finally move forward! :') There are also some more point issues as well ;)
Bluemoon_445
To me, characters development isn't just a bit, it's a lot π Through this new scene we understand how Hitomi's life has changed. And that makes the story more attractive and engaging β€οΈ I really enjoyed seeing chapter 1 in this perfect version and also curious when will we see part 4? βΊοΈ
Arisane (Twicetale)
Those are just normal typoes that get fixed usually a day or two after release. And actually what you're saying is wrong. It should be "but why did the aliens bother sending everyone a text?" I am a native english speaker and usually there are a few corrections made after it comes out. I only notice later, because it can be hard to notice things when you're working on so many pages all at once. There is already a list of tweaks in our discord chat that just haven't been pushed through since arisane is in bed.
Lowe K. Lyesmith
Lots of word - endings are missing. Like, the words in general are correct, but they're not all written out correctly. For example "But why the alien bother sending everyone a text" - > "but why do the aliens bother sending everyone a text" Little things, not big mistakes. Stuff that a native speaker would point out.
Arisane (Twicetale)
Can you explain how its not that good english?
Lowe K. Lyesmith
Like always very good art and really not that good English.
Arisane (Twicetale)
Nice
